Its been so long since you updated this story that I know you will probably never finish it I just want to let you know that it is a really good story and if you ever do update i will be there to read it.
Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/06/13 03:41 am
Not cool to leave us hangin like this. Come on!
Reviewer: Donna Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/12/11 02:39 am
please keep going with your story love it.
Reviewer: pocket Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/09/11 10:17 pm
Wow! That was good, and very enlightening. Now I know why she never trusted Drew, he is a trouble maker of the worst sort. Good story Great characters and not so many grammatical errors this time. I will give you a 9.5 eventhough the rating scale will only give you 9.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 30/08/11 06:28 am
Damn, so now the truth comes out! Wow, that was one powerful chapter! Great writing, a few grammatical errors, but for the most part, it was a GREAT chapter! Keep it up!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 12:39 am
Hmmmmm? Will he or won't he? I believe he has already! Evidently, he has never stopped! The path of true love! It is never straight, or without bumps! Again the story is pretty good so far!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/11 05:13 pm
It's funny how life throws you a curve ball just when you think you have it all figured out! I can not wait to see how these two work this out! A good read so far, keep it up! I probably will not comment again until I get further along in the story. I usually only comment once or twice before I get to the end of the story. Unless I find a lot of grammatical errors. So far I am giving you an 8 but who knows where the score goes from here!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/11 04:07 pm
I have missed this story!! Well the flashbacks tell so much about their relationship. I hope that can get past all of the hurt, stupidity and pain.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 04:31 am
Over the phone, Jake? Really? LOL You haven't heard the last of that chick.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 01/09/10 04:39 am
Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 31/08/10 12:33 am
Yay your back. I really missed this story.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: 30/08/10 02:22 pm
Those Generation Y girls that didn’t burn their bras, they burned their boyfriends financially, and drained them emotionally. When that process was finished, they then purchased a dildo, and said fuck you to their old lovers.
This was quite possibly the best thing I've read in years. I might not agree completely, but it totally had sass and punch. Loved it.
Reviewer: Jamey_St_Peters Signed [Report This]Date: 30/08/10 03:53 am
I just love this story. I can't believe that Jake followed those idiots and Drew got shot.
In regards to how Jake broke up with Melinda, I am sure that she will be waiting for him when he returns or that she will show up at the next place that they are scheduled to stop.
I hope that we get Celina's POV...I can't wait to read what she has to say about Jake declaring that he still loves her.
Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 30/08/10 01:34 am
I can't wait for Celina to admit her feelings and for she and Jake to rekindle their love....
Bring on the reunion!!
Reviewer: Nmarie404 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/08/10 05:08 pm
Just caught up.
I love this story.
They may have been in love and had a baby; but Celina and Jake were too young and immature for the responsibility.
I'm rooting for Celina and Jake getting back together and staying together this time.
Keep those updates coming!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/10 12:40 pm
I want Celina to admit that she still loves Jake and to give their relationship another chance.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/08/10 06:34 am
i don't know what took me so long to read this story, but i love it & you have a fan for life!! looking forward to more.
Reviewer: medicateme Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/08/10 05:43 am
Awww so that's how their son died, on a n ATV. So sad :( Love where this is going, Shanni! Can't wait for more soon!
Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]Date: 09/07/10 05:05 am
I just wanted to let you know that I went back and read the story from the beginning. I really love this story and the characters. I am waiting to find out more about the tragedy that caused their child to die. In addition, I would love to know more about her parents POV. We know that Jake's parents were against them being in a relationship. Although it does seem that Celina's family loved Jacob. Also, how did they end up at the same college when she was so adamant that she wanted to go to the University of Chicago. Thanks and I am so glad that you came back to finish the story. Take care.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 08/07/10 02:02 am
I agree.. the two of them starting at friends is a very realistic and beautiful approach to the story. I'm definitely trying to predict what hand Drew had to play in their tragedy.
Please keep the updates coming. You've developed a beautiful story thus far!
Reviewer: Nmarie404 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/07/10 04:52 am
Well agreeing to being friends is a start. I loved the paintball fight. Great update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 06/07/10 02:32 am
Loved the update. So glad there going to be friends again. That is a start in the right direction. Jake needs to just take it slow and also except friends is all they may ever be. The paint ball scene was fun to read and Loved the flash back.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/07/10 02:05 am
I am loving this story. What type of accident was Celina in that caused her to lose their baby? Why did start dating that ho Melinda when he still has feelings for Celina? Especially when the ho is so disrespectful of Celina? I don"t like that skank!!! Please update soon, this is a great story!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/07/10 10:07 pm
Thanks for a great update. I love Jacob and Celina together. I wonder what Drew did to them later on. Since Jake apologized for allowing him into their lives.
I enjoyed the paint ball scene...that was to funny Jake taking that kids gear and he still ended up losing.
I really want them to be a couple again.
Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 05/07/10 08:14 pm