Great story. It will be interesting when they meet again and I can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: Rese Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/10/09 10:11 pm
I just read the first part of this saga up to this point...first, let me say how impressed I am with your ability to draw me into this story and this world...
I'm so heartbroken for Sabine and Ulrich...I can't stand it...and I hate Salvatore with the heat of a thousand suns...
I can't wait to read about how Sabine and Ulrich get their second chance at love and happiness together...though it seems impossible right now with her having no memory and her being made into a vampire and he a lycan...but I'm hoping that true loves prevails...it just has too!!!
Great story and impeccable work...looking forward to the next journey into this saga...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 04/10/09 08:10 pm
dayum i am loving this story immensely....cant wait for more..it reads like a movie...i must have more...pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Author's Response: lol glad you like it that much, i already had the chapters wrote out for the next few chapters but i might rewrite soooooooooo when i'm done, i'll post. i'll try not to take so long this time!
[Report This]Date: 03/10/09 06:26 pm
oh i love this story... can not wait for the next part!
Reviewer: femmenoire Signed [Report This]Date: 03/10/09 04:58 pm
Wow great update, please update again soon
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/10/09 02:15 pm
Thanks for a great update but I really dislike this vamp. Poor Sabine. Trapped in the worl;d of the undead.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 03/10/09 07:40 am
I hope that she ends up killing that bastard that made her into a vsmpire. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 03/10/09 07:27 am
WTH!! She's a vampire? I can't believe that this jerk not only stole their wedding night, but possibly their future as while.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 03/10/09 04:41 am
Honestly..I really hate this now. I don't know if I can continue to read this..I HATE that Sebine is going through this and why!! I hate that she does not even remember Ulrich and that now she is being treated like dirt by this filthy Vampire...what she will beecome I don't want to know..she was a beautiful innocent girl now all she knows is this monster and what she will become no one knows..much as I love this story..I am not sure I can deal with part two...I will see but I cannot be sure if I can stand it get any worse than this...
No reflection on your writing..it is awesomeness!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 03/10/09 04:40 am
Why Sebine..can't she just have this happiness. Her life was sacrifice to her dad,,finall a man who loves her for herself..finally a family and a chance at happiness..finally everything her dad wished for her and sh wished for herself....and on her wedding night...this happens!
Why did they choose her..just to hurt Ulrich..that is horrific and I hope he makes them pay!!
Excellent updt sweetie...I was so not looking forward to this day..it made me so sad that on the happiest day of her life she loses everything including her life...
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 03/10/09 04:22 am
Wow! what an update.
Well, I guess she couldn't carry a child through all of this. So, she lost her memory as well of Ulrich. I'm sure her vows, would mean she will remember him sometime soon
Nice update. Missed your story.
Author's Response:
thanks, i need to update more, (in practice) lol :)
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 03/10/09 02:04 am
What's the 500 years thing all about? And why cant she have children?
Author's Response:
i never posted what time frame i was doing this all in, its SUPPOSED to be in the 1500's that's why i didn't try to reflect on more futuristic things, i was too lazy to research and stuff, Sabine was turned vampire in the 1500's so 500 years past....it will be in 2009 when she meets Ulrich again.and she can have children (when she was human) but Ulrich didn't want her to because pregnancies for lycans are very hard and as a human Sabine probably wouldn't survive it...i thought i said it in one of the chapters though? i can't remember lol
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 02/10/09 09:21 pm
What the hell was that! Salvatore got to her and turned her! Please say he doesn't get to have sex with her. Give me that much. That would be totally disgusting. Sabine was so violated by that pig. And how is it that she cant remember anything? How could she go through days of torture and transformation at his hands and Ulrich not have someone check on her at least once? It was what...three days. Why wasn't she with Helene at least?
I'm so heartbroken over this. This move wasn't expected at all.
How are they going to get back together. She's vampire now, how can she become lycan after this? She's Ulrich's wife and his queen, so what does it all mean for them.
