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Title: Chapter 27

Very romantic way for Nik/Keesha to consamate their relationship... I hope they stay in love forever, but I don't think there is the AJ closure that she thinks she has.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Lady Liberty, for the review and the stars! :-)  I'm glad you liked the scene.  You're right about Keesha, AJ and closure. :-)

 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/08 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 26

YES! They are getting married!

I still can't stand Carly and Jason. They are so heartless. It's not Carly's wedding, so what makes her think she can tell Liz who to have in her wedding. What a skank.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweet Pea! :-)  Thank you for the review and the stars!! :-)  I'm glad you're happy they're getting married. :-)

LOL about J&C. *grin*

 

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Date: 05/09/08 05:12 am

Title: Chapter 26

Glad that Keesha/Nik are getting married and that they were open with eachother about everything... but I so hope that Keesha changes her mind about having kids, and not let Sea Hag Carly ruin her future.

But IMHO there is no closure with AJ yet b/c he thinks she is dead.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lady Liberty! :-)  Thanks for your review and the stars!!  I think Keesha will begin to reflect on more things as the story continues. *grin*  Something will happen with AJ and closure. :-)

Thanks again!!

 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/09/08 06:38 pm

Title: Chapter 25

I love Nik and Keesha together, I know that Keesha feels so miuch better that she got all of that off of her chest... I hope her and Nik get married, but not b4 she has closure with AJ.

With every chapter I hate Carly/Jason more and more, they are the two most selfish people on the planet, and IMO Carly is punishing AJ b/c Michael is not Jason's son like she always wanted.

Michael needs to get away from them.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lady Liberty! :-)  Thanks for your review and stars!! :-)  I'm glad you like Nik and Keesha together. :-)  You're right about closure with AJ.  Some things will come to light as the story progresses. :-)

We're getting closer to some things happening with J&C, too!  LOL!

Hope you will continue to enjoy! :-)

Thanks again!!

 

 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/08 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Keesha/Nik are so sweet together, especially with the kids, I wonder if Keesha not wanting any kids has somethng to do with her past with AJ.

Oh and now add Bobbie to my "Needs to be Choked" list, she doesn't know a thing about AJ, she is just siding with her stupid daughter, I hope that the truth comes out b/c when it does Michael may hate Carly and Jason.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lady Liberty! :-)  Thanks for the review and the stars!!  I'm glad you're enjoying Keesha & Nik. :-)  Keesha will explain herself in the next couple of chapters I'm about to post, but you are on the right track. :-)

LOL about Bobbie.  We are getting closer to some other things happening that will involve J&C and their little world. *grin*

Thanks again!  Hope you will continue to read and enjoy the story. :-)

 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 08:45 pm

Title: Chapter 24

It's strange that Keesha works with kids all the time, but has chosen not to have kids. I can't wait to find out the reason behind this revelation.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweet Pea! :-)  Thanks for your review and the stars.  Keesha will explain herself in the next couple of chapters I'm about to post. :-)

 

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Date: 03/09/08 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 23

OMG! AJ thinks Keesha is dead. Jason and Carly told him that she died! I hope they get what's coming to them SOON!

Carly is still plotting, even though AJ's child may die! She is beyond heartless. Even Jason doesn't want to do anything at the moment/



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweet Pea! :-)  Thanks for your review and the stars!  I appreciate both very much!! :-)  Some things will happen in some upcoming chapters. *grin*  Carly is desperate, what can I say???  LOL!  But yeah, she is plotting on :-( while at least Jason does want to leave things be.

Hope you will continue to enjoy the story! :-)

Thanks again!!

 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 05:16 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Jason and Carly are truly disgusting human beings, I can' believe that they told AJ that Keesha died, how sick is that, they need to lose everything, and wanting to have a baby to keep Michael, is pathetic.

