Hopefullly, her "Abductor" will help her. Sally is about to learn a much needed lesson. Not sure if she thought out her escape plan.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/05/10 10:55 pm
This is good,good,good!!! I'm hungry for more!!! the lead male character sounds very hot!! and is that Mya as Sally!! great update
Reviewer: Kellyp Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 09:13 pm
Nice story... Now Sally needs her savage to help her now. I hope she doesn't get hurt by these white, dirty men.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 09:00 pm
I hope he didn't go to far and can rescue her before anything happens. Great update!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 07:56 pm
He speaks English. They are going to be fighting all the time, lol. Nice update. I'm enjoying your story!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 05:41 pm
Sally has someone she can turn to with Elizabeth.. Her captor and her are already making a connection. Those other women look like they are going to give her a lot of heartache!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 05:36 pm
I am playing catch up. Great chapter!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 05:04 pm
I can't wait to see what happens next! Please keep writing.
Reviewer: Tahani Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 04:11 pm
What an excellent way to start the saturday morning. OK, poor Sally. I never expected Nakotah to leave her in the woods like that. I admire Sally's spunk though. She's not one to sit and cry over her situation. I hope she can slip away from dem red necks before they get any ideas. Hopefully she can kill one of them in the process.
thanks again for the update.
Reviewer: Alphabitch Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 03:56 pm
Thanks for the update. Poor Sally, now she's really in the hands of evil people. I hope Nakotah is still close, so he can help her. I know he says he doesn't care, but he wouldn't always be watching her, plus he would have let the other indian men have her by now. Lovin this story.
Reviewer: Tootall Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 01:12 pm
this was cute and short keep it coming keep that fine indian men in your new banner
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 04:31 am
I am very intrested in this story I like western tales love the update!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Reviewer: Miss_Carmel_smootee Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/05/10 03:44 am
This was too short!!! Please update soon!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 28/05/10 09:46 pm
Hi
I'm really enjoying this story can I ask how old Sally and Abductor lol are?
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :D
Sally is 18
"Abductor" is 23
Reviewer: Neko Signed [Report This]Date: 28/05/10 05:50 pm
Alright here's my review because I want the next chapter ASAP. Love the story so far. The was a lifetime movie called Stolen women captured hearts. Where a two white women were abducted, and one of them fell inlove with her kipnapper. All throught the movie I wished for a BW/NAM version.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :D
Its funny because I've seen the movie you are referring to & I do see some similarities but I'm not basing my storying off it, its like a mixture of stuff I've seen plus my own little wicked imagination lol
BW/NAM = <3
Reviewer: Alphabitch Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/05/10 05:12 pm
Great start... i'm intrigued.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 28/05/10 03:20 pm
Yay your back YAY!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! & YAY I'M BACK in the flesh lol
[Report This]Date: 28/05/10 08:33 am
Thank you for the update, I love the shock that she expressed at his being able to speak english. Why was that old woman so rough with her?
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! The old woman was so rough because usually in those situations back then when captive women were taken into the tribe...not EVERYONE was happy you know? Sally is very lucky because she could've been killed like so many other captives were.
Date: 28/05/10 08:11 am
Woo I love the story so far and I see you used rick mora
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
Rick Mora is one hunk ;}
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/05/10 07:46 am
Welcome back and thank you for the update. Loved it!! Hmm, wonder why he took her??? Is she gonna be a slave for them now??? Unfortunately I don't have adobe photoshop but I do hope you find someone who can help you out. Even if you don't get a new banner still love the old one.
Looking forward to the updates.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review 'baha_malo" :D I can always count on you for a review! I pray I find someone too..my shabby banner needs a makeover lol And you'll see what's in store for little miss Sally ;] Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/05/10 05:53 am
Glad to see a new chapter. Sally makes me laugh, and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Sally cracks me up too..sometimes I wonder what my life would be like w/out her lol
[Report This]Date: 28/05/10 05:48 am
This continues to be one of my favorite stories on the site. I like that it is a historical which is refreshing. Please hurry with the next chapter.
Author's Response: THANK YOU SOO MUCH :DD Im thrilled you like it! & I'm working on that new chapter tommorow:D
[Report This]Date: 28/05/10 04:05 am
Woo Hoo an update .I love this story. can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Im trying lol I just deleted 6000+ pages out of my email! soo ill work on the chapter tommorow when i get back from the movies
[Report This]Date: 28/05/10 04:04 am
I like this story so far and wish you can update soon man i keep reading the few chapters over and over..!
Author's Response:
AWW..this review definately made me decide to post another chapter. I'm soo sorry for the wait and I know how it is to have to read the same chapters over & over again! I should have a new chapter up later tonight :D
Reviewer: Charmella Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 05:51 am
This is a good story, could you update soon.
Thanks
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/05/10 05:22 am