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Title: Chapter 24

This was a lovely story.  Congratulations on your first story!!!!  Ya done good!

Nyeesha



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 01:39 am

Title: Chapter 24

This has been an outstanding story. I loved all the twist and turns and so glad dispite it. Matt and Taylor found there way back together. Look forward to reading  about the girls.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 01:32 am

Title: Chapter 24

ooo i can't wait to the next story girl i know it going to be good as this one.  is D man going to be in the next story finding love i hope so. like the names of the daughters and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me and Donovan is up next...

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 12:03 am

Title: Characters

Well sista since it will keep you busy it will definitely be keeping me busy too by reading them and I am excited and can't wait.  Thanks :D

Author's Response: LOL... thanks... I'm going to get started this weekend on Donovan!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/09 11:57 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Yippy!!!! Married with twins and 3 more to go.  I loved this update. Five girls huh....Poor Matt he will be on the front porch with shotgun many times.  I love Miguel and Eduardo's sentences. 

I can't wait for the series and I hope out of those series one is of Donvan and the love of his life and I wouldn't mind seeing big bro fall on his ass in love too with his cocky self...hint hint ;) *wink*.

This has been a wonderfl story and I am happy that you shared it with us.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

I'm going to be a writing fool, but heres my plan:

Each daughter gets her own story

Donovan gets a story

Brad gets a story

Dani from the office gets a story...

Right there thats 8... should keep me buys till end of the year.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/10/09 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 23

I'm glad that Miquel is going to pay for his crimes.

Taylor and Matt were great with Oprah.... an YEAH to the baby on the way.

Can't wait for the wedding.



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 08:11 am

Title: Chapter 23

It is not unusual for a busy, overtaxed woman that works out ferociously to miss her cycle for three months.

I do find it interesting that men pay more attention to it than women!

LMAO...love it!

I'm going to miss this.

Author's Response: You won't have to miss it for long... They will be back in a fast forward... Don't want to spoil the plot for the next series, but trust and believe they will be back!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 23

wow so she carry his baby it be so fun if it was twins lol. glad they together and having baby i first didnt' like matthew but he grew on me lol. love the story girl and hope you do another one on the site and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks ma'am.  I will be doing some more stories.  Gotta find Donovan a woman! 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 05:28 am

Title: Chapter 23

Thanks for a great update so they made it to Oprahs show after all.  I am surprised that she didn't realize that she was pregnant.  I guess with all of the htings going on in their lives she didn't catch on.  At least he is very observant.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks, I know that happens.  It did to me.  LOL, Yeah, they had to hit Oprah! 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 23

It's cute that he knew before she did, but unless you're really irregular you notice if your friend doesn't visit in a while.

Author's Response: True.  I have a 13 year old because I didn't realize it....

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 04:15 am

Title: Chapter 23

Yay!!! Taylor and Matt are going to have a baby!!!

Poor Taylor...she still hasn't put one and one together and made three...guess with all the excitement of Matt being shot and the whole deal with Miguel Vargas and Angela and Keith's wedding...it totally slipped her mind...are those wedding bells I'm hearing chiming in the distance...the Oprah interview was cute...and Matt left no doubt how much he loves his Princess...can't wait to read what's next for these two...love this story...



Author's Response: Yep... things are moving right along for this couple

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 03:55 am

Title: Chapter 23

Loved the update. Wow, Taylor preggers???? I'm so loving this.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 03:38 am

Title: Chapter 23

How busy are you that you froget you haven't had your period but you man is paying closer attention than you are..lol lol!!

They are cuteness and he better marry his baby momma too...rotfl!!

I loved the interview with Oprah..that was swete and cute!!

This is the sweetest little love story...I cannot believe it almost over!! Great job sweetie...



Author's Response: To be honest Nene, when I was pregnant with my son, I was 16 weeks before I found out...

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 03:16 am

Title: Chapter 23

GREAT CHAPTER!!

I give Matt lots of credit for having a positive, joyous attitude about the baby.  Taylor seems happy and satisfied with him now and ready to move forward.

Hmm... I see another couple strolling down the aisle really, really soon.

Oh, we are fine with one and a half more... two...



Author's Response: Yeah, I hate for this to come to an end but its time....

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 02:35 am

Title: Chapter 23

Loved the last three chapters!! So glad Matt was ok that was a close call.So Taylor is prego huh?  I love this story and I hate to see it come to a end.

Author's Response: Thanks. ALl good things must come to an end. However Taylor and Matt will be back, just in a different role.  I think you guys will like it...

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 02:27 am

Title: Chapter 23

I  hope taylor has a girl so matt will have a little princess to spoil. Miguel and eduardo should have the jail dropped on top of them.



Author's Response: Like the wicked witch huh?  LOL

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 23

Woo Hooo Taylor is with bambino!!!!

Thanks for the update more please.  Thank you



Author's Response: Working on more now...

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 01:47 am

Title: Chapter 23

What a sweet chapter, and what a way to end it. Loved the update.



Author's Response: Thanks... about one and a half more.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/09 01:20 am

Title: Chapter 22

First things first...YAAAY!! He's ok!! lol.

Secondly, Matt in Kick-Ass mode is hot double damn!! Loved his Spidey-sense when it came to Taylor (swoons)

And lastly, have I told you how much I love this story? I probably have but what the hell right?! BTW, I was so absorbed in catching up on this story that I forgot to comment about the loving from a previous chapter... ooh that was some good loving girl (winks). Well done mami!



Author's Response: Thank you for sticking in here with me.  I'm still writing on their ending and all, but they will all be back!

Reviewer: Miele Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/09/09 01:55 pm

Title: Chapter 22

I'm very happy thata Matt pulled through, he wasn't going to leave his Taylor.

I hope they put Miguel and his friend Under the Jail.



Author's Response: Justice will be served.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/09/09 03:31 am

Title: Chapter 22

Thanks for the updates...wow I couldn't believe that  dude was trying to rape her and Matt to the rescue was shot.  Thank goodness he survived.

Author's Response:

Thansk girl, no problem.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/09/09 01:23 pm

Title: Chapter 22

well smart move that he didnt' go to the meeting other wise who know what happen. glad he survie this and he didnt' die.  thanks for updating three chapter enjoy reaind them.

Author's Response: Thanks girl!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 09:39 pm

Title: Chapter 21

oh no matthew been shoot i hope he survie please let him surviev talyor can't lose him agian. glad the sick bastard didn't rap her . thanks for the updated.



Author's Response: NP

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 09:36 pm

Title: Chapter 20

well glad that she happy with her man and that she didnt' get fried from her job either. i hope miguel doens't do any thing crazy that she has something to procter herself. glad to see the story updated and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 09:32 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Awesome update!! I love that Taylor and Matthew are back together there a hot couple. Now as for Miguel I hope he doestn trip and if he does I hope Taylor wont get hurt. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for hanging in there

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 07:29 pm

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