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Title: Chapter 3

What do you mean "don't make me have to" *rolls eyes* we've been waiting almost till kingdom come for u to produce a update lol Finally! Thanks please continue asap!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/03/10 06:39 am

Title: Chapter 3

Love wild west stories since I was a kid so I was really happy to see this.  I was even more happy when I read the first 3 chapters and hope that you continue updating. 

Can't wait!!!!

Reviewer: Penny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/01/10 01:49 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I almost forgot about this story! Glad I found it again. I wonder what they're going to give her to wear and how she'll react. 

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/01/10 10:48 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I am looking forward to see her dress atire. I can imagine her response when she see that they wear very little.haha

Reviewer: E-B-R-Forever Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/12/09 08:09 pm

Title: June 25, 1847

Wow, this is something out of an old Cow-boys and lndian film. AWESOME

Reviewer: E-B-R-Forever Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/12/09 07:57 pm

Title: June 3, 1847

I love interracial story's set back in time. This is definitely good. I hope you continue to post updates frequently. 

Reviewer: E-B-R-Forever Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/12/09 07:41 pm

Title: Chapter 3

What's a girl to do? Hopefully, Sally's new friend will help her while she's being held against her will. I think she is going to enjoy her abductor Lol!  Waiting patiently for the next update. And writers block "Be Gone"!!!

Reviewer: LIL HELPER Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/09 03:44 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I was so excited to see this update. I was really missing this story. It was short but sweet and I hope you update soon. Who is Sally's abductor and why did he take her??? Hope your muse is getting into full gear to stir your creative juices. Loved it.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/09 08:59 am

Title: Chapter 3

I really love this story. please continue writing and update soon.

Reviewer: MsJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/12/09 10:56 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I understand that she was scared, but she will be better off with the Comanhes than she would as slave.  Now she's free and that Man was fine!!!  Me likey!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/12/09 08:07 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Interesting story. Please continue, soon.

Reviewer: Tootall Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/12/09 12:47 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Ohhhhhhhhhhh, I wonder what will happen next. great follow up chapter and good things come to those who wait :-D

Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/12/09 03:48 am

Title: June 3, 1847

This is really good! keep up the great work, cant wait to meet more of this 'abductor' character..he looks hot in the banner! keep us posted

Author's Response: Thanks deandra! I'll keep you posted

Reviewer: deandra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 3

today was my first day reading this story and I enjoyed it a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks darlene433! I'm thrilled you enjoyed..on your first day

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 10:37 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Well you do not have to wait long..Love Sally inner thoughts and this was a great update..



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 07:05 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I really like this story a lot...I sure hope you continue it. I love Sally reaction to be manhandled by the Comnachi women, sista was not going down w/o a fight..lol

I know there is chemistry between her and the abductor ..I hope that Sally and the tribesman will let it flourish!!

I want to know more about the white woman and her life with them as well..

This is quite an orginal story..cannot wait for more!!Good job sweetie..



Author's Response: Thank you! trust you've haven't heard the last of 'Golden Hair' yet lol

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 04:36 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Yay...you're back...sorry for your writer's block...

Seems Sally has her own preconceived predjudices and notions about these 'savages'...it will be very interesting for her to get to know the culture of these people who abducted her...I know she has no reason to even like any of them...afterall she witnessed firsthand their 'savagery'...but I actually think that this may be the best thing that has happened to her so far in her young life...she has never know true 'freedom'...and she's about to embark on a journey with people who have a reverence for nature and all things in it...

I like that Sally retains her fighting spirit in the face of uncertainty and all things unfamiliar despite of being fearful for her life and her virtue...can't wait to see more interaction between her and the 'Aductor'...seems that he and his family are held in high esteem in their tribe...

Great story...please don't make us wait so long again for the next update...



Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I wanted to convey Sally's predjudice, because we all know we have them..but especially back then in the olden days lol We'll see if she changes her mind ;]

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 03:54 pm

Title: June 3, 1847

Loving it, waiting for more!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 03:35 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Love the update!! Sally has spunk. I loved it.

 

Paw



Author's Response: Thank you! Sally's a fiesty little firecracker lol

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 01:58 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I've missed this story. Can't wait to know more about Sally's "abductor"

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I can't wait to write the 'abductor' lol

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 01:19 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great update.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 01:04 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Well, this story is coming right along.  Sally seems pretty brave.  Fighting her abductor before he knocked the living ___ out of her. LOL.  It looks like her abductor is the son of the elder who was talking.  And now Honovi is going to help her get settled in her new home.  Do the spoils go to the victor?  If so, is Sally going to be relegated to the abductor's home? 

I've got lots of questions, so I hope you have enough reviews to give us another Update. LOL.

Nyeesha



Author's Response: Thanks Nyeesha! I'll keep 'em coming! lol I'm on christmas break

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 11:48 am

Title: Chapter 3

I soooo love your writing style. You give just enough detail without bombarding us with useless verbiage. I can't wait to see how Sally comes to terms with her current situation. Please update soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I too, hate when authors add too much crap to a story it completely diluates(sp?) like water! lol I'm reading one right now

Reviewer: Monique Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 08:01 am

Title: Chapter 3

I have missed this story. Sally I don't blame her for being cautious.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 07:00 am

Title: June 25, 1847

Please, please update. Missing this story.

Author's Response: I promise I'm going to update soon.. I just have to get over this horrible 'writer's block' syndrome its torture!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/09 01:55 am

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