I was on pins and needles the whole time while reading wondering if Greg would put his plan into place with Mia. I sense something coming up with the ski trip. It's been so long since I read the story with Brian and Nicole but I vaguely remember some crazy stuff happening on the ski trip.Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/10/11 05:35 am
Is Peyton really this stupid and naive?? In my opinion, Peyton is making such a deal about nothing. What's so difficult about opening her damn mouth and tell Jonathan that Greg is blackmailing her. She is sleeping with guy, and she can't tell him whats going on? She can't tell him that Greg is harassing and threaten her? I won't feel sorry for her at all if this gets out of hand or if Greg does her something. Because it will be her own damn fault. She should have open her mouth and tell Jonathan or at least Nicole, who is supposed to be her BEST FRIEND!!!!!!!! I'm sure that Nicole would help her and put Greg in his place. And what if everyone finds out. She will just tell everyone to mind their own business. Or just lie and say that Greg is jealous and mad because he couldn't have her. Seriously this girl is making such a big deal out of this for nothing. I'm very annoyed with Peyton, but good chapter. Please update soon!!!! Don't disappear for this long again. I thought you gave up on this story.Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/10/11 03:25 pm
girl, where'd you run off too!!! i hope you're ok!!
Ha! I'm absolutely fabulous. In all honesty, I'm not really feeling the changes. I love that the board was snatched out of the grasp of demise, but it seems to be too gossipy for my taste. Anyhoo,
I've been fully devoted to my mother, running/exercising, and preparing for my nieces med school graduation...FINALLY! She's out my pocket!!! LOL~
An update is forthcoming. I won't make you any empty promises of when, but after this weekend's festivities, I can actually recommit. And once May is out in the history books, I can hopefully dig deep and pull out a finish. It's going to be a doozy!
Hang in there, thanks so much for your love and support.
Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 09:50 am
Missing this story.. Idk ab everyone else, but I sure loved it.. If ur getting bad reviews, screw them..its a great story..keep it coming
Author's Response: LOL. I'm sorry you've been missing the story. I miss it too. I'm working on the new chapter and it's going to be a doozy. I haven't received bad reviews. LOL. A new update should come by the end of the week. Thanks for reading.
Date: 03/04/11 11:09 pm
aaahh another great update!! :)
Hating Greg a lot right about now... he better not hurt Jonathan.. or Peyton.. grrrr
Author's Response: ty for reading...glad you enjoyed it. Reviewer: ashbyfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 07:11 am
SOO lovvvingg the new update!!! ive been checking this constantly to see if you updated lolol
I got a little scared because it said it was completed.. but then at the bottom it said more to come.. YAY ;) hurry back & i can not wait.. I'm so ready for these two to get together.. they are gonna be so cute! (&hot)
Author's Response: glad you loved it...but nooooooooooooooo, it's far from over...lol. Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/03/11 04:33 am
Peyton is so stupid, you are looking at the right man for you and sexing him up yet you don't see. So sad, I'll take Jonathan with his fine and sexy self!!!!
Author's Response: Jonathan is a hot piece of ass isn't he?
Date: 14/03/11 05:11 am
Peyton finally admitted, at least to herself how she feels about Jonathan. I want them to Peyton to get it right, Jonathan is the right man for her. They need to be honest with themselves and each other.
Author's Response: Honest with each other? Yeah...ok. LOL. Baby steps with these two or they are bound to stress you out.
Date: 04/03/11 09:07 pm
Finally and it was worth the wait. Now, I know they will probably try to preten with each other that is was nothing more than a good fuck, but I they will have to do that again as soon as possible.
Author's Response: Ha! LMAO. Yes. They will never be able to hold to that 'one time' promise. The question is who will break first. It took time to get them here. I'm glad to have finally shared it. It was the first chapter I wrote actually. More will come!
Date: 04/03/11 08:10 pm
When are Peyton and JB going to go for it and stop letting others get in the way. I like the way Amaria came to JB's rescue, but I can understand Peyton's jealousy. She needs to let it go and stay away from Greg.
