Is this going to be Paulie's way of staying in the country. She needs to quit and then they'll see exactly who has been carrying the team! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks bayoumomma for reading. I wish I could tell you, but I do admire your speculations. I will say that you should keep in mind 'never judge a book by it's cover' Things will turn up in the next chapter...a lot! Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/10/09 05:59 pm
oh my goshhhh this is soo good so far!!! update sooon!
Author's Response: Thanks EvaJaye...for reading!
Date: 28/09/09 07:22 am
LOL. I was just reading some of the reviews left by the ladies and, well, whew, my girl Sasha just ain't getting any love right now.
Anonymous wanted to "high five" dickhead Allen for the royal, first class, five star screw over of the year. Thunderkat wanted to reach into the computer and bitch-slap drunk ass Sasha for adding super dumb ass to her list of accomplishments. And someone else was so disgusted she had trouble finishing reading the scene.
First, I second everything the other reviewers wrote. Girlfriend has talent, brains for days, but lacks insight and forethought. And why Allen? From what I've seen so far, the jackass doesn't have a thimble of redeeming value.
As my mama is famous for claiming, Sasha lacks self-esteem!! I hope to see her working on that after she clears herself of the righteous indignant rant she's about to explode into, takes a breath and a break, and regroups.
And two thumbs up for the person who suggested that Toukie is "up to something." To the music of the old Aretha song, "Who's zoomin' who?"... Who's screwing who?" Smugbutt Allen is sooo not in control of that dick-action.
Second but definitely most importantly, this is some brilliant writing to provoke such strong emotions over a character I'm sure we all basically like... will like... ah, hope to like?
Much love to your muse!!! Until next chapter...
Author's Response:
LMAO Blue!
Yes it is very important that Sasha take her licks. She has some underlayers that need a little working on. I'm not going to have her growth sidelined by having the readers feel sorry for her. She is in the shark tank...she wanted in, and she's got to put on the drawers. LOL...Toukie is definitely up to something.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 27/09/09 07:16 pm
Allen is such a freaking loser and Sasha MUST let his ass have it!
Author's Response: Allen can't run water without Sasha...I can't wait until his ass has to pay pennance!
Date: 27/09/09 04:49 am
Looks like Sasha's finally waking up from her Allen fog...good girl...I love Portia...Allen don't know who he's messing with...can't wait for more...
Author's Response:
It took a fall like that plus a slap for added measure. Portia rocks!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 27/09/09 01:44 am
Allen is such a snake...I knew he had something underhanded up his sleeve...plied her with drink and had his way with her...while stealing her research right under her nose...Sasha...I can understand having a moment of weakness when add have horniness, lust, and alcohol in the mix...the cobra is about to strike as we speak...now she's so screwed...she can just about kiss that partnership goodbye...as if she really had a chance considering all those chavinistic arses inhabiting the 'Ivory Tower'...
Did I read correctly that Pavlov aka Paulie is having himself a little immigration problem...possibly in need of an American wife...and he and Sasha are on a collision course...to well...I can't wait to find out...
Author's Response: Hi attheritz...yes Paulie is having a little trouble with immigration. He wants to play it clean...wants no trouble with the Feds. Stan wants him to marry...but he doesn't want draw suspicion and risk sanction. TY for reading. Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/09/09 01:19 am
I'm shaking my head...Sasha's too smart for Allen's bull...he's a d*ck...but Portia has her back...wished she'd take her advice and cut that fool off at the knees before he does it to her...let her do all the hard work...then take all the glory...and he knows the playing field is not level...Sasha, Sasha...come on, wake up and smell the coffee...
Author's Response: Hi...yes Allen is a maggot. Sasha needs a wake up call. And really soon!
[Report This]Date: 27/09/09 12:47 am
Oh, man! The suspense is killing me. I'm not sweating bullets like ole Allen though.
Eagerly awaiting number five!!!!
Author's Response: Posted! I can't wait to read what you think! Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/09/09 03:42 pm
Loved this update.Well worth the delay . Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: You're welcomed Stacie. More to come. The roadway is smooth now...Six cometh!
[Report This]Date: 25/09/09 05:36 pm
Definitely enjoyed it. Can't wait for Allen's fall from grace.
Author's Response: Thanks Jujubee for reading, glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 25/09/09 05:25 pm
Loved it. About time Sasha handled her business.
Author's Response:
Glad! I promised a quick returned update. I hope this keeps me out of the dog house for a while.
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/09/09 06:40 am
Why is the boss ignoring Sasha, does he not know that she's the brains to this power team.
I want her to meet the sexy Paulie, who I can alreay see kicking Allen's ass.
Author's Response: He doesn't care Sweet Pea, he's too busy saving his own ass to care what she's ranting about. It's about the numbers. The team produces. And he doesn't believe she'll leave. Allen's an ass as well. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/09/09 05:52 am
I hope Sasha lays tat piece of trash out,,then slaps herself since she is just as much to blame for being in this situation as sleeze ball!!
