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Title: Chapter 1

Since it's been years since the last update, I don't suppose we'll get to see how this story turns out. That's really too bad, since it is well written and off to a great start. Hope the author is in good health and discontinued this story because she/he decided to publish it.

Reviewer: AvidReader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/13 06:40 pm

Title: Chapter 6

wow wonderfful story i cant wait to see how this story turns out

Reviewer: nikki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/11 03:35 am

Title: Chapter 6

Please finish this story, I really love it.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 1

Update pleeease....This story is awesome!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/05/10 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 6

Please update this story, I love it.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/10 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 6

Great story , can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/09 08:49 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Oh yeah, I'd say that was unfinished. Alrighty. Now we know. This is going to be good. I can't wait to see the sparks fly again. btw, friends don't normally get their freak on with each other. So, go to it Bradley, I'm cheering you on. :-)

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/11/09 03:52 am

Title: Chapter 6

Loved it. Hmmm, unresolved feelings and actions.........Can't wait to see what happens next. Brad just needs to step up his game if he really wants her to take him seriously.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/09 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 6

Ahhhh...so that's the unfinished business....can't for an update on the here and now...

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/09 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 6

Okay, this is getting really interesting... so they have a lot of unresolved sexual tension. hmm.  Can't wait to see what happens from here.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/09 08:26 pm

Title: Chapter 6

That damn Adrienne ruined what was about to be some hot butt naked sex!!  When are they both going to admit that they are in love with each other?  Oh woe is me!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/09 04:03 pm

Title: Chapter 6

They are friends who have been in denial for years. Well it's beyond that stage now.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/09 03:13 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Love it! Need more!

Author's Response: Glad you like it!! Coming up!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/10/09 04:47 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Yeah they have a deep history 2gether.  I get the sense that Bradley can't wait for their "unfinished business" to be resolved...I can't either.  I love these two characters...

Author's Response:

Yes they do. I'm glad you like the characters.

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/10/09 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 5

He wants her by his side and doesn't know how to say it. Loved the update!!



Author's Response: Thanks! brad does no what he wants but like most men he doesn't know how to go about doing it.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/09 11:03 pm

Title: Chapter 5

What bittersweet chapter. There is so much love between the 2 of them. Lovely. Good work.

Author's Response: Aww..thanks.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/09 07:27 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I am really enjoying this.  I wish your updates were a little longer, then I wouldn't fiend for them as much.  Two thumbs up!

Author's Response: I wish they were too. LOL But my brain starts out as a lot but as soon as it gets on paper its an abridged version. glad you're still enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/09 04:32 pm

Title: Chapter 5

This is about to get deep!!

Author's Response:

I think so!

Reviewer: Nakia Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/10/09 02:32 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Bow chica wow wow!!!  I love their communication style with each other...

Author's Response: LOLOL Me too!

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/10/09 06:10 am

Title: Chapter 4

she knows exactly what he's talking about which is why she's so upset!! Loved the update!!



Author's Response: You know how us women are....

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/10/09 05:56 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I am doing the cabbage patch following it up with the running man.  Corny, I know but I totally love this story!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/10/09 04:51 pm

Title: Chapter 4

i love this story n thx 4 the quick updates keep it up



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to keep updating pretty quickly.

Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/09 04:12 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Such a cute and delicious story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully it will keep getting better.

Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/10/09 11:22 am

Title: Chapter 4

Aww snap!! It's getting good now. Shucky, ducky, quack quack!!

Author's Response: LOLOLOLOL

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/09 07:40 am

Title: Chapter 3

This story is so cute!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/10/09 01:44 am

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