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Title: Chapter 9- My business or your business?

That bouncing of the leg thing is something I do all the time. Great update!!

Author's Response: Me too... it's a habit! 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/09 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 9- My business or your business?

lol, Matt's reactions are funny. Donovan is smooth, real smooth.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/09 12:05 am

Title: Chapter 9- My business or your business?

You're so evil, woman...and I love it...poor Matt...hehehe...but he's still my boo...he just needs to suffer a little more for what he did...he's slowly being eaten up alive with jealousy and regret and it's all his own fault...oh Matt...in the words of Salt n Pepa...'if she wants to take guy home with her tonight...it's none of yo' bizness'...did he really think that Taylor would be lying down somewhere curled up in a fetal position and not enjoying the attention of other men...that she'd welcome him back with open arms in warped speed because he deigned he made a mistake and that he wants her again...how can she trust that he won't change his mind again...I know Taylor still loves her boo...but keep him honest and working for it, girl...you're a gem of a girl and it's time he learns to appreciate you for the remarkable woman that you are...love this story...please update SOON...

Author's Response: Update will be coming later today.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/09 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 9- My business or your business?

Donovan is already putting in a bid to be a part of Taylor's personal life. The man is smooth! Add the fact that he will be staying with them in New York, and Matt has a real fight on his hands. Is Donovan's room on the same floor as hers? If so, Matt is going to be pissed.

Author's Response: Hmmm.. get outta my head woman... LOL

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 9- My business or your business?

I can't say that I'm happy with Taylor keep pushing Matthew off but I can't blame her either. I would be doing the exact same thing. I just wish Matthew wasn't sooo obvious. He should be keeping her guessing, maybe go out with someone to make her a little jealous. Then he would know Taylor is still feeling him. Maybe not....

Great update! I still don't like Donovan(smiles).



Author's Response: Great ideas... I'm going to incorporate some the next couple of chapters.

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 11:37 pm

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

Poor Matthew. He's going to have to work a little harder  to get back to where they were before. Loved the update!!I have to say I like Donovan but not for her.

Author's Response: Thanks... keep reading

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 11:31 pm

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

Ha! Pish pa is right. Deal with it Matty boy!!

Oh, how devilish of you to make him suffer like this. Donovan is a trip! And was JC hitting all of Matt's sore spots, or what? That was a great reality check for him.

Matt needs to EARN back everything he threw away... her friendship, trust, love, and belief in him. As someone else mentioned, if this is the woman he so loves and wants a life with, her being black should have been dealt with before they decided o get married.

Yup. They need to stay apart a while longer. Perhaps he should get down to having a serious talk with her with lots of humble apologizing instead of the possessive caveman shit he's pulling confronting her.

I believe she managed her own life, protected her own virture quite well for eight years after he dumped her. She does not need that crap from him.

You are doing great developing the two main characters. I can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response: Will he be able to Earn it back... It's been eight years...

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 10:37 am

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

Why did the song "Single Ladies" keep playing in my head. He had a chance to put a ring on it, but he chose to let her go. 

Author's Response: Ha....

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 05:31 am

Title: Chapter 7- We finally meet

I knew this was going to happen. But Matt needs to be patient. Taylor is a VERY intelligent woman and I get the feeling that she knows exactly what she's doing.

Author's Response: It's about to get better....

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 05:21 am

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

Matt Matt Matt...that is no way to behave to teh girl you don't because of your career!!

I think Matt deserves to be a little jealous and Taylor is doing him just right!!

She is too smart to fall for likes of Donovan, plus she really does still llove Matt but he needs to regain her trust and love..he gets no free pass after his behavior.

I hope he understands jealousy is only so cute..he needs to step up and prove to her he is truley sorry and ready to love and treat her the way he failed to do before!!

Love this little story sweetie..good job!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I hope you guys like the future updates

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 01:20 am

Title: Chapter 7- We finally meet

I think Ms. Taylor is playing Mr.Matt and Donovan..lol!

She is far from naive. Whatever it takes within reason to get the cntract..is my girl mantra!! lol

Matt is the one freaking out..rotfl..good for him!! He walked away from her not vice versa so he can stand to suffer a little!!

Donovan comes across as a want a be smooth operator but my girl has his number!!!

I cannot wait for more sweetie!! Good job!



Author's Response: Thanks so much... I'm working on some good stuff.  I think you guys will be pleasantly surprised.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 01:03 am

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

I love this story it is great.  Goodie Goodie for Matt is ass so deserves it.  She should make his ass work and work hard and long to win her love and affection back.  I understand he was young and dumb when he let Tay go but that was his fault he should not have let others well one in this cause influence breaking Tay's heart.

I can't wait til you update again to see what happens next.  Thanks.



Author's Response: Thanks so much.  I'm really enjoying writing this.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 12:44 am

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

Nice story... I like it a lot.

Well, Taylor needs to be careful around Donovan, because he wants more than she is willing to give.

