I liked this. It reminded me of The Skeleton Key but not so eerie and yuckie...wait......the killing four women and using their blood for ink was pretty out there. I guess love knows no boundaries and can cross over into anything. Even though I felt bad for Brody, I wanted Lizzie with Brutus more...sorry but Brutus was fine!!!!
Reviewer: Vie Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/10/09 04:31 am
I'd like to know why (other than the obvious) Brutus killed those women. What was his schtick behind it all? Just murdering because or was he pulling some mad scientist type stuff? LOL. I guess I'm saying he's fine and I'd like to know how he went crazy and were there sexytimes involved. LOL.
Great job. The dialogue in this was stellar as was the description. Lizzie is die-hard, ride-or-die for Brutus. How sexy. LOL. He's older (in more ways than one) yet they had this 'connection' that grew and grew. The fact that you used a Lenny Kravitz lyric just blows me as I did the same for my Grindhouse challenge! LOL We love Lenny! We love Van Hunt (who wrote 'Mean Sleep' initially btw). LOL Great job and wonderful for the Challenge :)
Author's Response:
Brutus was plain crazy.Lol. He had issues with his parents and he felt like no one listned to him except Lizzie.
I'm so glad you saw the connection they had instead of just "Damn, they're crazy". Even though they are.
Lizzie is def a ride or die chick literally. She's all about Brutus.
Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 12/10/09 11:31 pm
Oooh great first half. I love the dialogue and the setting. I love the backstory. Lizzie is wicked! Poor Brody. Great job :)
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 12/10/09 11:28 pm
Loverly cast. I love ole dude from 'Eureka'! :)
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 12/10/09 11:26 pm
This was a sweet, yet creepy.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 12/10/09 04:57 am
I enjoyed reading it. I figured she knew this character the way she was talking about him. She gets to be with both of them and no one will know, they will think she married Brody.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 11/10/09 11:01 pm