Please readdress this story it holds all of the elements. mystery, a hint of danger and romance!!
Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 12/08/11 08:06 am
Can you please update!!! Loving it!!
Author's Response: I will be soon! Thanks for reading.
Date: 29/08/10 08:57 pm
Please update!
Author's Response: Ok, I didn't know anyone was still following this story. I'll add it to the must update list.
[Report This]Date: 22/02/10 10:53 am
I remember that...the way those idiots changed Jason so much after the accident that he didn't remember their love...always they do this to the black sistahs...I only watched that soap briefly after that and never returned...not even sniffed.
Carly is a real BIATCH! Why does it really matter to her. The relationship that Jason and Keesha had went really deep so why wouldnt he feel like protecting her. So continue to update and I will read..LOL!!!
Author's Response: Carly is so overly protective, that it borders obsession. In my bubble JnK are love, and the soapdemon can't touch them! LOL! They are their own angst, not impeded by others. Carly has no power in my world! LOL! Thanks for reading! Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/11/09 07:21 pm
Spark why can't I get this Jason out of my mind and what those idiots did to this couple....AH! You did read my Todd and Van flick...lol! Let me say it now I hate Sonny...lol...Now back to the story.
I understand why Keesha told him off bc its always the same thing with Jason. Always protecting but what comes next. Then again why bother her when he's got Carly.
Author's Response: LOL, Keesha has a invisible ice pick. She owns a place where Jason hides in his BOP. Keesha is the LOHL, and he knows he shouldn't go there, so he markets his love in the need to protect her. At some point he'll have to face up to it. TY for reading. Interesting things coming the way of these two. Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/11/09 06:54 pm
Carly just doesn't know when to shut up. Great update!!
Author's Response: Carly is the self-imposed author of Jason's life. I couldn't stop myself. She can be fun with her annoying ass. TY for reading!
[Report This]Date: 26/10/09 06:38 pm
Leo ran because he set it up. Keesha had better open her eyes.
Author's Response: LOL bayoumomma. You're so funny! Yes. Leo is indeed one to keep your eyes on.
[Report This]Date: 30/09/09 09:48 pm
Leo is spying on her for Lorenzo. Always about the money isn't it! Great update.
Author's Response: TY bayoumaomma for reading. Yep...Leo is working for Lo.
[Report This]Date: 30/09/09 09:20 pm
Now that heated exchange was well worth the wait!!! It's obvious that Keesha has some unresolved feelings for Jason. Any woman that can get that angry at a man just because he's near her gots to know that she loves the man but is too stubborn to tell him but then again; this is Jason M not Jason Q, the man pissed me off at how he treated her in the past. But her anger speaks volume as to how she really really feels; I just hope Jason can get through to her.
I'm loving this story. I've actually tried to watch the show again but I don't see anymore people of color so I stopped watching. Btw, is Lainey still around? It would be good to see Keesha return because TPTB act like Jason only had a few select loves of his life and Keesha's name is no way in that mix....it's passed due; a reunion, I mean. Plus, I would start watching again.
I was watching for Jason, Lucky and Patrick (dat man right there is just tooo sexy) but I don't even bother anymore. I will just tune into my fanfics to get the real soap opera super couple feel of the olden days..thanks for that.
Author's Response:
Lainey/Kent is off contract, still rarely seen.
I'm thinking of tuning in when they come out with that alleged IR with Michael and some unnamed AA young lady.
Thanks for reading. There's a lot of passion with those two (Jason and Keesha) and it's going to be fun peeling away her layers.
Reviewer: Vie Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/09/09 07:03 pm
Keesha has three dudes eyeing her!!! I think Jax is sexy and is not one to be messed with when it comes down to the woman in his life. Jason is controlling , but he loves hard and will kill for his lady love. Lorenzo is a nut and would probably kill his love to prove a point, ok maybe not but I would be afraid of him.
Author's Response: LOL Sweet Pea. I think it's time Keesha has men swooning over her.
[Report This]Date: 23/09/09 04:53 am
great beginning
Author's Response: Thanks bayoumomma. It's going to get more in depth. Pardon the short intro. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/09/09 04:54 am
Jason and Keesha together again; I like. I especially love that Jason remembers his love for her. Great start!!
Author's Response: TY Vie. Their reunion is forthcoming. But I need to flesh out the players a bit as we go. Glad you're enjoying. Reviewer: Vie Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/09/09 12:16 am
Alright Spark I have a confession to make...I have seen other authors write about Jason and Keesha and have never really been attracted to it bc I was absolutely hurt when they broke these two up...my first real daytime crushing my heart sort of deal. Since you have ventured over to my daytime waters I've decided to give it a shot and so far its been a great read so look forward to me commenting :)
Author's Response: LOL chocolate470. Touche! I know the pain you feel. It was a big bruise over my eye. I think part of the reason I continued watching was because I remained hopeful, that some day a reunion would happen.
[Report This]Date: 11/09/09 04:24 pm
I'm glad you didn't rush them back together. He's a mobster and she hates the mob. Love is strong, but it takes a while to break down walls.
Author's Response: TY Sweet Pea. I'm so slow when it comes to that sort of thing...but in this regard it's highly understood. Keesha went through a lot with Jason and lost a lot because of the mob. So she hates it...indeed.
[Report This]Date: 11/09/09 04:20 am
Me likey.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I can't believe that after all of these years as shelved fan of the couple I've finally become brave enough to put my toes in the water.
I so love them.
I plan to make Keesha a very desired woman in this fic. She deserves it. She was so beautiful. And her bitterness is palpable, considering the hands she was dealt.
Date: 11/09/09 03:14 am