 Matthew...needs help.



Author's Response: I think you guys will like the next couple of updates

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

i'm getting a sick satisfaction that his plans aren't working quite yet.

Author's Response: I think a lot of people are.. LOL

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 12:15 am

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

Loved the updates! Please keep them coming! Matt don't have no business getting all hot up under the collar. Taylor aint his girl yet. Donovan also needs to slow his roll, geez! They just met!

Author's Response: As you can see, I relly like agressive men.  I'm going to temper some of Donovan's excitement down... Matt is not a happy camper right now.

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 12:11 am

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

Oh man!  I love this!  Donovan is putting it out there what he wants.  Taylor thinks she can handle Donovan, that is why she gives him her cheek and emphasizes their "working" relationship.  LOL.  Matt is no fool...this time.  He knows what Donovan wants...it is the same thing Matt wants....Taylor. LOL.  Now that the shoe is on the other foot, Matt might see how Taylor felt when he broker her heart.  Then I would like to see Matt fight for his woman...Go Matt!  This story is REALLY beginning to HEAT up...I LOVE IT!!  I can't wait to see more.  Please Update SOON.   

Author's Response: I appreciate your input... I will be updating soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 12:09 am

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

That was bomb. Payback can be a bitch.

Author's Response: Thanks...

Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 12:05 am

Title: Chapter 8- How does it feel?

I love that you introduced the Donovan character in this story...but IMHO...he came off a bit too forward with Taylor...she's his newly signed agent and I really don't think business and pleasure should blur under these circumstances...also...she's just not feeling him like he's feeling her...though that could change...could be interesting...and present a conflict of interest as far as her being his agent...

Glad JC talked some sense into Matt...if he would have set it off in the club...he would have not only embarrassed Taylor and himself and possibly caused the firm to lose Donovan's business...he would have pushed her even further away...the caveman tactics will not help in this situation at all...neither will being hostile to her and acting like a jealous butthead endear him to her...he has to keep reminding himself that she isn't 'his' anymore...he forfeited that right to think of her that way when he walked away from her...Matt needs to take it slow...and develop a friendly relationship with Taylor first...slowly remind her of the reasons why she fell in love with him in the first place...he also needs to stop trying to manipulate situations in order to break down her defenses...he put those walls there...and he has to be smart if he wants them to crumble...Taylor also believe that Matt doesn't want her...he better disspell that notion quickly...

I'm really loving this story and I got so excited when you put up two updates in one day...I'm trying to be patient with the updates...but this one is getting very interesting...looking forward to more soon...keep up the good work...



Author's Response: I'm going to slow Donovan a little bit... I like agressive guys and this is coming out in my writing. I may have another update today.  My sister and I are collaborating a little bit on this next part.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 7- We finally meet

Hahahaha...Matt is jealous...feeling like all kinds of an idiot...knowing that other men want what he so foolishly threw away...feel a bit sorry for him...but not really...you snooze...you lose, buddy...looks like Donovan might be some stiff competition for Taylor's affections...though I believe she's oblivious to Donovan's flirtations right now...wonder how Matt handles seeing 'his' woman out with another attractive man...can't wait to read more...off to the next chapter...

Author's Response: LOL... i love your reviews... hope you're still enjoying it.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 7- We finally meet

Wow, that was great. Donovan is a bit sneaky , flirting with Taylor but I hope he signs. Poor Matt is gonna get a run for his money if Donvan signs. Its sure gonna be some drama.

Author's Response: Strap on, its about to be a bit of a bumpy ride....

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 09:06 pm

Title: Chapter 7- We finally meet

I love it , great job . Keep posting.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading...

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 07:52 pm

Title: Chapter 7- We finally meet

I wanted to wait until I got to the last chapter before I commented. Woo-wee! This is getting good! Matt's got competition, or at least, that's how he sees it.

A very good start to a compelling story. I'm a huge fan of these types of storylines. 

I love how Taylor knew what Matt's reflex leg-shake was. It's always great to see how two people are trying to play cool and above it all when they know each other so well and know exactly what buttons to push. Great for writing chemistry, especially when you include characters such as Donovan who aren't your run-of-the-mill distracting hottie. There's something about him. I hope he's to show more complexity in future chapters which will make even Matt question whether Taylor shouldn't choose him instead. LOL!

I hope you continue to update frequently. I'm really enjoying this story.



Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm having fun writing this.... I hope you guys are enjoying the read.

Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 07:23 pm

Title: Chapter 7- We finally meet

mwuhahahaha competition and said competition isn't no dummy. lol

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 06:58 pm

Title: Chapter 7- We finally meet

I loved this chapter. She's single why can't she flirt, after all he saw to that years ago. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it...Ya'll said he'sgotta work, so here we go....

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 06:53 pm

Title: Chapter 7- We finally meet

Go Taylor girl!  Don't let Matt dictate to you!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading it

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Date: 04/08/09 06:51 pm

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