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Title: Your Personal Trainer

I smell a set up.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading ms lady!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/10 04:19 am

Title: A kiss of Coffee

They seem very compatible.  Thanks

Author's Response:

I love compatible couples....

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Date: 17/03/10 03:59 am

Title: Miami Nightlife

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading...

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/10 03:53 am

Title: They Meet

Thanks for a great start.  They meet.  I am sure that Donovan will get lucky this time.

Author's Response: He will get his HEA

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/10 03:36 am

Title: Epilogue

Just started reading this today and finished it today.  It was a great story.   

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write it.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/10 05:05 am

Title: Epilogue

I enjoyed Don and Ken's story. 

Thank you so much for sharing them with us.

I am sorry to hear that your health has not been all that up to standards.

I wish you wellness and continued writings.

 



Author's Response: I am feeling much, much better, Praise the Lord... I think I should be good from here on out!   Thanks for still reading and liking my characters.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/03/10 10:28 am

Title: Epilogue

Loved this story. Awesome ending!!!! Sniff!! sniff!!! Sad to see it come to an end. Sniff!!

Author's Response: Oh, all good things come to an end eventually.  there will be more soon.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/10 09:31 pm

Title: Epilogue

I'll see you down the road. Wonderful ending.



Author's Response: Thanks you ma'am... I'll be back soon.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/10 07:32 pm

Title: Epilogue

wow all that so sweet and you did a good job caputring john cena as this charcter.

Author's Response: Thanks ma'am...

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/10 05:56 pm

Title: Epilogue

Beautiful sweeeie...perfect ending to their whirlwind relationship!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Nene... truly a whirlwind...

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/10 02:26 pm

Title: Epilogue

Thank you, for that.

I hope to see them soon.

When can  we expect the next story.



Author's Response: You're welcome.  You might see them again. Not soon, but you will .  Umm the next story should be out in two weeks.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/03/10 02:25 pm

Title: Epilogue

Most excellent!!!  I love Donovan!!

Author's Response: He's great... I liked him too. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/03/10 08:37 am

Title: Epilogue

Dsmooth thank you so much. I love it love it. Hope to see Donovan and Kendra in near future. So when is your next story coming out.

Author's Response: Hopefully within the next two weeks.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/10 08:15 am

Title: When We Kiss

I'm so sad. I didn't want this to end.

I so love Donovan and Kendra.

Can't wait for your next story.



Author's Response: Thank you.  I really enjoyed writing this story.  I plan on writing an epilogue

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/03/10 03:53 am

Title: When We Kiss

Oh no!!! It's over! Dsmoothone, I don't want it to end...*Sighs* Fine, I guess all good stories have to end sometime, but this was a wonderful story. I loved the ending. I love Kendra's daddy, he all like it's not up to me, it's up to her. ROTFL! Love it!

But this was a good story. I'm a Donovan lover and you have made me proud. I think those two are perfect together. Again thank you so much for sharing.(Can't wait for more... That means I want another story by you!) ROTFL!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and enjoying and leaving constructive and thoughtful reviews.  I am definitely going to be writing more and was asked to write an epilogue for them.  Will do....

Reviewer: PasionK Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 07:25 am

Title: When We Kiss

I have loved Donovan from the begining.  Donovan is shiznit!!!

 

 



Author's Response: I'm glad I did him justice.  I appreciate you reading and staying with me. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 06:17 am

Title: When We Kiss

Yeah!!! Awesome update. Glad coach resigned after being caught red handed, the sneaky dog. Garrett transferred--Good riddance to bad trash. Rachel seemed jealous of Kendra's happiness and I don't think she has Kendra's back. She definitely NOT a friend.



Author's Response: Rachel was after the all mighty dollar!  Thanks for reading and enjoying it.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 06:06 am

Title: When We Kiss

Yes, I did...and the ending was perfect...and ultra-romantic and in keeping with the man that Donovan is...how sweet!!!  They are soulmates...and it was fated since the first chapter of this wonderful fic...thank you so much for bringing it to us...can't wait for more of KA's...could it be Chad and Dani next up to bat???

P.S...Rachel is a real witch...may she in Garrett live long together in misery in Texas...far away from Donovan and Kendra...



Author's Response: Chad and Dani are definitely up to bat next.  Kendra and Donovan made me smile... Garrett and Rachel may show up again in the future... hmmm... Thanks for reading and leaving me thoughful and constructive reviews...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 05:59 am

Title: When We Kiss

Excellent ending

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and I appreciate your reviews! 

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 04:38 am

Title: When We Kiss

Great ending

Author's Response: Thanks Gale.  I appreciate you taking the time to read it...

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 04:01 am

Title: When We Kiss

wow that was such a sweet thing he did bring out her family ask her father hand in marrige  to be with his daughter i love it all. you done a good job with donovan said to see this story go but good ending. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading it and I appreciate you.  I hope I did your John Cena justice as Donovan.  I watched a lot of Monday Night RAW to get his voice and cadence and attitude right.  Another one is coming soon...

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 03:35 am

Title: When We Kiss

I enjoyed it. Thanks for a beautiful story!!

Author's Response: Thanks ma'am.  I appreciate you reviewing when you could and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Date: 13/03/10 02:53 am

Title: When We Kiss

GREAT ENDING. AN EPILOGUE SHOULD FOLLOW. PLEASE CONSIDER DURING AN EPILOGUE.

Author's Response: I am considering doing one.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 02:16 am

Title: When We Kiss

Awww...so sweet. I love Donovan!! He's going to be a wonderful husband because he pays attention to details. Very important. Kendra is a good match because he understands her and her career. Lovely couple.

Nice job!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your constructive criticisms over the last couple of months.  I really appreciated it. Glad you enjoyed the ending.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 01:32 am

Title: When We Kiss

I loved it!!!  Sorry I didn't get to offer a review after every chapter, but this is just as awesome a story as the first one!!  I am so glad that Donovan got his HEA!

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks do much for reading it.  I'm glad I made you happy for Donovan.  He was a great character to write.  I appreciate you taking the time to review when you could.  I'm glad its over, but I'll miss them... :)

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/03/10 01:13 am

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