Freakin AWESOME!!!
Reviewer: Sheyahne Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/07/16 12:40 am
Excellent story!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/06/12 08:11 am
As much as I love Jason (and Sonny, too), that's what he gets for marrying Elizabeth of all people. On to chapter 2.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/06/12 10:48 pm
Ahhhhhh this is the best story ever...now I understand why you on almost everyones fav author list..
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/11 11:56 am
EVANGELINE WILLIAMSON WRITTEN AS A BADASS GANSTA?! YEAH!!!! Whoooooo...this was good!!! Worth the read!!!
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 09:38 pm
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! What a TWIST!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 09:14 pm
OOOOOO...CLINK-BOOM!!! All the right storytelling elements...I love it. The love scene was FIYA....I can really picture Lorenzo and Evangeline together...GOOD JOB!!
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 08:20 pm
Great writing technique, dahling!! I was fully expecting to see a love scene at the beginning but you wisely filled me in on what happened through flashback...*hand clapping* GOOD JOB!!!
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 07:47 pm
*going to take a FREEZING COLD shower* LAWWWDDDDD HAVE MERCY JESUS!!! This was HOT!!! Can't wait to see when....lol
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 07:14 pm
Ah yes!! The right amount of anticipation and suspense...a true "who-done-it" and "Are-they-gonna-do-it?"
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 06:54 pm
Great start except I'm a Sonny Corinthos fan so killing him was quite shocking...lol
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 06:43 pm
I used to be a huge fan of both One Life To Live and General Hospital but my viewership for GH became sporatic after Lucky got kidnapped and I finally just stopped watching because it was too stupid. I always hated Sonny and Jason as well so that first chapter made me smile a bit. I mean, why are you a gangster if all you want to do is sell coffee?
I stopped watching OLTL after CRAVE and Tangeline went into the dump and I just want to say that If either of these shows had half the intrigue and sexiness you put into this story I would proabably still be watching them. I wish to GOD Evangeline would have displayed even a little of the backbone you gave her here. It would have been glorious.
Anyways, I loved this and I'm going to read the next part right now.
Reviewer: LadyofSpring Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/05/09 11:26 pm
great story...on to the next one. i was going to read it first and realized that i had to read this one to get the back story. thanks!
Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/09 07:39 am
I just LOVED this story! Its late in the game but I was so shocked with the ending!
Reviewer: Maverick Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/09 10:31 am
Wow this is amazing so far! I love the idea of Van and Lo or even Van and RJ. Great job!
Reviewer: cassion Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/11/08 04:18 am
This story is so hot. I love the Evangeline/Lorenzo pairing. Please do continue this wonderful story.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/09/08 04:06 pm
This can't be the end. YOu have to do a sequal to this story girl it was great love it. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 11:17 pm
Dam van is one crazy chick but she know what she wanted. she wanted to be with him but she won't allow it. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 11:15 pm
I think lucky has no choice but to keep her around. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 11:09 pm
Hell naw van is a mob boss. So thail ric work for her all this time dam thiis is crazy. Poor loz in love this woman and she played you. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 11:07 pm
Well it was nice knowing you rj. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 11:02 pm
What info does rj has on van? So loz killed the five family dam didn't see that coming. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 11:00 pm
Dam rj first he try to kill her with the bomb and now he sent someone to beat the hell out her. He a dead man. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:57 pm
Wow I guess lucky wanted to thank thail and he gave her one hell of a thank you lol. It nice to see a different side to loz to be honest with her and he wanted to be with her. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:53 pm