I can't wait for AJ to see that Keesha is alive and well.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lady Liberty! :-)  Thanks for your review and the stars!!  What can I say about J&C????  LOL!  They live in their own little world, but it will be shaken. *grin*

Hope you will continue to enjoy the story! :-)

 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/08 06:36 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Chica.. it took me forever to catch up with this story.. Missed an update miss a lot... scenic 

Love thios story.. I love the levels of Nick and Keesha's relationship... but man.. Jason and Carly make you want to slap someone...  wtf



Author's Response:

Hey, Zeta! :-)  Thanks for your review and the stars!!  I appreciate both very much!! :-)  I guess there is a lot going on in these chapters.  LOL!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story and the Keesha/Nik relationship.  I enjoyed writing for them. :-)  J&C, what can I say??????  LOL!

Take care and thanks again!!

 

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Date: 30/08/08 02:27 pm

Title: Chapter 23

i luv niksha....i hate jason and carly i could strangle that loud mouth woman ooooo, okay thanks for the update and good job.... :D

Author's Response:

Hi, Cmami! :-)  Thanks for your review.  I'm glad you're still enjoying Nik and Keesha! :-)  Yes, Carly does tend to get on one's nerves, doesn't she????  LOL!

 

Reviewer: Cmami Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/08/08 01:58 am

Title: Chapter 21

Carly and Jason make me madder and madder everytime I read this story, they treat Michael like a prize that they are competing for, they don't deserve to be parents.

Author's Response: Hi, again and thank you!!  Yes, there is a lot of bad blood going on.  But I hope you will hang in there because some things will happen.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/08/08 08:42 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Poor AJ&Eve, I so want Cecily to pull through.... they deserve to be happy, especially AJ.

I so want Carly and Jason to come up missisng.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Lady Liberty, for the review and the stars! :-)  Come up missing, you say....hmmmm.  LOL!

 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/08/08 08:21 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Dang, Keesha really is out of the loop with the PC gossip. I wonder if she gonna go back to visit AJ now. I can't imagine Nik being to happy about that, but then again he'll probably be understanding under the circumstances.

Author's Response:

Hi!  Thanks again!! :-)  Yes, some things happened and now she really is out of the loop.  LOL!  But again, some things will happen....*grin*

 

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Date: 23/08/08 06:22 am

Title: Chapter 21

Carly is a bitch. She knows that AJ didn't cause his daughter's accident, and to use it as a way to keep away from Michael is heartless. Whatever happens to her and Jason, they deserve it!!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweet Pea!  Thanks for your review and the stars. :-)  Yep, J&C live in their own world.  LOL!  But some things may happen that will shake them up. *grin*

 

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Date: 23/08/08 06:16 am

Title: Chapter 19

This is a wonderful story.  I've just read all 19 chapters in one sitting.  I especially love what's happening with Keesha and Nikolas.  Thank you!

Author's Response:

Wow, gunnysgirl!  I appreciate the time it must have taken you to read through all the chapters in one sitting.  Thank you very much!! :-)  I'm glad you're enjoying the story, especially Keesha and Nik.  I enjoy writing for them. :-) 

Hope you will continue to enjoy the story!!

Thank you for your review and the stars, too!!  I appreciate both very much!!! :-)

 

Reviewer: gunnysgirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/08 07:38 am

Title: Chapter 18

Jason and Carly make me so sick, WTH do they think they are, and why do they think they are better parents than AJ.

Michael is smarter than BOTH of his so-called parents.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lady Liberty!  Thanks for your review and the stars! :-)  Some things *may* happen with regard to J&C before this one is over. *grin*

LOL about Michael!  I totally agree! :-)

Hope you will continue to enjoy the story!

 

 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/08/08 06:44 am

Title: Chapter 19

Oh man, it good that Michael's there, but I can help but to wonder what new drama this situation is gonna cause.

Keesha needs to tell Nik about her non-date with Josh. 



Author's Response:

You're right.  There will be some tense moments.  LOL!

About Keesha...hmmm, I wonder what's gonna happen???? *grin*

Thanks so much for being a faithful reader and reviewer!! :-)  I appreciate it very much!!! :-)  Hope you will continue to enjoy the story!

 

 

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Date: 20/08/08 05:20 am

Title: Chapter 18

Jason and Carly are a-holes! AJ's daughter may die and they still want to treat him like crap. As parents, they should have been more understanding of the situation. I can't wait for them to get what they deserve.

