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Title: Chapter 13

Donavan seems like a really cool cat and if she's happy with him then I'm ok with that. I'll help the cowboy heal his heart.

Author's Response: The cowboy better get his act together soon... right?

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/08/09 02:29 am

Title: Chapter 13

That did'nt go the way that I expected it to. Matt's coming off as weak and fickle. I can understand being alittle frighten about his future and his interracial relationship would affect it, but he totally caved. Dosen't say much for his ten year relationship with Taylor.
So Donovan is white too? Couldn't tell from the banner. Don't really have a feel for him a this point. Will have to wait and see.
The story is alittle different from what I expected after reading the summary, but it is interesting. Looking forward to seeing what direction you will take and who gets the girl.

Author's Response: Right, but I don't think he's fickle.  I think he is insecure.  I'm working on trying to make him better. 

Reviewer: Keta1316 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/08/09 02:22 am

Title: Chapter 13

I like this update and I like Donovan.  I wish him the best of luck but I don't think that he has a snowball chance tof getting with her because she is still stcuk on doofus.  But hey he can try and try and try.  Thanks

Author's Response: eventually he's gonna get tired of trying right?

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/09 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 13

I actually like Donovan in this update...still don't want him with Taylor...not getting the romantic vibes from them yet...he wants her...that's a given...the question is...does she want him in the same way...I see her perhaps trying with him...but darn it all to hell...Matt still has her heart...

Taylor just got a double whammy...first...she finds out the real reason why Matt dumped her...then to top it all off...she now realizes she isn't as 'over him' as she had hoped she was...she's in a real dilemma...can she finally say goodbye to the past without regret and embrace the future with someone new...are is her heart tied irrevocably to the past...time will tell...

Very interesting update...more, more please!!!



Author's Response: I like Donovan too.  (I keep hearing Cena's voice) I really like both guys.  Both have endearing qualities.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/09 01:44 am

Title: Chapter 13

Oh Donovan you do my heart good he is truly good people but not for Tay I thought so at first but now I see that her heart still truly lies with Matt even though he is a dickhead and should have told Tay from jump street why he was breaking it off and not let her think it was her...that she was not good enough or that he had found someone else that was just plan ole wrong and he said he loved her but apparently not enough to tell her the truth.  Yes, I want Tay to take Matt back but like I said I want his ass to have to work really really hard for her back.  Donovan told her that there was still racism to this day regarding Middle Class America but why could Matt tell her that and they work it out together.  Yes, Matt was young and dumb like he said but hello Donovan is 2 years older then what he was when he broke Tay's heart and he has better sense then Matt possessed.

Great update waiting for more.

Thanks



Author's Response: two years a difference makes, plus he went off to the military. 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/09 12:36 am

Title: Chapter 12

Again Donovan 2 Matt 0...It's not looking to good for Matt...

I ain't even mad @ Tay but I do hope she does not sleep with Donovan b/c it would be for the wrong reasons.  It would be to wipe the pain away of Matt's confession/explantion.

Oh please update again soon. 



Author's Response: you know our girl is saving herself for one man...

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/09 12:22 am

Title: Chapter 11

Well it looks like we know whom Taylor has sparks for and favors and it's still Matt even though Donovan got 1 point here with the dance and the opprotunity to tell her how he feels.

I agree with her he is a bit young and Taylor and Matt has history I just want his ass to have to work hard and I do mean hard to win her favor and love back.

If it turns out that Taylor does not pick Donovan I would love to see a story featuring him with his true love he is a really good guy and I like him but he just may not be for Tay. 

Hint Hint ;-)



Author's Response: i hear you loud and clear

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Umm..again...why is everyone hatin' on Donovan? I'm reading trying to find where he's been shady at in word or deed and I just dont see it. Donovan knows ABSOLUTELY NOTHING about Taylor and Matt's history, nor is he taking advantage of her. From his point of view--and at the time the TRUTH-- he's trying to date a SINGLE woman currently not in a committed relationship. She has never once told him or showed him for that matter, that his advances werent welcome. It would be different if she told him and he then tried to force the issue, but that's hardly the case. She's told him nothing thus far, so he's operating on the assumption that she is free emotionally to pursue a relationship with him if she wishes. 

As far as Donovan knows with Matt, if he like her also, then may the best man win. And like any man, he's trying to make sure that he's the best man.



Author's Response: YAY!  You get it.  Donovan hasn't done anything, in my opinion!  I like Donovan.  He's smooth. 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 10:09 pm

Title: Characters

I don't know about anyone else but Donovan is coming across as SMARMY (at least to me!!!)

I am still on TEAM MATT!!!!

Glad he told her and I agree with another poster that there is still more that needs to be said but Donovan is a SNAKE! Moving in on Taylor when she is vulnerable and upset is the lowest of the low...

Hope she doesn't fall for it...

