Loved the beginning!
Nadia and Ryouchi are cute together... a nice blend of opposites.
Great job capturing the reader's attention with a unique intro. I HATE ELEVATORS; bu I wouldn't mind being stuck on one for a little while with a handsome man.
On to the next chapter!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/10 02:33 am
I like it, I like it alot!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/06/10 02:21 am
Me likey!!! Riyochi is hot!!! I really hope that Cassidee gets fired!!! I already don't like her and the story just began. Did I say that Riyochi is hot!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 22/03/10 08:08 am
Hi Shanni, I just found this story, and if you see this review, i hope you come back and finish it. Excellent start.
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Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: 02/01/10 06:34 pm
please update this story. Its nice
Reviewer: lyn78 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/07/09 08:12 pm
Listen, you got to update this I luv this
Reviewer: lyn78 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/07/09 02:43 am
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/01/09 03:47 pm
Good start, but, will you finish it. I say yu should.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/12/08 01:43 am
I like this chapter. I do hope you will continue. Like the chance meeting in the elevator.
Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/08/08 07:07 am
I just discovered this story and I am very excited to see how these two interact with each other. Please update soon
Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]Date: 24/08/08 05:19 am
You have so many wonderful stories but none have been update resently. What's going on?
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/08/08 05:29 pm
When will they mean again??? Nice story
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/08 10:42 pm
I've seen this story posted on a couple of boards. Will there be an update in the near future?
Author's Response: Yes, I intend to update the story within the next two weeks. I just bought a new laptop which will help me finish my stories much quicker than before. Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/07/08 05:27 am
Very nice start. I like Nadia, she seems like someone who would be cool to hang out with. I think I'm going to need to see more of Ryouchi though. That "are you on your period" and that "babe" nonsense made me wanna smack him.
Great job!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/07/08 09:20 pm