I hope that Donovan doesn't blame Kendra for this mess.
Her boss David is to blame.
What's up with Garrett.
You've got to do something about him soon.
I think that he needs a bitch ass beat-down.
Author's Response: Working on a plan for him too. Reviewer: Janetbd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/01/10 11:39 pm
Enjoyed all of the chapters! It was wonderful to come in and have a few chapters to read! :)
I hope once Donovan calms down, he and Kendra can come up with a plan to nail David!
I really don't like Garrett and am anxious to see what deviousness he has up his sleeve.
I am really enjoying this story! :)
Author's Response: Working on getting this all resolved soon. Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/01/10 06:39 pm
this story is really picking up. thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Working on a new update now.
Date: 17/01/10 05:53 am
Sorry, but I get Donovan on this. Kendra keeps talking about how "professional" she is and wants to be, but that was kinda irresponsible of her to just put that cream on him simple because David told her too. Especially with her vibes from David.
Author's Response: Glad you approved....
Date: 17/01/10 05:12 am
hun is that the same girl she send the cream too if so wow he double screw. it good that he left before it got realy out of hand . but they figuer out a way to stop that guy from runing him. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks girl
[Report This]Date: 17/01/10 04:47 am
I am glad that she told Donovan, she had me worried there for minute. I understand his anger and she was right she should have tested it before she used that cream. To bad she won't get wish about the league calling to test him, so I hope that she can trap him into confessing and record it. Great update!!!
Author's Response: I know but hopefully they will make it through...
Date: 17/01/10 04:22 am
Damn! And that is truly going to make it even worse for Don-Don and Ken caus she is going to go and open her big mouth to Garrett.
Thank you for always responding to my reviews it makes me feel like you care that I read your writings. Just love it and your writing.
Author's Response: I absolutely do care that you read my writings. There is so much you could be doing with your time and to read and give me reviews is really special, thanks to you girl. And you know we women can't shut it up at all. Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/01/10 03:58 am
Love these two. Saying prayer before they eat....... and eventhough Donovan's pissed he still kisses her before he leaves. No yelling, screaming ..... WOW!!!
Author's Response: So you don't think he was angry enough? I love them too...
[Report This]Date: 17/01/10 03:25 am
Well I am glad that she finally told him he took it like I guessed he would and apparently like Kendra guessed he would.
Interesting how Garrett comes out of Rachel's apartment at the same time that Donovan does Kendra's and yes, boo boo in sense he is stalking you and I did not know that Kendra and Rachel lived in the same complex I must have missed that as insignicate.
I hope that it takes a long while for them to call Donovan's number for drug test since it takes 4wks to flush from his system and she has stopped using it now for 2wks since they both are faithful and praying people I hope God hears his prayers and my prayers again.
I hope that Kendra does not tell Rachel what is going on because she would surly tell Garrett and we already got Garrett hatting on him so this would put it over the top.
Wonderful update thank you so much!
More please ASA u can.
Author's Response: Of course Kendra is going to open her mouth to Rachel. Thanks girl! Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/01/10 02:48 am
Damn that was hot! I so can't wait til the haters get theirs. I am happy that Don-Don and Ken have finally come together intimately. It took her long enough to be ready but I understand. I wonder if there is a way to flush the steroid out of Don-Don system without him know it since she doesn't want to tell him which I think she should that way he will know what is going on and will be better able to defend himself if and when the drug test start. Plus they can put their heads together to fight David and set his ass up. Cause whatever Garrett is up to it too can't be good for either Don or Ken but I don't remember it ever being said that the Trainer and Player could not have a relationship with one another especially since it is so few and far between woman Trainers being in the field.
Thanks for a wonder and hot update.
Author's Response:
Thanks ma'am. Garrett even annoys me... thanks for reading
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/01/10 02:35 am
I just hope they have enough time to get that crap out of Donovan's system before his number is called. And Garrett is such a loon. He need's to get a life.
Author's Response: I think that we will get rid of Garrett soon enough.
[Report This]Date: 17/01/10 02:32 am
Okay...I can understand Donovan being upset...justifiably so...but did he have to really take it out on Kendra like that...yes, she made a HUGE mistake...using that cream before checking it out...but shouldn't Donovan also be concerned that HER career could be in jeopardy, too...she's a victim, too...David preyed on her naivete...and now not only is Donovan in hot water...but so is Kendra...not cool, D-man...not cool at all...
Glad Donovan saw Garrett with Rachel...at least he has the heads up about whatever that fool is up to...
Though I'm a bit miffed at Donovan right now...hopefully he'll cool down and come back and apologize to Kendra and they can put their heads together to come up with a gameplan to salvage both of their careers...