Please let Salvatore die a slow, extremely painful, agonizing death at Sabine hands, while Ulrich witnesses it and all who took part in it. She needs to get angry, start thinking, then get even.
Sad chapter. Good chapter, but sad chapter.
Author's Response: well i put a spin on the vampires not remembering anything when they're turned from humans, it made sense for this story, idk, i just thought i would roll with it. thanks for commenting :) Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/09 09:09 pm
Loved the update. What the hell??? Poor Sabine. Will Ulrich realise the attack was a diversion???? Is she gonna be preggers??? I hope they catch or destroy that vampire. PLEASE let it happen. If Sabine survives will she remember Ulrich? Hopefully she will become stronger.
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/10/09 08:53 pm
More!!!!!
Author's Response: ask and you shall receive...soon. lol glad you liked it.
Date: 02/10/09 07:31 pm
Now she's one of the undead. Will Ulrich still want her? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: of course! they're the perfect couple lol but there will be some obstacles ahead for them
[Report This]Date: 02/10/09 06:37 pm
Sabine how could you be so stupid not to listen to Ulrich.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/10/09 06:30 pm
Uggggggh! I hate that she has to suffer through this situation. I loved the update but I want Salvator to suffer with everything in me by Sabine's hands or maybe even Ulrich's. Poor Sabine can't remember anything without the headaches. I hope she is able to remain strong against Salvator but I ain't going to hold my breathe. And to think it will be 500 yrs before she see Ulrich and by then who knows what would/could happen to her by then.
I want to say that I wish Ulrich was her first and only but that is not being realistic is it.
Great update thanks.
Author's Response: you're very welcome, glad that you liked the update Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/10/09 02:29 pm
I was happy they were able to consummate the marriage and I was so hoping that he was able to transform her into a lycan before the vampire got to her but that was not to happen it appears. :(
Great update I am sad but happy to see an update. Thanks
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 02/10/09 01:12 pm
*Screams* Wow! this is so good
please hurry with the next chapter
do you have any pic of Salvotore?
Author's Response: i'm getting the pics together for the next cast of part two, so yep i have a picture of Salvatore and other new characters. Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/09 09:57 am
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! omg
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 02/10/09 09:32 am
Absolutely loved, loved, loved the update!!!! So glad you are back!!! Please continue with this wonderful story!!
Author's Response: lol yea i was a little off my updating and glad that you like the story so far.
Date: 02/10/09 08:42 am
Beg him?!!! Hmpf! I wish the Lycan in her (I know the ritual wasn’t complete…doesn’t matter though…she’s Lycan none-the-less) would reach up and claw his damn eyes out! I hope her husband’s scent is with her for eternity.
How’d they know exactly where to find her or where Ulrich’s chambers were? Why didn’t Ulrich sense that his beloved was in danger? So sad.
AND
Why oh why must it be five hundred years later?! Urgh (lol)
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
well, they are not bonded just yet so that's why he didn't sense anything and he was quite busy fighting outside the castle. and the vampires in this story can travel anywhere they please unless there is something that prohibits them too. Balmoral (Ulrich's castle) is already enchanted to keep certain vampires away but Salvatore was strong enough to fight against the magic and enter the castle. he's the only one that can do it that's why he was trying to get into the castle through secret passageways in the villages for his men since that didn't work, he came up with using the army as a distraction while he entered the castle alone.
whoo, that was alot to say lol.
I was going to cover that in the story but oh well, i didn't mind saying it now and you're welcome for the update.
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: 02/10/09 07:09 am
Wow....what an ending to part 1. Will Ulrich want a vampire for his wife? Will he be able to look past it? Or will he still love her? And will they still be able to have children? And if so, what will they be...half lycan and half vampire? So many questions.....
Nyeesha
Author's Response: Ulrich would be a little hesitant because now he really hates vampires, and there will be a few things he probably won't like Sabine doing but we'll see if they cope with their problems, and no, Sabine won't be able to have children, but i already had a plan in my mind for that, its all about how this story will turn if i use it or not. Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/10/09 06:47 am
Please update soon! Great Story.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/09/09 04:55 am