I cannot wait to see how she handles this with thesnake ad what happens when she meets Mr. Greek and sexy!!!
Good job sweetie,,,you did a fantastic job and it makes me want more...ldelicious!!
Author's Response: TY nene...glad you enjoyed it. Mr. Greek/Ukranian sexy is having the worst of says... Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/09/09 04:21 am
Actually,....I thought you fell off the face of the earth....I'm glad to see that you are still with the living. LOL. And I sure hope Update #5 is longer than Update #4.
Nyeesha
Author's Response: LOL...no, been circling this chapter for readiness. TY for keeping your stride. Five is coming. Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/09/09 02:37 am
I am a little confused. Sasha had sex with Allen who used her to make partner and she finally realized what he did and now she is in the office trying to get a meeting with their boss who is basically ignoring her. What does the guy at Club Blu with Sasha? Why is Portia so excited?Thanks
Author's Response: I can only answer...Sasha is back at work for pennance--yes.
Portia is happy because she thinks it's about time Allen got his due.
Anything else...you'll have to wait and see.
TY for reading.
[Report This]Date: 25/09/09 01:07 am
LOL! Beautiful. Long overdue. Get his ass Sasha!
Author's Response: ROTF...yes it's been a while since the last chapter. TY for continuing to support.
Date: 24/09/09 11:42 pm
Will Allen get screwed, probably not but I sure hope so! I can't wait until Sasha and Paulie meet!
Author's Response: TY bayoumomma for reading. It's coming. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/09/09 11:13 pm
Shit! Allen is disgusting!! What a little hoe! I mean I thought he was screwing her to make up for his previous screw ups, not screwing her so he could screw her even more.
I would like to say that I feel sorry for her but I don't-she had this coming to her, she really did. Portia did warn her, and she knew what Allen was like. Yeah, she was drunk but still...shit, I do feel bad for her but I'm annoyed too!
Great intro to Victor! Am wondering how these trio and their business are going to come in for Sasha. Really curious!
LOL p.s: Again, had to say that I love Portia! She's so sassy..and crude! Love it!
Author's Response: Allen is foul. Sasha has set herself up. And the pain of this destruction will change her...she's not going to be a doormat anymore. Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 06:00 pm
God, Allen is disgusting. The guy is shameless. LMAO! So into being a sleaze that he doesn't realize Touki is the one manipulating him, not the other way around. I wonder what she's upto? Hmm...
Poor Sasha. Can't say no, can she? I would have given him the silent treatment. As long as she gives into her own feelings and allows him to take her out, it also excuses his shitty behaviour. No matter how much she verbally tells him off.
I really like Portia! She is smart, witty and so level headed. She just speaks common sense. Sasha is lucky to have her as a friend. She just needs to start listening to her. lol.
Great chap Spark! Look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: TY d_i for reading. Sasha is definitely going to be using Portia's common sense as a replacement to her own. Update coming soon. Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 05:20 pm
Loved this quote: "She tossed the phone on the carpet, stood grimacing to the angry thighs that refused to kiss and make up. They'd been apart obviously for a while."
Brilliant word picture. Excellent imaginary you evoked. Good job, SPAC. Thanks again!
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks girlie. Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 01:36 am
Wake up, Sasha. Portia tried to tell you. If...when you don't get partner, you have nobody but yourself to blame.
Thanks, SPAC. Now on to the next chapter... :)
Author's Response: Yep...Portia has been trying to tell her, but she's been so far listening to her instincts. Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 01:26 am
You're working that present tense, girl. It takes a strong writer to pull this growing trend off, so kudos to you. I'm going to favorite this story, so that I'll remember to come back and finish it when I'm done working on my own project.
As for Sasha, she seems to want that partnership REALLY bad...and um...Allen, too. LOL! That dream sequence was fire!
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response: TY Suprina for reading and responding...your feedback means a lot. That partnership has her completely consumed all of her thoughts. Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 10:51 am
What a dick!! I can't wait to see how she gets back as him, and it's going to be so good.
Author's Response: Hang in there for the next one. TY for reading! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 25/08/09 04:58 am
I really hate Allen!! I wantto slap Sasha for being so silly and letting Allen get the upper hand!! I want Sasha to get revenge ..eehh sneaky snake!!
Ok Stan sounds sexy and smart..perfrct for our girl too!!
Author's Response: Allen is a tool...I know. Sasha has horrible timing. She has a bad habit of moving too slow or too quick...timing is an issue of hers. She will eventually rely on Portia's instincts to see her through. Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/08/09 03:00 am
I am just too pissed with Sasha! How the hell can such an intelligent woman be so dumb. Damn! Girl, I couldn’t even read the rest, couldn’t even watch her get more screwed than she already has. URGH! He probably wasn’t even worth it! Dumbass. I want Pavlov to royally kick his A.S.S. (Portia needs to give Sash a swift kick too!)
Ok, rant over. Lol
Thanks for the update. *smiles*Author's Response: LMAO, yes Sasha evokes all kinds of emotions. Thanks for reading. Reviewer: JV4ME Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/08/09 12:13 am