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Title: A plan put in motion

omg how sick that he is  so glad that got him on camera to take him down. i almost thu up  when he kissed her yuck. glad he kick that guy ass for taking the picturers of him and kendra. love the story and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks girl for still reading

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 01:45 am

Title: A plan put in motion

Loved the update. Wow, the crap is gonna hit the fan now. Glad Donovan gave Garrett a whipping. He's such a punk!!! Now his team mates really see what a bitch he really is.

Author's Response: Yep.  We gotta get rid of Garrettt

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 01:10 am

Title: A plan put in motion

ohh yeah. Two in one day.

Author's Response: Going to give you another one soon/

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 12:50 am

Title: A plan put in motion

Yes!!!!

Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 12:24 am

Title: A plan put in motion

Nice update, but, Donovan should have stayed in the closet...letting David know he has been had...he might be able to cover up.

Nice!



Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 12:24 am

Title: A plan put in motion

I love it!! The trainer was stupid. What is going to happen to Donovan and Kendra?

Author's Response: They are gonna live happily ever after... after some drama to get them there...

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/10 11:59 pm

Title: Planning it Out

David is a dirty ole fuccer and I can't wait til he gets his and hell no I won't stay after practice especially after you called me a whore.

That alone is enough to get his ass canned aint it.

I am glad Donovan went to Matt someone else knows what's going on and it would seem that Garrett's plan just backfired unless of course Kendra tell's Rachel about the cream and then Rachel tells Garrett and so on and so forth.

Great update!

MORE PLEASE!

Thank You!



Author's Response: You know its all a part of the plan.  LOL

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/01/10 11:15 am

Title: Planning it Out

Ewwww...I feel dirty after reading this chapter...the unmitigated gall of David...as if Kendra would let the piece of slime anywhere near her goodies...puleeze...he must really think her really dumb...he has jeopardized her career...possibly damaged her reputation...and has the subtlety of a bull in a china store...I hope she knees him in the groin once she gets her evidence of his treachery...sick bastard...not only does he have a low opinion of women in general...but he thinks they're only good be sexual playthings for men...there are just no words for how I loathe this beast...

Glad Donovan is trying to come up with a gameplan to get both he and Kendra out of this mess...Garrett is sick, too...so it was him following them in Key West...that fool needs to be dealt with too...

So glad Donovan realizes it wasn't Kendra's fault about that cream...and recognizes just how tenous her career aspirations have become...loved he told her he'd take care of her...poor Kendra...bet she was feeling all alone and sick with guilt about what happened...

Can't wait for them to take down both of these creeps...and get back to the business of loving each other...looking forward to more...



Author's Response: Thank you maam.  I am gertting on it today to get some clarification

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/01/10 01:36 am

Title: Planning it Out

Ohhh boy...if she and Dononvan would communicate with each other they could avoid a lot of the mad drama that is about to take place!

I really hope David and Garrett get theirs in this story!!

Brilliant Job!  :)



Author's Response: Thanks girl.  I'm trying to get these two to get it together.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 06:10 am

Title: Planning it Out

wow david is just so dirty but what you epected he is a man after all lol. glad he talked to someone who been in the same postion he in right now i can't wait to they take him down so they can finaly be together with out all that dram. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks girl.  I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 06:03 am

Title: Planning it Out

I hope she tells D her plan before she meets with Dick-head David.

She should not be alone with him.

I keep telling you, you need to do something about Girly Garret.

Great update.



Author's Response:

Garrett is about to get dealt with.

Reviewer: Janetbd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 05:18 am

Title: Planning it Out

He needs a good beat down, him and Garret. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thanks girl.  Got some updating to do.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 05:07 am

Title: Planning it Out

OK THE CRAP HAS HIT THE FAN! David is a dirty old man for sure but I hope one busted dirty old man!!

I feel bad for Keisha..she is caching all the way around. Matt maybe able to help Donovan professionally and privately no ones blames him for being with Keisha but Keisha is on her own no help professionally or privately!

I hope she can catch David in his own trap!! Great writing sweetie,,it is gettin so good now!!



