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Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Bella Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/06/10 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 1

This is really good. Please update again.

Thanks

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/10 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 7

very cute. i like it, and the fact that callijae is so saucy. haha definately cannot wait for the next update!

Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/01/10 04:55 am

Title: Chapter 7

Just reading this story and I find it to be wonderful...These are what High Schoolers do...reminds me of my days in HS.

Nice!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/01/10 04:18 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Well done, Huzzah! This brought back memories of my high school days.

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Date: 18/01/10 09:32 am

Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Chamber _Administrators Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/01/10 08:57 am

Title: Chapter 7

I loved the update.  I can't wait to see her feelings change for Lucas.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/01/10 06:14 am

Title: Chapter 7

That was a really nice letter of apology. His friends are not going to make it easy for him to be friends with her. Nice update!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/01/10 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 5

Um yeah so I still want to know why Lucas is such a punk. HE feels bad for calling her a bitch? He shouldn't cause she's a BITCH. Lashay is a good friend because she stayed very calm while Cali went crazy on her. This stuff is insane, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: MIE Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/11/09 08:32 am

Title: Chapter 5

Great update. Cali is a mess. Just because she made an apology doesn't mean it will be accepted especially if it seems insincere. What's up with her dad coming back now???

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/11/09 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 5

Nice update! That was a poor excuse for an apology!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 3

That was just plain ole mean of Calijae...What comes around goes around.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 10:02 pm

Title: Chapter 5

This chapter was good. Update soon.

Reviewer: Writing4Eternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 05:08 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Lucas is a sweet caring guy but I wish he would drop the pot it is so not appealing and he can do so much better with other friends.  Keep Andrew but drop the other potheads.

Cali yeah she could have done better with the apology but damn how can you apologize when you have to injest the contact of the weed that was all over his clothes and body.  How his parents don't know he is smoking is beyond me unless of course that is what his mother always wants to talk to him about but backs down on doing so.

Great update can't wait for the next one.  Thanks

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 04:55 pm

Title: Chapter 5

All of this children need help.  Cali I am sure would not want to be treated like she treats everyone else.  It ain't cool being a bitch and she want to be a better person.  Just because her left her family years ago, doesn't mean she should blame the world.  I can't believe that her mother is taking him back, so weak!!!  All of the drug use going, his parent don't know when their child is high.  Why wasn't Reggie arrested for assault?  Like I said these children need help!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 04:09 pm

Title: Chapter 4

AAHhh I thought Lashay might be the one to let her know she wasn't the bees knees. 

Nice segue to the turning points in Cali's life by the way.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/11/09 05:07 am

Title: Chapter 1

So far, I find nothing to like about Cali. Wonder if she'll really apologize to Luc? His humiliation made me squirm. When will the tables turn?

And if you get so drunk that you can't remember what you did, then maybe you shouldn't drink. I'm looking at you, Cali. Plus, she wasn't drunk when she went off on the guys initially. ugh. great story, though.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/09 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 4

I like the way Lashay came and told her friend she needed to apologize to lucas and that she was a bitch straight up.

Though I am happy that Andrew got a little balls and tried to stand up for his friends....ummm calling a black girl a evil bitch succubus while @ school around others was not such a good idea especially when his friends are not really his friends as you can see and bailed on him.

I am glad though that Cali came and asked Rodney to stop trying to kill the child cause that would have been ugly he has only been with a girl once he has some more living to do.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/09 02:04 am

Title: Chapter 4

Good for her friend for calling her out on her behavior. Rodney is not good for her can't she see that, and  she has all of these schools looking at her, it would be in her best interest to drop him. I was hoping she would have at least checked on Andrew to make sure he wasn't seriously hurt. Great update

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/09 01:39 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oh that was not pretty not pretty at all.  I am like Lashay I found no amusment in that little display she made of telling Lucas she was not interested.

I never understand the girls that think they are so much better then someone else.  What would it be if the tables were turned.  That was just down right ugly but that is the way of teen peer pressure I guess.  

I can picture Cali being that way but it was in plain black and white right there.

Good update thanks.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/09 01:26 am

Title: Chapter 4

Interesting update. Glad Lashay got a chance to speak to Cali but I don't know what difference it would make as she is keeping company of like mind who inflence her. Poor Andrew trying to defend his friend got more than he bargained for. Cali didn't even check to see if he was ok before she left with Rodney and his crew. Rodney just isn't coming off as a good guy to me. I guess we'll see what happens next.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/09 12:54 am

Title: Chapter 2

I love her mom.  She sound like a strong determined woman that wants what's best for her daughter.  I wonder if that is so in other aspects like her dating outside her race.

Great update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/09 12:40 am

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting I like the start.  I am not sure as to why the girls are being as they are I guess the key work is girls but I like and am interested to read more.

thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/09 12:08 am

Title: Chapter 3

She's a mean person! I don't see what Lucas see in her ass!

Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/10/09 12:47 am

Title: Chapter 3

 

Poor Lucas!

I'm really enjoying your story telling and prose. I like how neither one is depicted as being perfect but at this point Cali is...well she's a bitch. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you're going with this :)

Reviewer: Valhalla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/10/09 02:21 pm

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