I hope this Calijae person is not the love interest, and just a fluke..and Luke will find an acceptable girl...but the new girl will have to try hard because Cali did a number on him...
Calijae has no redeemable qualities...and I wouldn't be to sad if she got hit by a bus.
Poor Lucas....find someone better...you don't need simple minded Calijae...
She's a straight up biyotch.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/10/09 01:22 pm
Cali and her friends are cruel. Lucas is better off without her, but in the end he will have to come to her rescue somehow. I am loving your story.
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[Report This]Date: 26/10/09 05:17 am
Loved the words of wisdom mom gave her.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 26/10/09 04:57 am
She didn't give him her number. Surprised he fell for that, with the way she was treating him!
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[Report This]Date: 26/10/09 04:24 am
Wow!!! I am totally impressed... Your style of writing is so in depth. I mean I love this.
I really like the way you portray Cali and Lucas letting us see parts of them..I have to say I feel really bad for Lucas. He is persistent as all get out and really if Cali was paying attention she would get that, but she is not seeing it or him right now.
Normally I would hate Cali, she likes to play games which is mean. But you showed the other sides of her, the way she is with her mom and the way she looks out for/thinks of her friends...
If/when they get together, it isn't going to be easy or pretty at first, is it? I can't wait to see where you take them from here.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoy the writing style, and I'm especially excited at the fact that you picked up on Cali's other side, very impressive and thanks for the read and review. Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/10/09 02:35 am
Other than Lucas, Andrew and Calijae's mum, I'd like to line up everyone and give them the mother of all bitchslaps.
Especially Calijae. She's going more and more out of Bitchville and into C-U-Next Tuesday territory every time she's rude to Lucas. He doesn't deserve it, and she and her friends are being the very stereotypes that they think that they're above - loud, mean black females.
Author's Response: I'd like to thank you for recognizing that. Often times we look at people and place ourselves above them, when in reality we're in the same boat. That's actually one of the messages I wanted to come through in this story. We're not always as "above it all" as we think we are...oh I almost forgot. Thanks for the read and review Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/10/09 02:16 am
Cali is extremely arrogant and mean, she and her friends play to many games that could be very dangerous. I hope that their attitudes improve. Thanks
Author's Response: As you can see there is a trend. Thank you for the read and review. I agree that their is definitely an attitude adjustment needed, but we'll see what happens
[Report This]Date: 26/10/09 01:56 am
Interesting story so far. I understand the girls having fun at other's expense at times but after a while that sh*t aint funny anymore. She could have delivered her message in a different manner and still get it across. All the games just not funny. Hope Lucas get his act together and stop smoking weed and leave her alone. If its meant to be, it will happen. Cali is harsh and all she does is embarrass him and thinks its ok to do that. What if the shoe is on the other foot how would she feel?? Who told them it was ok to stump on other people's feelings???? When she has an attack of conscience, I hope she regrets every miserable thing she did. I don't even know if I want to see her and Lucas together.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing this for me. I'm so glad to see that Cali's attitude has drawn out the same emotions in other people that it brewed in me when writing for her.
Date: 26/10/09 01:50 am
Well Cali seems to be the Queen Bitch of the group. Hope aomething doesn't come back to bite her on her ass. Next chapter please!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review as well as for reading. I'm actually really excited about the next chapter. I have it all planned out in my head, I just have to put it to text and it'll be uploaded ASAP. Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/10/09 12:35 am
Cali is an evil, evil, evil, evil bitch with dumbfuck friends. I don't like any of them. I don't like Luke's friends either. Luke and Andrew are so far the only people who I don't want to meet a tragic end. That was all really negative but I like the story so far, and I'm excited for an update.
Author's Response: lol I'm starting to notice a trend. Cali is a...um...special individual, but we must admit we all know someone like her. Thank you for reading, and for reviewing
Date: 26/10/09 12:11 am
They sound like a conceited group of girls. Did she give a fake number? Good start!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/10/09 12:07 am
Cali pisses me off. She is no one special and Lucas needs some balls. Frankly,
I'm hooked..update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read the story, and even more for taking the extra effort to comment on it. I greatly appreciate it and I totally agree with you, Lucas does need to grow some balls, but what's life without growth. It'll come I promise :) Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/10/09 11:52 pm