You know what...I'm glad he played her...treated her like the ho she deserved to be treated as and used her to make partner...couldn't have happened to a more deserving woman!
Portia warned her numerous times, she KNEW he was a dog and still let him screw her TWICE...for real and professionally. I want to give him a high five 'cause he did a such a good job.
Rant over (as I heave a huge sigh).
So when's my next update?
Author's Response: ROTFLMAO...COMING REAL SOON! I have a few stories to finish up and then I'm going to pull it all out on this one! Thanks for reading! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/09 06:25 pm
OMG!!! All thru the part of the update with Sasha my heart thumped rapidly, my palms sweat, my head thumped, my stomach dropped and my a-hole swirled up. WTF!!!! I wanted to scream @ Sasha and reach my hand thru the computer and pimp slap her ass so hard into next week and it made her see stars and sober up but that was not possible. Damnit Sash why, why, why? Damn!
Lawd knows I love myself some Sasha and be upset with me if you like but I am glad ALLEN fucked her royally now maybe she will wake her ASS up.
I am so pissed right about now I need to go take a breather and calm my nerves.
Thanks SparkApCider.
Author's Response: ROTFLMAO Thundakat. Thanks for reading, reviewing. Glad you enjoyed! Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/08/09 09:15 am
Hmm....I'm not really diggin the girl, Sasha. She's seems to be too intelligent to be the naive! I actually don't feel bad for her, cause the way she's been so trusting..she's had it coming having partner stole from her.
Author's Response: She was never in line for it any way, though she hoped. Thanks for reading. A new update is in the works!
Date: 24/08/09 08:22 am
Thanks for the update
Author's Response: Oh you're welcomed Jujubee. I appreciate your reading and reviewing! :-) Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/08/09 05:56 am
HE is as crooked as they come. He passed off all of her hard work as his own. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Allen sure has the intentions on one-upping her with that piece of info. TY bayoumomma for reading! Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/08/09 05:43 am
Interesting start. I hope Sasha wises up and moves on. Maybe she can start her own firm with Sasha.
Author's Response: She will eventually...stay tuned to see her transformation!
Date: 23/08/09 07:53 pm
Thanks for a great read. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks divisionred. More is coming!
[Report This]Date: 19/08/09 01:33 pm
Portia's hate for Allen had me scared. "Dick glued to the desk, ass cheeks seared," I was laughing and fearful at the same time.
I hope Sasha realizes soon that Allen is no good. He'll use her up if she lets him.
Author's Response: Portia can't stand him. She's assigned herself to be the Sgt. and some of the things she says scares me sometimes...LOL! Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/08/09 03:41 am
"I'd rather tweeze my pussy hairs than be in the company of that dingle berry..Ok that line mde me spit out my drink laughing!! I love me some Portia and she is on point talking to Sasha!
After I read the first chapter I knew Allen would get partnr..lazy loafing leetches with charm and fast talk always get promoted cause they can sell themselves!! Sad but true!!
I hope Sasha wakes up and realizes Allen's using her and kicks him to the curb on his sawry behind !!!
I am loving this story sweetie cannot wait for more!!
Author's Response: LOL. Portia is something else. Thanks for reading. More to come! Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/08/09 12:36 am
Hopefully, Sasha will listen to Portia soon. But it may not become clear until she learns that her company is...not going to make her partner.
This is looking good. Looking forward to next Update.
Nyeesha
Author's Response: TY Nyeesha for reading...I think you are right about the delayed reaction~ Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 09:39 pm
I wish she would listen to her friend and cut him loose. Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response:
Hi bayoumomma...
Thanks for reading. :-0
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 18/08/09 09:34 pm
Love the story. I hope Sasha kicks Allen's ass soon , what a jerk. Maybe she will turn the tables on him and make him her BITCH.
Author's Response:
Hi Stacie...
Thanks for reading. He's a tool. LMAO!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/08/09 06:14 pm
Sasha better listen to Portia, Allen's using her. Hope she wakes up soon.
Author's Response:
Hi Jujubee50,
Allen's an ass...the dawn is coming! Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/08/09 05:10 pm
if Sasha don't smarten up and listen to her girl.... I wanna pluck her upside her head. BADLY
Author's Response: LOL g, thanks for reading! :-) Reviewer: g Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/08/09 04:54 pm
Great start! I already love club TaBu (wish there was a place like that here) and damn Pavlov is sexy! I would happily go into business with him anyday.Club TaBu sounds like alot of fun, but it seems alot of hard work. I couldnt run a business unless I really loved it, cause you have to eat breathe and sleep with it.
