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Title: show me heaven

Damn what a dedication.  When todd ask eva "will you be my girlfriend" i was like hell yell.  and the finally when tangeline burned up the sheets, well can you scream damn todd, but i must acmit i was rolling when todd told blair to go gag on a d**k bitchttt, i bet that was a mouthful lol lol lol lol lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Forever a fan..

Author's Response:

We all know that Blair the tramp is alway around the corner, trying to stir up a storm, am so glad he put her in her place.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/08 10:09 am

Title: show me heaven

When Todd told Blair "Go gag on a d**k, bitchhh," I couldn't stop laughing. I've wanted to say that to her myself a million times. 

Todd and Van FINALLY got it on!!!!



Author's Response: I just had to put that in, I couldn't help myself, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/08 05:35 am

Title: Surprise!!!!!!!

Great update!  LOL Too bad John. U lost Eva. Love this chapter.  Update soon.

Author's Response: I kind of feel sorry for him but he's had one to many second chances. I think it's time for the real man to take over.

Reviewer: rhondanicole18 Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/07/08 03:21 pm

Title: Surprise!!!!!!!

damn i was about to bust a blood vessel when i read eva and john kissing, but i am glad it was a nightmare tangeline forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Well sit back and relax, you know i wouldn't do that to you.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/08 06:04 am

Title: you stand for me.

I am just so glad that he made it there in time.  So as you can see I just love Todd and Vange.  And go Starr for setting her father straight.  I hope he listens to her.  Blair better watch out. Vange is a mother now and they don't play with people who are out for no good.

Author's Response: Yeh this is the Starr I love and adore.

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/07/08 10:27 pm

Title: you stand for me.

oh my gosh i screamed with happiness when todd came to be by his eva side and when eva put trashy blair in her place that was awesome.  you are sooo a wonderful writer i love and adore this story!!!!! forever a fan Victoria  "keep it coming"



Author's Response:

Thanks babe, I screamed even louder, lets hope things get better from here

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/08 03:12 am

Title: Where are you?

I vote for Todd



Author's Response:

you too?

did he send you a blank check or something?

Reviewer: Safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/07/08 04:07 pm

Title: Where are you?

Please have Todd help Eva.  John can go kick rocks.

Author's Response: todd definitely appreciate your vote

Reviewer: rhondanicole18 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/07/08 03:21 pm

Title: Too little too late?

great first chapter...made me ask more questions..who's dru, vange pregnant, two years have gone by..todd and david thinking john making a mistake.

can't wait to read more.



Author's Response: thanks, i actually enjoyed writing the first chapter because it created a little mystery, i hope you enjoy the rest of it.

Reviewer: pashmina Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/08 06:36 pm

Title: Too little too late?

please,please let todd be by evangeline side during the child birth and after.  john as always tring to wiggle his self back in to heaven. i mean he carried on a married marty when eva showed up at the church.  but my todd dropped everything and rushed to be by eva side, so tangeline all the way baby!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

one guy's advantage is another man's disadvantage, i hope the Eva gets to be the winner of a good man. thanks for the stars.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/08 05:16 pm

Title: Where are you?

TODD!!! TODD!!! TODD!!!

 In case you didn't hear me the first time:

TODD!!!



Author's Response:

Beloved, I heard you all the way from China, I actually think my left ear might need an earing aid. It's nice to know you are pulling for Todd, all he has to do is get off his a$$ and maybe he'll get there on time.

thanks for the stars.

Reviewer: BelovedTangeline Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/08 09:33 am

Title: Where are you?

John, for some reason I think Todd would get on my nerves during child birth.

Author's Response:

humm, let's see, todd or john or todd and john?

am trying not to be cruel to Eva because she already has enough drama going on, the thought of putting both men together crossed my mind. They would totally rip each other apart but if the elavetor door doesn't open, Johnny boy might just be the lucky one.

thanks for reading and the review.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/07/08 08:30 am

Title: Where are you?

I really do hope that Todd will show up somewhere.  She needs him and she needs to be open.  Todd needs to find a way to tell her about Blair.  I hope that John is not given the opportunity to try and really make a move on her.  Awesome update.

Author's Response:

I hope he shows up too because once she pops that baby out, Eva is fair game for all.

thanks for the review.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/07/08 04:00 am

Title: Where are you?

i would love for todd to be with her please, please im begging please let todd be with his eva during her child birth!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

yeah, well someone needs to tell Todd to stop sulking like a kid then take the bib out of his mouth so he can go look for her.

Appreciate your review.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/08 03:31 am

Title: Denial of falling?

yes tangeline and baby all the way to happiness!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks for the review and the stars, am hoping they will have a happily ever after too, they both deserve it.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 07:40 am

Title: refuge

oh m gosh that was a emotional rollercoaster.  i am glad tood was there to take care of his vange.....

Author's Response:

yeah, me too.

we all know Todd can't help himself when it comes to vange. Thanks for the review and the stars.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 07:30 am

Title: Denial of falling?

In some way I can see Clay doing that, but I really do hope he reconsiders.  I am glad that Todd and Layla have come to some kind of truce when it comes to Vange.  I hope that Todd will be abel to get through to her.  She is really going to need him.  Maybe Layla will be able to help him with her.

Author's Response:

thanks for the comment, I had a feeling Clay was going to do a runner as soon as the funeral was over.

well as for layla and Todd being best friends forever, we'll just have to wait and see about that, hopefully they can continue to get alone. 

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 03:18 am

Title: refuge

I just can't believe this happend.  I am just feel so sorry to Vange.  She is really going to need someone to help her.  She can't do it all on her own.  I really do hope that Todd is really there and that she lets him. 

Author's Response:

thanks, i feel sorry for her too, she just can't seem to catch a break, i hope everything works out for her at the end.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/07/08 03:38 am

Title: Leftovers

no john is like a pest please do let this mess up tangeline

Author's Response:

you have no idea how hard i laughed when you called John a pest,

i guess he's just a bearer of bad news, thanks for the stars babe.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/08 04:42 am

Title: Aching and waiting

i love tangeline. this story is great....

Author's Response: thanks you

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/07/08 01:43 am

Title: Aching and waiting

Blair is so pathetic. She doesn't want Todd, but she doesn't want anyone else to have him either.

Todd is deliciously evil. I love how he told Chris she asked about him, but not to see him. 

Where's John; on honeymoon with boring, forever a victim  Marty?



Author's Response: Thanks, the Todd line was a last minute decision, i just thought it would be really cruel for Christain's character to handle.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 11:32 pm

Title: Too little too late?

I have to read it again, I tend to read to fast the first time, but i really like where you're going with this.  Keep on keppin on!

Author's Response: thanks for the vote of confidence, I was feeling a little nutty and crazy because not seeing Eva on tv sucks for me. hopefully i can pull is off without writing myself into a corner.

Reviewer: Pasha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 03:50 pm

Title: choices

Like the fact that John, Todd and Cris still don't like one another.. David was good comic relief... please update soon

Author's Response: Thanks, it feels nice to see people appreciate little things like that.

Reviewer: zeta Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 01:30 am

Title: choices

gosh this story is going to be great. keep it coming....

Author's Response:

Thanks, my head is a little swollen from your review, i hope you like the rest of it.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 01:07 am

Title: Too little too late?

Ok that was an interesting start.. can't wait to see where this is headed...

Author's Response: yeah very interesting, it will be a lot clearer when you read the third chapter.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 12:49 am

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