Looking forward to more...thanks for the update...
Author's Response: You know some men, don't rationalize when they are angry. Thanks for reading. Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/01/10 01:55 am
Surely he does not blame her?? It is David he should be furious at not Kenya. She knew one day before she told him Her concerns were legitimate, she didn't know how he would react and she did stop using it as soon as she suspected anything.
I do understand him being upset.any normal person would be ...this is his life and it could be ruined..so yes he has a right to be upset but not at Kenya.
How trifling is Rachel for doing Garrett...and he treats her like crap. I hope he tells Kenya about her girl so she can be sure to watch whatever she says to her.
Great update sweetie...you are on a roll!
Author's Response: Rachel is a trifling chick....and yeah Donovan is angry...but not at her Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/01/10 01:53 am
He did the right thing in walking out, because he was getting too worked up. I'm glad he kissed her before he left. Nice update.
Author's Response: Tried to be realistic
Date: 17/01/10 01:41 am
Well they finally did the horizontal tango!! Ms. Kenya wwas ready for her man and he was ready for her too!! That were hawt together!!
Now if they could keep Garrett out of their business and crazy David away from them , they just might have a chance at a real relationship!
They got some fight ahead but hopefully they will make it through ook!!!
Good job sweetie..sexy, hawt and kinda sweet!
Author's Response: I'm glad you approved Nene... Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/01/10 03:00 am
Is it just me or are both David and Garrett giving off some wierd and 'freaky' vibes...yikes!!!
David appears to lust after and loathe Kendra with equal measures of intensity...he wants to destroy her career, yet the way he refers to her physical attributes gives me pause...and makes my skin crawl...I hope that Kendra is able to bring him down while exonerating her name and reputation once the true origins of 'the cream' are revealed...she just has to be smart about it...and let the element of surprise work to her advantage...
Garrett is just pitiful...he acts more like a jilted girlfriend than a jealous teammate...what's his real deal...is he really so threatened by the possibility of sharing his 'limelight' with another up-and-comer...he's just a sad case...and it's just beginning the troubles he's probably going to cause...I hope he gets his too...SOON...
I hope that Kendra and Donovan can weather this storm together...and I hope that infamous 'cream' and its usage does not come between them...they are so good for each other...
On a personal note...thanks again for your prayers and well wishes during my time of bereavement...it was very much appreciated...
Author's Response:
Good, I'm glad David is making your skin crawl, he's one of those, I hate you creepy old guys... at least thats what I'm seeing.. As for Garrett, pure jerk!
Thanks for reading and I hope you're feeling a little better.
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 15/01/10 08:29 pm
OMG!! Finally!!! And whoo..Donovan put it down!! Kendra..you little slut..hehehe..initiated it! That was completely unexpected. I thought Donovan was gonna grow old before she gave up the goodies.
Nice!!!
Author's Response: I wasn't going to put him through that. Lol... Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/01/10 01:34 am
I swear Garrett is a fool. get over the jealousy and mind your own business.
Author's Response: That would be nice wouldn't it.
[Report This]Date: 14/01/10 05:24 am
When is she going to tell him about the cream? That's all I want to know.
Author's Response: In this next update. She will tell him.
Date: 14/01/10 04:59 am
Wonderful chapter. She finally gave in, and now everything is going to start crumbling around them. Her friend is dense if she doesn't realize she is being used!
Author's Response: Thanks girl. Yeah, classic, right? Her friend is really crazy.
[Report This]Date: 14/01/10 03:13 am
that was hawt.
Author's Response: Thanks Darlene... Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/01/10 03:01 am
It's about time. The lovin' was good. They will be good together. I can't believe Garrett is so petty. Man, get over yourself. I have a feeling a lot is going to happen and soon. Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Some times slow is good... LOL... Garrett is a jerk... Yep, it's all getting ready to go down...
[Report This]Date: 14/01/10 02:54 am
I liked, I liked so much, I'm off to read it again. Although I do have a request. Could you write more next time, I mean Donovan's a big ole strong boy, I'm sure he's up for seconds, thirds, fourths, etc. etc.
A
Author's Response: Arabelle, the sun still has to shine... :) LOL... I will write more, just for you Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/01/10 02:47 am
Great chapter. Wonder what G-Stew (he he) is gonna do?
Author's Response: LOL.. Thanks for reading and G-stew is crazy...
Date: 14/01/10 02:41 am
owwwwwww hot caliente
That was a great chapter.
Garrett trouble but my boy D finally got to made love to his girl.
Author's Response: Thanks Cherry. I'm glad you enjoyed the freaky... LOL.. Garrett is gonna get his soon... Reviewer: Cherry Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/01/10 02:17 am