LMAO! Love Sasha already! I think she's hilarious! I love how smart she is. She knows what a sleazebag Allen is but she still has the hots for him anyway. Most women usually delude themselves, would be thinking how he could change and crap. At least Sasha isnt naive, even if she is taking his bullcrap.
Adding this story to faves and look forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Hi d_i
Yes Club Tabu! It's a lot of work, which is why Stan/Paul don't mind rolling up their sleeves. They are no strangers to hard work.
Sasha is so funny. She's all good intent. She's taking his crap, but she's not buying. Goal is on her mind. Thanks for the add and for the wonderful review.
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/09 02:38 am
Great cast and listening to the soundtrack of this now! Fantastic mix! I love the premise of this and cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks d_i. It's going to be an interesting turn of events. You'll wonder if you favor the before or after once it's half way through...enjoy!
Date: 17/08/09 01:45 am
Enjoying the concept Spac..and you have Linc..YUMMY!!!!
Rocking your intro music..adding it to my collection.
Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thanks Pash...
Ooowee isn't Linc yummies! Meow!
Glad you love the selections. More reading to come!
Reviewer: Pashmina Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/08/09 01:12 am
I can already tell this is going to be good. I already don't like Allen and can see him getting himself in trouble, hoping and praying for Sasha to bail him out.
Author's Response: Thanks Sweet Pea. I hope it produces. If don't like him now, you'll be ready to tar and feather by the end. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 16/08/09 03:55 am
Great start sweetie,,,loving the leads..poor Sasha..something tells me that partnership may not come as she wishes!!
Allen a wart on life's butt!!
I cannot wait for her and Pavlov..to meet this will be quite interesting..rotfl!
Good story sweetie!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading nene...Allen's all wart! LOL! :-)
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 16/08/09 02:19 am
You're already off to a good start, 'cause only a well written character can have me mad enough to slap sense into her in the first chapter.
I do hope Sasha wakes up because nothing is more sad than a woman allowing a handsome face to prevent her from getting her just rewards after working hard.
Author's Response: Awe...thank you so much. Sasha's a headbanger!!! But she's so rootable...love her. :::cheeriing her onward::: Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/08/09 07:10 am
Damn a wannabe-but-never-will chump Allen; he’s a loser. Sasha needs Pavlov, a real man, a kind man, a do-right sexy-as-hell man!!! Good lawd! Pavlov made my night when I saw his pic amongst the other cast members. (Thanks for that SPAC lol). Pavlov and Sasha would make a great team. The things that man could do to a sista…whew!...makes me all warm thinking about it.
Ok. I’m done. Lol.
Great start, I like the concept. I’m looking forward to reading more.Author's Response:
Hi JV4ME!
Allen...rotfl. Pavlov is so hawt isn't he. I'm so glad he made your night. He's so yummy. Glad you enjoyed the read so far. There's more to come. ;-)
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/08/09 04:24 am
Great start...can't wait to see where you take this...
P.S...Allen already seems like a tool...
Author's Response: LOL attheritz...he's a tool for sure...can't even lie, can't even beg you to have mercy on him. He's an unrepentant manwhore. Thanks for reading. Stick close more to come and lots of curves up ahead! ;-) Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/08/09 03:54 am
Great start!!
I'm sure poor Sasha will learn that you cannot let lusting after a man cloud your judgment about competing with him professionally. Yeah, you practically issue him an invitation to take advantage of you and the situation.
I'm looking forward to reading more!!!
Author's Response:
Thanky blue...
She's going to learn a lot in this game and she's going to play it by their rules too! More to come! ;-)
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/08/09 03:21 am
Great start, can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks Gale for reading. I appreciate your reading and reviewing. Next chapter on the way: ;-)
[Report This]Date: 15/08/09 02:40 am
Wonderful start. She does all the work and he gets all the credit!
Author's Response: Yes...bayoumomma. She's focused on the 'team spirit' and doing whatever she feels is going to get her the goal. She doesn't quite get that there are two sets of rules. Lets see how she plays the game and what the results are.
[Report This]Date: 15/08/09 01:19 am