RJ mess with two of the wrong chicks van and sam. I hope she shoots him in the balls thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:48 pm
I'm glad she went with loz but she right they only way she going to be safe when rj is dead for good. Poor lucky to find about sam past. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:39 pm
Rj mess up big time. Loz try to warn him mess with anything that belongs to him and you are a dead man. I think lucky is about to find out about sam past. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:35 pm
Omg is she alive. I love how loz can give her what she wanted and more. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:32 pm
Dam that was hot hot hot. "where are you take me?" to my bedroom where you belong" oooooooo love the sexy loz. I wonder what lucky next move to get to rj? thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:26 pm
Poor sam trying to live a better life and RJ just dragging her down. Where did loz take her? Me I would had took that sexy man in the car right then and there lol. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:21 pm
Dam that was hot hot hot hot hot. I love how he in control I love that about a men who can take control in the bedroom. I knew van couldn't hold back any longer look at the man lol. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:17 pm
Alexis is going to kill lucky and thail for going to RJ house. So he didn't sleep with her yet but they are going to soon i bet. thanks for the updated. What has Sam got her self into.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:13 pm
Dam is all i have to say. I think loz is going to be that guy to take that power away from her and it going to be good. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:10 pm
RJ is dump like a box of rocks. He thinks Ric works for him but he playing him big. Van right RJ plans to kill her very very soon. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:02 pm
What sam use to work for RJ dam. I love how loz was about to hand rj a butt kicking lol. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 09:58 pm
I don't know how van could resist for this long me proably been on that desk saying take me daddy lol. But loz better watch out van not like other woman. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 09:54 pm
Dam I wouldn't mind playing game with loz lol. So how did her and RJ meet and what did he mean to ric you never been marry to her? Intersting. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 09:50 pm
Lorenzo is a very naughty naughty boy. So RJ setting him up for the murders so he can run port charles intersting. Lorenzo make think it going to be easy to win van but he better think twice she know how to play the game. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 09:46 pm
What did van have in the file that piss off RJ. Well looks like RJ going to have to fight to get port charles and for his wife since loz wanted to play tap that ass with van lol. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 09:41 pm
Wow van rip alexis to shreads lol. So RJ wanted to be king of port charles i think he killed sonny and jason. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 09:37 pm
I like the charcter loz on the show GH he is one sexy beast. Who killed sonny and jason? So van and rj marry wow can't wait to read more. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 09:34 pm
I loved Evangeline and have not watched OLTL since she left. Another character was Lorenzo, I found him so sexy and intelligent. Unfortunately, he was not allowed to be on top. Love the intensity of their scene together.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/08/08 06:50 am
I knew something was up with Taila, she jumped Lucky's bones way too fast, I wonder iof she's working for RJ.
Author's Response: Hey Lady Liberty. I hope you're enjoying this story. It's a bit---different I should say. LOL. Thanks for the review and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 27/07/08 12:30 am
Lorenzo wasn't lying when he said he doesn't play games. I'll give this one ten stars.
Katrina
Author's Response: Hey Katrina. Sorry it took so long, but just wanted to say thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed the story! Reviewer: kmfranklin211 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/07/08 11:27 pm
Another great chapter. I tried to give Chapter 3 six stars but only three showed up. Didn't know how to fix it.
Katrina
Reviewer: kmfranklin211 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/07/08 11:16 pm
Wow! Great chapter. I could feel the heat between Lorenzo and Evangeline and it would seem that her marriage is now in name only.
Katrina
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/07/08 10:56 pm
Love it already just because you killed off Sonny, Jason and Liz right away. I'm a little bitter at the current state of GH.
Katrina
Reviewer: kmfranklin211 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/07/08 10:39 pm
Classic BadAss Lorenzo. How much do I love:)......
I would have loved E and Lo.
She would have chem with any leading man on every soap:)
With Ric and Lorenzo in a story sharing scenes there can be no wrong. Love them!
I love Talia, RJ, Vincent and Lucky, and Alexis and I'm really glad to see them in this story.
The way you write and describe, I can picture every single scene in my head. Amazing!!!!
Did you say Conintoes-Morgan murders....My new bestest Friend!
I love them in fanfiction though. ;)
Author's Response: Ah, the least I could do in my fiction is get rid of those show killers. Thanks for reading and thanks for the review and the starts AshAli! Reviewer: AshAli Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/07/08 08:31 pm