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Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

AH!  Come on Sunny give Nikolai some loving, he digs her so much and hasn't seen her in eight weeks and also ain't been with no other woman!  

GIVE THE MAN SOME!!!  You know you want to!!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 11:39 am
Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part I

I wish Sunshine had left a few personal family things in the apartment so that Pop would not feel so desolate there!

I hope Sergei's evident growing affection for Sunny does not cause heartaches for Nikolai! 

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 11:20 am
Title: Cling to me.

Is Pop Jones an alcoholic as well as a gambling addict?

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 10:35 am
Title: Wild is the Wind

I loved the part in here about her relationship with her mother and the date they proposed to to have at the Met!

 

The dress Nikolai bought for Sunny was absolutely gorgeous, he really does have great taste!!  And Sunny's hair looked beautiful, I loved the flower holding the side of her hair back!

 

OMG!  Great date...Great Lovemaking afterward and I really loved it when during their intercourse "Sunshine is moaning so loudly into his mouth that his throat rumbles with the vibrations."  Now that is some real feel good Sex!!!

WOW!  This relationship is definitely no longer only Nikolai greatly wanting Sunny; she wants him very much too!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 10:16 am
Title: We are creatures of the wind

Such a gentle sweet communication between them; Sunny has made decent conditions including some to influence the relationship to be more romance than a material sexual agreement and conditions to help her in the beginning to save some of her dignity as a lady and force him to respect that.  Also, conditions that require more really getting to know each other.  The conditions for her brother Benji's education are wonderful.

 

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Date: 30/01/11 09:33 am
Title: You Touch Me

Great...

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Date: 30/01/11 09:27 am
Title: With your kiss my life begins

 

WOW!  This story just keeps exciting me, its fun and sometimes gives me a few laughs, too.

 

I think Sunshine is deeply hurt that her father relented so easily for her to "prostitute" herself with Nikolai in order to save Daddy because, she thought Papa's love for her would be deeper, like hers' is for him; that he should continue to seek ways for an alternative, no matter how fruitless!  As, would any decent female of moral standards, Sunny really cringes at commiting this intimacy of relationship with Nikolai, she's also ashamed of her "loose" voluntary intimacy with him today!  True the liquor did greatly weaken her controls and inhibitions but, she wasn't actually drunk.  She was attracted to Nikolai!  However, this proposed sexual relationship is definitely still traumatic for her as it would be for any decent female!


 

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 09:08 am
Title: You Touch Me

Papa Jones is a dreamer, a failed gambler; to save Papa's life and the future well being of her little brother, Sunny is deeply considering agreeing to an intimate relationship with Nikolai.  As a 18/year old girl of nearly sexual innocence, she in her sacrifice shows herself to be a woman of deep character and loving heart. 

 

But, Nikolai sure is ruggedly handsome and that sexy Kiss he gave Sunny on her honeypot and the rest of the making out was so HOT!!!!  I have a feeling their relationship may become mutual!!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 06:37 am
Title: Satisfy this Hungriness

I love Nikolai's descriptive perception of Sunny, inclusive that her beauty equates to the word "delicious".  I've seen beautiful sistas that have a beauty that's like a magnetic flow of vibrant rich honey. 

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Date: 30/01/11 04:28 am
Title: Who they are

Great cast I like all of them.  Especially  Sunshine "Sunny" Jones, she is so beautiful, sexy and charismatic.  And the actor playing Nikolai, has a European handsomeness a mysterious type of look, suitable for a gangster type and definitely fits the enigmatic characteristics I feel about Nikolai as I have proceeded to read thru chapter four. I Love that the actor who played Shaft is cast in the role of Jacob "Pop" Jones, he's well suited, also, I always enjoyed his acting.  

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Date: 30/01/11 02:47 am
Title: With your kiss my life begins

I love this story, you kick ass.

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Date: 18/01/11 08:33 am
Title: Who they are

this is my third time reading this story... Iam ashamed... but its so good :(

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Date: 22/12/10 02:12 am
Title: Who they are

How do i favorite ur story...love it by the way

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Date: 21/12/10 01:35 am
Title: I'll Send You a Sign...Just so You Know

Darla..Darla, trying to repent are you?. Well it was inevitable, lets see how Sunny deals with this info.

 Reviewer: jemjem Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/12/10 05:53 pm
Title: You Know There's No Need to Hide Away

Oh Jacob,,i don't know if you are a coward or brave. That was messed up though pops. Poor Benji & Sunny

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Date: 20/12/10 05:19 pm
Title: Even When You're Miles Away Part 2

Lol..love your little end notes Onimosity. Another great chp. So Nut head is back to trick old pops again,,still da fool.

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Date: 18/12/10 06:06 pm
Title: A fire burns... Water comes

Poor old Beast (Nikki) in love  with the sun, well not a bad thing, only when it burns you..lol..giggles (added)

 Reviewer: jemjem Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 03:57 pm
Title: We Are Building Bridges Part 2

Ummm. Wonder what the night..marish dream is all about. Love me some Sergei..poor bastard in love...lol

 Reviewer: jemjem Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 03:34 pm
Title: I can feel everything you do...Hear everything you say

So what is the bitch Darla gonna do with this new knowledge. Poor.. Sunny and er.. Sergei

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Date: 18/12/10 03:16 pm
Title: You know I tell the truth... We are just the same

Poor old Sergei, in love with Sunny. Good luck ols boy.

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Date: 18/12/10 02:43 pm
Title: With your child's eyes ... You are more than you seem

Lordy..lordy pops meet the 'slapper'.. Run pops run..lol

 Reviewer: jemjem Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 02:06 pm
Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

So happy pops finally woke up and smell the coffee. Sunshine & her bro will be delighted.

 Reviewer: jemjem Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 01:51 pm
Title: Who they are

I just started reading this story. It's wonderful so far. I love how Sunny at 18 is so able to take charge, despite the situation she's in. Pop is and old fart.

 Reviewer: jemjem Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 01:35 pm
Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I must admit I dont like Jacob.  Glad he's finally trying to get help but I dont really think it will work.  Nevertheless a great chapter!

 Reviewer: PhantomLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/12/10 07:32 am
Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

I love the depth and feelings in your characters.  Sunshne and Nikki are lovable and I want to know more about their lives.  Great Job!

 Reviewer: PhantomLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/12/10 07:31 am
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