It was a DREAM! I was waiting for Keesha's answer to! Nik is determined that Keesha's gonna be his wife. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, they are, but they were so much fun to write.  LOL!  Some things *may* happen...*grin*

Keesha wanted to tease so I let her. LOL!  But you're right about Nik.  One way or another, he is not going to give up until he gets that woman to marry him!  LOL!

Thanks so much for the review and the stars!! :-)

 

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Date: 20/08/08 05:08 am

Title: Chapter 17

AJ needs to chill and accept that CeCe is his child. Seriously, why would a woman like her try to pass her child off as his, when he was nothing more than a drunk at the time.

Nik and Keesha may be getting married. Hmm, I wonder what her response will be?



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweet Pea!  Thanks for your review and the stars.  You're right.  AJ definitely needs to chill.  LOL!  He's *slowly* coming around to the truth. *grin*  Eve needs to hit him upside his head.  LOL! 

Keesha teased me for a while when I was writing this. :-)  She teased Nik, too.  Poor guy!  LOL!

 

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Date: 20/08/08 05:00 am

Title: Chapter 18

I still wanna kill AJ....luving Nikesha...and no words for jason n carly...lol.

 thanks for the update



Author's Response:

Hi, Cmami!  Thanks for your review and the stars. :-)  Sorry you want to kill AJ. :-(  But I'm glad you're enjoying Nik & Keesha.  I like your name for them.  I never thought about a combo name for them before.  LOL!  LOL about Jason and Carly, too, but they're so much fun to write! *grin*

You're welcome!  Hope you will continue to enjoy the story, despite AJ. *grin*

 

 

 

Reviewer: Cmami Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/08 09:28 pm

Title: Chapter 16

WTF! All this time I thought that AJ was Cecily's father!!!! You got me on that one.

 



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks, Sweet Pea, for the review and the stars! :-)  The next few chapters should clear up the mystery about Cecily's paternity.  I hope! *grin*

 

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Date: 17/08/08 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 1

i forgot to leave a review....but i am loving it...stefan needs to back off....oh and i hate AJ losy cad of a father....carly is right....

oh and i cant wait see your banner well look like for this story....thanks for the update keep them coming....



Author's Response:

Hi, Cmami!  Thanks for your review and the stars! :-)  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Stefan can be overbearing.  LOL!  AJ will have some things to deal with in this story.  I need to request a banner. :-)  Hope you will continue to enjoy the story!

 

 

Reviewer: Cmami Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/08/08 05:56 pm

Title: Chapter 16

OMG so Cecily is not AJ's daughtet, I never saw that coming, I hope the little girl pulls thru, b/c AJ can't take anymore heartache.

Nikolas and Keesha are so cute together, and I think that Stefan has finally found that special someone.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lady Liberty!  Thanks for the review and the stars! :-)  You'll have to see what happens in the next few chapters regarding Cecily's paternity. *grin*  I'm glad you like Nikolas and Keesha together.  I wanted to go a little lighthearted with them but, of course, the drama pulled me in, too, when I was writing for them.  LOL!  Yep, Stefan has certainly found someone who intrigues him! *grin*  Hope you will continue to enjoy the story!

 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/08/08 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 13

It was good to see AJ having a decent time with his family. I like him as a strong family, instead of the ragging lunatic that GH writers turned him into.

I like the scene bw Justus and Bobby, and Alexis and Ned. Great converstations filled with meaningful dialog. 

I'm glad Keesha told Nik that it was time to let shit go. He needs to grow up and tell his father that he's a man, not a child. 



Author's Response:

Hi!  Thank you for the review and the stars! :-)  Some things will happen to all of these characters that will have them going through some changes and some growing and maybe a setback or two until they can figure a few things out. :-)

 

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Date: 04/08/08 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 12

Yes, Big Daddy Stefan is coming to town. I know people didn't like him, but I did.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :-)  I thought Stefan was a fairly popular character on GH?  Of course, the Luke and Laura fans despised him.  LOL!

 

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Date: 04/08/08 02:02 am

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