Author's Response: Thanks Nene for the love.  Kendra is definitely going to be okay

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 04:27 am

Title: Planning it Out

David is a a-hole just like that wanna-be Garrett! I hope Kendra does record his ass, I hope Donovan doesn't let this keep him away from Kendra He prayed for her and she came to him, now he has to work extra hard to keep her and make sure they come out of this on top! Love the update. Love the story! So glad I tuned in.Going into my faves!

Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response: Yep, he's jerk..

Reviewer: PasionK Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 02:56 am

Title: Planning it Out

Seriously, David made me want to vomit.

Otherwise...work it out you two!!

Waiting for the plan...



Author's Response: My stomach hurts just thinking about David... they will work it out... Thanks!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 02:24 am

Title: Planning it Out

David is scum!  Hope him and that other gut get theirs in the end!

Author's Response: They will both get it.

Reviewer: cyn2pede Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 02:15 am

Title: Planning it Out

Donovan and Kendra are going through some crap right now but david and that punk-ass garrett are going to get burned too. If kendra is smart she will tape her meeting with david to get him fired and have garrett arrested for stalking. i was glad to see Matt included in the story. when are we going to read about his girls?



Author's Response: Two stories down before we hear of his girls... but soon!

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 02:11 am

Title: Planning it Out

damn!! david is creepy as hell!!! i hope that kendra and d-dub can make it through this. i love the update shoot I love the story.

Author's Response: Kendra is going to be strong and is going to handle David.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 01:38 am

Title: Planning it Out

David! that SWINE! lmao! i love every moment of the story Donovan is sooo sexy though ..... (<-- cyber drool)

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: DameRouge Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 01:35 am

Title: Planning it Out

OMG everything is hitting the fan all at once.

I feel dirty myself from reading what David said to Kendra.

Don get it together man. You know Kendra don't want you to take care of her if she gets fired. She has busted her butt to get to where she is. If you want to help Nail David's @$$ to the wall.



Author's Response: David is a major lecherous jerk who will get his.  Donovan just trying to do the right thing...

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 01:18 am

Title: Planning it Out

She would be really stupid to stay after practice when they would be completely by themselves.  He has already proven that he can't be trusted.  I hope that she talks to Donovan before she actually stays.  She can sue him and the league for him calling her a whore, since she is wearing a wire.  Not feeling about this situation!!!

Author's Response: Its all a part of her plan and she'll be safe

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 01:10 am

Title: Planning it Out

Kendra playing a dangerous game with dirty old man.   I hope D find a solution to this problem soon.  Also for an Encore performance make sure dirty old man and stalker get a live telivised moment on Live TV for what they doing to Dand K.

 

Nice update as always



Author's Response: The situations will be resolved soon.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 12:22 am

Title: Planning it Out

Poor Kendra, things are just not going well. I think Donovan could have been more suppotive of her as she didn't intentionally set out to hurt him. Maybe they need some space until things settle. Unfortunately what Kendra had feared has come to pass. David really is a shithead trying to get Kendra to sleep with him, the old bastard!!!! Oooooo, I hope those pictures are tracked back to Garrett. Pay back is a bitch and I hope he feels it full blast to cure him of his nasty ways. He was sooo wrong doing that to D and Kendra because of his jealousy. Loved the update!!!!!

Author's Response: Space is going to work out good for them.  David is a jerk, but they are gonna get him.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/01/10 12:15 am

Title: Planning it Out

Oh my goodness! I can't believe how much of a lech David is. Poor Kendra and Donovan, seems like the sky is falling all around them. It was nice to hear from Matt again however. Nice way to bring him back into the story by having Donovan reach out to him for guidance. I'm on pins and needles for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I love Matt and I thought he would be perfect for guidance...

Reviewer: EvilAngelfish Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/01/10 11:48 pm

Title: Confessions

Oh nooo!!! I hope Donovan isn't gonna do anything stupid. Hmmm, now that he's aware of Rachel and Garrett ,he'll be suspicious about those photos if and when they surface. Garrett is stalking him trying to find out information to hurt him. He should be more alert now in reference to Garrett and take him and his threats more serious. I feel so bad for Kendra. She trusted her boss and he set her up, possibly hurting Donovan in the process. Hopefully this doesn't affect she and Donovan's relationship too negatively. Excellent update.

Author's Response: Nope, he won't do anything stupid.  He's going to chill

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/01/10 12:50 am

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