This whole cast is SEXY AS HELL! 10!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/11/11 02:36 am
Don't fight it girl.....Just fall!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/10/11 02:07 am
Damn that is a good looking cast of characters!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/10/11 01:55 am
loved it
Author's Response:
thank you. this was my baby.. : a work of true love...
Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]Date: 14/06/11 06:29 am
Thank you for such a wonderful story. I'm so glad Matt came to his senses, and didn't give up on the love of his life. So funny that he had 5 girls instead of the 5 boys that he wanted, can just imagine him with his shotgun to fend off all the men who will be after his girls lol.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I enjoyed writing that one a lot.
Date: 20/01/11 10:18 pm
WHOA!!! You came with the DRAMA on this chapter!!! Jeezus!!
Author's Response:
Thanks lady.
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 02/01/11 09:31 am
this girl is bad at her job, good pr don't handle a situation like that. anyways this is a good story, you over exaggerates alot, but with help from a good editor, this story could probably be published
Author's Response: Tsykes, thank you for reading my work, I really appreciate it. It's fiction which is why some of it is overexaggerated. It's not meant to be realistic. I haven't had my work edited for publishing. I just write for enjoyment and the stories that live in my head. But I do appreciate your reading my work.
Date: 05/08/10 12:38 am
that was awesome!! well done lady for your first fic!! girl you should be PROUD!!
wow the Makensie ladies will have their own stories!?!? i can't WAIT for those!! Those are gonna be awesome! ha, I KNEW Matt was going to have five girls I knew knew knew it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/07/10 07:11 am
I am just loving your stories. I love the series that you are doing. And Iwill continue to read every last one of them.
Loved conquered all with Taylor and Matt. I am glad he came to his senses and went after her. He made a hugh mistake by giving her up. He had to work hard to get her back.But I knew that love would conquer all when he announced his mistake and his love for her in front of millions.
Again love this story and the other stories I am trying to catch up on.
THANK YOU!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for enjoying this story. It's my baby. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Reviewer: keisha2 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/04/10 02:53 pm
Waited for the end to review. This was really great. I finally got the happy ending I've been waiting for complete with a wedding and babies!!!!!! The characters were very clear, you knew where they were coming from, you got an insight into the world of sports agents which I enjoyed since I've been a Saints fan for about ten years. And you learned something funny; I didn't know Oprah had cold hands, you know what they saw cold hands warm heart. Loved the story and can't wait to see what the girls get up too. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and enjoying it. It was my most favorite story by far...
Date: 24/04/10 11:12 pm
I loved this story so much, I had to read it again.
Author's Response: It's my all time favorite. I'd carried that story in my heart, mind and soul for 15 years. Some of it is a true story, so it resonated with me and I love my Matthew... :)
Date: 31/03/10 06:36 am
Just finished - a great read, well written and love the characters and well chosen cast! Looking forward to read more of your works!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and enjoying. It was my first and my favorite story...
Date: 28/03/10 04:25 pm
i really enjoyed this story and thanks for writing it.
Author's Response: Thanks. I enjoyed this story too!
Date: 01/01/10 05:22 am
I cannot believe I missed the end of this story! I loved it and am excited tos ee that all of the girls get their own stories!!
And I will be right here to read all of them!! LOL
Author's Response: Thank you lady. I'm hoping to get all of this done before the start of the new year. Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 01:11 am
Beautiful ending. He had five daughters loved it. I look forwardto reading all the sequels. Thank you for a wonderful story
Author's Response: Thank you Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/09 01:28 am
I loved this story and look forward to reading more. Wow, five girls........ Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 04/10/09 07:56 am
Hey D, this was a great story, I loved how Taylor and Matt found love again, and this time its so much stronger, 5 girls, I know Matt isn't going to let them date until they are 30yrs old LOL.
I look forward to the other stories, I hope the next is with Donovan, he was so HOT and SWEET, he needs his own lady love,
Again this story gets 2 Thumbs Up.
Author's Response: thanks... i'm already working on donovan Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 02:58 am
Well I feel bad that at least one little boy didn't come out of the brood...lol.
That was a wonderful, thought provoking story. You had me totally engaged from start to finish. What more could I, as a reader, ask. Well done!
Author's Response:
I started to give him one son, but I felt like he still needed to pay for his actions and as the writer.. I'm giving him five girls! LOL
I'm glad I kep your attention all this time.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 03/10/09 04:58 am
Looking forward to it. Thanks for the wonderful story. It's been a blast. Twin girls, hugh. Poor Matt...what's he going to do with all of those girls--
Author's Response: Girl, no idea, but I can't wait. Gonna get started on Donovan's story next.
Date: 03/10/09 04:09 am
Thanks for a great read. Looking forward to the sequels.
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 03/10/09 02:57 am
I loved it, D!!!!
Glad Miguel and Eduardo got what was coming to them...and they won't be able to hurt anyone else...
Twins...and later they're going to have three other girls...I can't wait to read about Matt playing big daddy...
Matt's dad is a straight-up fool, lol...I'm so happy for Matt and Taylor...and he got the chance to finally right the wrong he'd done in his youth and they get their happily-ever-after afterall...
This story was great...after you finish the series for the MacKenzie girls...would you consider telling a story where Donovan finds the woman of his dreams...
Thanks again for sharing...I can't wait for your next story...consider me a fan of your work...
Author's Response: I'm doing Donovan next. McKenzie girls get to grow up a little bit... Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 02:51 am
I lurvsss HEA..so much and this is the sweetest!
I really like that after everything..these two were able to make it work and that they had such a wonderful ending..een though it almost never happened!! Good job sweetie!!
Cannot wait for the series!!
Author's Response: Thanks Nene! Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 02:46 am
absolutely loved this story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/10/09 02:38 am
Great! It was a ride, but I enjoyed it. Thanks
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 03/10/09 02:14 am
What a great story! I'm looking forward to reading the other stories in the series.
Author's Response:
thank you
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 01:50 am