Author's Response: Yeah...they are both acting like kiddies, getting on my dayum nerves too! LOL. It's all good. TY for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01/03/11 05:01 am
YAY for a new update.. so excited..
I can't wait to see Jonathan put a plan in motion to get Peyton!! FINALLY! haha and Joel must go..uh
Author's Response: IKR! Those two!!! Yes. I'm trying really hard to bring this one to completion. I literally can't wait to deliver the goodies! Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/02/11 05:08 pm
aaaahh how can you leave us "somewhat" hangin like that... too short of a chapter.. mooore!! haha right when it got hot, it died! :( damn joel.. i'm loving jonathan & peyton together!! keep it coming!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I'm so sorry it had to halt there, but it's a part of a bigger story so it has to stay the course of time. But don't worry, it all comes together. Peyton and Jonathan have a unique journey to travel before they get to the same place. Another update is fleshed out, so you'll soon get to see what happens next. Thanks agin for reading! ;)
Date: 05/02/11 07:11 pm
Wow Johathan. I am pissed for you! I so wanted you and Peyton to get your groove on.
Author's Response: I know! It was tough to write, because I wanted them to get it on too! But it would be totally off cannon if they were having sex this early. But the ride to them getting there is really the story! Hang tight. Thanks for picking it up qd3. I've missed you guys so much!
Date: 05/02/11 12:07 am
Peyton, give Jonathan a break. That man loves her and she is tripping oven Joel who wasn't half the man the Jonathan.
Author's Response: Hey! It's pmgayles! I thought the CHAMBER had become a ghost town. LOL! Thanks for reading. It's going to be a lot of push/pull from them, so brace yourself. They have a few allies. And that always helps.
Date: 04/02/11 04:45 pm
So i've been reading this series for a while now, and i think its so cute how everyone just ends up with each other.
I like this story a lot because it actually tells about how the main characters feel like Jonathan. I can't wait to read the next chapter, hopefully it will be out soon.
It's a family! LOL. I appreciate you reading and responding.
Reviewer: lovelessmono Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 08:04 am
WOW!!! i started reading these series and i have fallen in LOVE... so glad to have found them and i am so looking forward to seeing what else will happen... very happy Jonathan & Peyton discovered one another but dang she needs to see the light hahaha
Author's Response: thanks ashbyfan for reading...I do appreciate your taking the time to read the series. I've had a lot of fun writing about the Santi's. There is so much more to come.
Date: 30/01/11 04:51 am
I love their chemistry. I love the way you write, I love your flow.
Author's Response: Thank you Nakia for reading and responding. I like to know what you guys think. Often I slip my muse because I fear the readers are simply to kind to tell me that the shit stinks. LOL. Like sewing, I perform my best when I'm in the zone. For now, I'll keep the writing going. There's no telling how far it may take us. It's a short story, but I have so much fun writing them that I got tired of them peeking in and out of the previous tales, deciding they had paid their dues as the back drop.
Date: 19/01/11 12:51 am
Amazing, Thank you for writing Peyton story. Oh my , Heyden is a hobag!!! I really don't like tha heifer Mia either. So glad Nicole and Brian are back.
Author's Response: Heyden is something else. She is what she is. No doubt about it. Yes. Nic/Brian have brief speech here, of course they are the sibling and best friends with our protagonists. Thanks for reading. I'm working hard to scratch the details for the duration of the story.
Date: 18/01/11 10:11 pm
ooo, i looove it!!! yay for a new story; and please give us more updates very very soon!!! ;)
I'm sorry for the delays. I'm in school, amidst a plethora of responsibilities. Sometimes I feel like it and then other times I feel bad for not giving it all I can when I write. I took my nephew to the barber shop and his barber reminded me that I was supposed to be writing. DAMN! He has a good memory. Remembered I hula hooped too. Shit! LOL.
All that said, thanks for your patience. I hope you hang in there with me. Reviews really do kick me into gear.Reviewer: ashbyfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 06:20 am