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Looking forward, good story.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/16 02:37 pm

Title: Intro-Cast-Music

I really need an update for this story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/10/12 11:08 pm


I really hope you revisit this story it has so much potential!

Reviewer: urtrippin2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/08/12 02:19 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I just came back and re-read this chapter as you suggested. I really miss this story and hope that the muse comes back to you for us readers. I hope you are well and I look forward to reading your next chapter(s).

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/02/12 09:25 pm


Loved it!! Glad to see this story back.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/10/11 05:29 am


I can't wait, I love this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/10/11 02:10 am

Title: Chapter 8

Toulie was only pretending to be a ho, because she being incognegro for INS.  I still don't like her, she is messing with boy Paulie.  Paulie is fine, I need a drool cup when I look at his picture!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/10/11 02:09 am


so very glad to here of PaSha's return. can't wait!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/10/11 09:05 am

Title: Chapter 8

please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/06/11 12:28 pm

Title: Chapter 3


Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/06/11 11:42 am

Title: Chapter 2


Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/06/11 11:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

love it

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/06/11 11:28 am

Title: Chapter 8

So the skank is not as dumb as everyone think she is. I glad about that. Let me guess the Ivory Tower partners are dirty.

Vic keep it in your pants dude. Family and Business comes first not a skank you won't remember 5 mintues after you bust a nut. 


Ha ha Ha Allen is finally getting his. Sasha thanks for waking up. 

Author's Response:

ROTL.  Allen's power source is dwindling.  Ivory Tower...hmm! 


Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 04:35 am

Title: Chapter 7

Sasha get your head out of your @$$ because you are getting on my last nerve.

Author's Response: LMAO.  Sasha is careful, sometimes too much.  Other times, not enough.  Wake up call is coming!

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 04:00 am

Title: Chapter 8


I hope Sasha hasn't gotten herself into something illegal or dangerous. 

Thank you for the update. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks Blue!  I wish I could tell you the ride is smooth...but I can't.  All I can promise is an update...LOL!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 12:04 pm

Title: Chapter 8

So it would seem that Toukie is a spy of some sort...for the men in the Ivory tower so to speak or is this federal....anyway whoever this McAfee person is was behind having Paulie caught up with immigration.

Vic is a royal fuck-up and like Stan said what was Paulie thinking about when he allowed him to do this.

Vic should be the one being deported.

Loved the updated...missed this story glad to see an update hope to see more.


Author's Response: I apologize for it's delay.  I will say this, she doesn't work for the Ivory tower.  Vic is an ass, like Stan's been saying.  He's not mature enough to handle this type of ruese.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, more to come!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 10:58 am

Title: Chapter 8

THanks for the update Toulie an agent..HMMMM

Author's Response: Your welcome Cherry, yes Agent Toulane, indeed! 

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 11:24 pm

Title: Chapter 8

to cute! i love it...cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks SeoulSinger (love the name) for reading.  More to come.

Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 10:11 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I am so happy to see this story again (doing happpy dance)...


Ok I am starting to worry if our Sasha and the Pavlov will ever get many things working to keep them apart...she doesn' even know the real Pavlov yet..fake Pavlov is just a royal screw up!! I juat hope he hope our guy can repair any damage fake Pavlov has created and work on that relationship with me Sasha Fierce!!

Ok I do despise Allen and everytime our girl gets a chance to stick it to him I love it!!!

Love this story..I just cannot get enough...more more more..great job sweetie!!

Author's Response: Thanks NeNe.  I'm glad to have brought it back.  So glad you guys didn't give up on it.  I really needed a reflection.  More to come.  

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 05:02 pm

Title: Chapter 8

LOL! Allen...thats the problem dumbass, if you take the credit, you might have to prove it. Did he really expect that to work on Sasha? After the way he completely and utterly screwed her over!

Vic is gonna screw this up!

Toukie is an agent?! Wow!


Author's Response: Allen never thought the day would come that Sasha wasn't sniffing his azz!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 07:56 am

Title: Chapter 8

Thank you for  the update. Loved it. Vic did mess up. Hopefully Pavlov represents himself from this point onwards. Wow, Toukie is an undercover customs agent??!!! Still can't believe that one yet.

Author's Response: Yes.  Toukie's been a real convincing slut. But her biggest screw will come in due time.  Vic doesn't quite understand the magnitude of his failure to rise to the occasion.  But he will.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 7

You're killing me!  I can't wait for Sasha to know she was talking to the real Pavlov!

Author's Response: Awe, thanks Jujubee for reading.  I don't mean to kill you.  All will come in due time!  I promise!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/09 06:37 am

Title: Intro-Cast-Music

Very good start.  Please come back and finish.  I can't wait to find out what happens when Sasha finds out the truth.  Oh how the sparks will fly!

Author's Response: Thanks SarahRain22 for reading. 

Reviewer: SarahRain22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/11/09 06:47 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Dear SparkApCider,

I'm writing to apologize for the review I left for your latest chapter of your story. After reading Nene's admonishments this morning in this morning's shoutbox, I began to see my comments in a different light. I wrote that first comment based solely on how I would react not thinking about the certain path you have for character development. It may have seemed like I was telling you what Sasha should have done, in essence, telling you how to write. That was not my intention. You have given the chamber readers a gift by allowing us to read your work on this site and I want to thank you for sharing your talent. Again, I'm sorry if I seemed unappreciative of your work. That was truly not the case.



Author's Response:

OMG!  I hadn't read a single review, as I'm still trying to get around this new computer.  I have no clue that this was a reference to my story or a review from  Thank you for your candor and thank you for reading the story.  It's not always going to be pretty, the characters are often difficult to understand at times because unlike book you don't get to peek ahead and see where the character is going.   One can only hope that the character has growth.  But often times, it's not the case.  And that is ok.

Thank you for reading and supporting the story.  I appreciate all reviews.   


Reviewer: chassylady Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/11/09 12:13 am

Title: Chapter 7

I can't help but think that this game that Vik and Paulie are playing with the duplicity of switching will not blow-up hugely in their or his face especially concerning him getting closer to Sasha and she is already skittish about giving another man a chance with her heart.  Bad move Paulie then on top of that Vik was late for the meeting and Sasha does not like tardiness even though he was present and accounted for and had lunch with her unbeknown to her. 

Huge blow up huge.

Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

Hi Thundakat!

It's been a while, I know.  I'm sure you know that I went to a new computer and had to bring the files over, find the notes, and still get to know the computer.  LMAO.  I'm glad you stuck with me.  I pray and hope there will be few delays.  I want this story finished as well as a few others so I can move on to some new stuff that's bursting at the seams of my folder of ideas!

Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed the update.  It's a tangled web isn't it?  Paulie really is looking at the big picture, but I can tell you that his attraction will make this ruse harder to keep up.  Until next time! 



Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/11/09 03:45 pm

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