I found this site through a writer on Literotica... I liked this story. If you ever need an editor, email me. email@example.com I have an in progress story similar but no horror yet... "obsessed with Ember."Reviewer: Black_maestra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/05/14 05:23 am
That was one sick bastard but somehow I knew she was going to make it out alive...um he should be in prison for eternity.Reviewer: R. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/06/10 04:25 am
This was a pretty good story. Damn, Tyler was a sick Bastard. He is not getting out of jail in this life time. Once they pin the other murders on him, he might get the death sentence, depending on the state he lives in. The only way for a sequel would be for him to plead insanity and escape the nut house. I'm thinking a good 6-8 years later, where she's moved on with her life and has a steady relationship.Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:45 pm
Thank goodness Keisha survived!!!!
For a second there I was screaming "NO, NO, NO!!!" when she called Julie instead of 911...but I guess that made more sense because they'd probably think she was hysterically crazy with her wild story of being kidnapped and tortured by some psychotic frat boy...but her girl came through and got her help!!!!
I hope they give him life without any possibility of parole or even the death penalty because I fear that Keisha nor any young will never be truly safe again while that psycho draws breath...
Moral to the story...be aware...and very afraid...and so very wary...because the things that go bump in the night in the real world are far more dangerous and sinister than our supernatural imaginings....
Love this story, girl...you rocked this out of the box!!!!Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 02:34 pm
Loved the update. Glad Keisha escaped. Can't believe no one was suspicious of Tyler. Thank goodness Julie listened to her. What a psycho!!! Hopefully she won't be so trusting in the future.Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 03:49 am
i love this story keep it coming!!!oh and please dont let her dieReviewer: ann Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 07:34 am
Go, Keisha, go...I love this girl's fight...she makes up for lack of smarts with sheer will and determination to survive this nightmare...bet that fool wasn't expecting that...if she doesn't get away...I hope she goes out with in a blaze of glory...leave him with the impression of "but damn...she was a hard one..."
Looking forward to more and Happy Halloween!!!Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 03:35 am
Interesting. Glad so got him with the spike. I hope she escapes and he gets captured. He's definitely a sicko!!!Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 01:20 am
Scary and horrific indeed! Awesome, I hope Keisha gets payback though.Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/10/09 04:58 pm
The horrors of the real world are much more powerful than any fanciful creations of a writer's imagining...
Keisha...poor thing...yes, she was very foolish to leave that party with Tyler without telling anyone where they were supposed to be going...she let her guard down...who knows...was it horniness...naivety...not having enough guile about the real dangers in the world...but should she pay for her temerity with her life...to be tortured so...we are all human...and so very falliable...how many of us really 'know' someone else...that why it's always on us to just be 'aware' of your surroundings and the company that you keep...I for one...feel very sorry for her...
Can't wait to see what happens next...I'm praying for a small miracle for her that she can somehow escape this psychopath's web...Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/10/09 11:29 pm
Wow, interesting update. She was a stupido going into that car alone with him when she didn't know him from Adam. She was too caught up trying to get into his pants and didn't pay attention to what was happening. She should have been suspicious when he missed the turn and where was her cell phone???? She should have tried to call her friend when she was stranded with him. I don't feel sorry for her becaused she walked right into that. Where was her common sense??? He was a total stranger to her. She didn't even tell her friend that she left with him. Please don't prolong her misery if he's gonna kill her. Is she gonna be saved??? Can she escape??? How long has Tyler been doing this??? Please let him get caught and if he kills her let her haunt him until he goes crazy.Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/10/09 01:03 am
I really fear what he's going to do to her...and she's none the wiser...she's still trying to push up on him believing him to be something he is the anthesis of...and she'll pay for her lack of forethought...getting good...looking forward to more...Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/09 05:19 am
Sick freak...why do so many young girls fall for this baloney...a charming smile...the hook...'you can trust me'...alchohol to loosen inhibitions...poor Keisha...alone and vulnerable with a sadistic monster...I'm scared for her...hopefully, there will be a lesson to be learned from this...Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/09 05:10 am