I am really LOVING this story... I hope Matt and Taylor finally get it together...

UPDATE SOON!



Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm glad you are still enjoying it.

Reviewer: spanishfly69 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 09:04 pm

Title: Chapter 12

No...Donovan...go away.  Leave her to her silence.   Well it had to be said.  Glad it was done.  Now he can walk or run knowing that he at least took the time to apologize and explain what he wanted.  It's up to her to make the decision.

Author's Response: SHe's thinking hard...

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 08:47 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Really good...keeping score!  They were all coordinated too! LOL!

Author's Response: it just worked out that way!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 08:37 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Well at least Matt told her the truth of how he dropped her for fame and fortune.  Glad that she walked away from him but to bad she couldn't have punched him the nose.  Thanks

Author's Response: No violence here... :)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 02:38 pm

Title: Chapter 11

I am hoping that Donovan will win but I am sure that in the end Matt will prevail.  Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 02:28 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter!

I'm glaad that they finally talked. There is more to be said though.

Honestly, Matt didn't really think Taylor would simply shrug, accept his explanation, and forgive him... move on with him?

He basically admitted that he thought his career was more important than her and six weeks before they married he le a stranger convince him that he couldn't have a Black wife?? That would have been in 2001 not 1961 for heaven's sake.

Also, Donovan doesn't win any rave reviews with me either. He's swooping in on Taylor when she's hurt and vulnerable. That's hardly a fair move.

Let's see how far he gets...



Author's Response: There is more to be said certainly.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 01:03 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Well,...Taylor had a right to be angry, but I hope she doesn't let that anger cut her off from the man she still loves...the heart loves who it loves...and although Donovan is smart and good looking, Taylor loves Matt.

Looking forward to the next Update.

Nyeesha



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 08:06 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow, well Matt finally dropped the bomb. Now let the fall out begin!!!!

Author's Response: Here we go

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 06:09 am

Title: Chapter 12

He got off easy to me. No way in hell is anyone gonna feel sorry that a deliberate decision that he made like that blew up in his face. I thought him trying to garner sympathy for what he did was rather weak and pathetic. He did it so man up and suck it up!

I will be interested to see how their friends will react when they find out.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 05:59 am

Title: Chapter 10-Seems like you're ready

Well, game is set. She truly wants to move on. But good luck. Her and Matt are so not over.

Author's Response: not by a long shot

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 05:04 am

Title: Characters

Yay! Team Donovan. Punk ass Matt. Sorry but he snoozed he looses.

Author's Response: LMAO

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 12

I dont blame Taylor for being mad, how do forgive someone that wasnt strong enough to with stand the pressure of excepting someone who claim you love because of there skin color. Great update.

Author's Response: its gonna be hard

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 05:00 am

Title: Chapter 9- My business or your business?

Well alrighty then Matt. Come over hear so I can kiss you a good luck! LOL!

Author's Response: he is charming as hell isnt he

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 04:49 am

Title: Chapter 12

Humm that was a sorry A* excuse,,and sh ei sright..he knew her her whole life and let career and a racist agent tell him she was not good enough..she should be furious!!

There are a few pluses..he never dated or married anyone else..he pined away for her and he sent her flowers and cards but DAMN..he let his career ruin their life together..sad sad sad !!

Now Donovan all up in the grip...he is moving in on her while she is vulnerable..I really dont like him..I know it may not be fair but I just don't like him!!

We will see what happens from here.... 

 



Author's Response: There will be a HEA one way or another

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

I'm real glad that Matt is making his interest known. But charging her like a bull...nah nah!

Author's Response: right calm down...lol

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 04:42 am

Title: Chapter 12

What did matthew expect her to run in his arms and say yes i understand let be together. I feel for her for years you wonder what happen and then to find out the truth hurts but she need to know. i like donovan there for her but dont wanted him to get his heart broken. thanks for the updated .

Author's Response:

So now she knows...

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 04:40 am

Title: Chapter 12

I hope Taylor doesn't do anything with Donovan that she might live to regret...

And this is not because I don't like Donovan...it's more like I'm indifferent to him...before Matt told her the truth...Taylor was definitely feeling Matt...and not Donovan...the unbidden spark is there with Matt...but unfortunately...not Donovan...Matt is being unreasonable if he thinks she should just forgive and forget...I know I'd have a hard time dealing with the reason he broke my heart...he wants Taylor back...but in his haste...he's uncovered an old wound that has been festering for years...she needs times to absorb what he told her and she's hurt and justifiably so...at this point...if Donovan does anything with her...it would seem as if he's taking advantage of her in her vulnerable state...and the elephant in the room will still have to be dealt with...Taylor is not finished with Matt...he still hold a power over her heart...and until she works that out...the baggage she carries from that will serve to sabotage any new relationship she starts...

Great update...looking forward to more...



Author's Response: There will be another update this week.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 04:34 am

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