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Title: Shine - Epilogue

LOVE LOVE LOVE.

Thank you Onimosity. Just thank you.

I'm so so so happy that you brought this story out, after 10 years. DAMN, I feel honoured that I could read this.

You know, a couple of days ago i was reading something and it said that children of addicts feel the need to fix everyone elses problems.

That made me stop. Gosh these characters that you have created are so real, so researched so grounded.

To be honest no matter what happens, I HAVE ALWAYS LOVED SERGEI. I'm sorry, it's true. He's stupid but gosh he is a doll! From when he buttoned up his hawaiian t shirt i knew that i would love him!

Your amazing, please don't let anyone tell you any different. Haha, i now have all my girlfriends reading this book! We are all amazed and wish you the very best in life.

P.s. I really can't wait until those other chapters!!

LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU x

Reviewer: SuperVee says goodbye Onimosity Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 09:31 pm

Title: Who they are

So I have to say that I really enjoyed this story. Your characters were amazing and so real! I'm not sure who said it before but I even sympathized with Sergi! I wouldn't mind seeing him get his own story where hopefully he does find happiness but I digress... you are extremely talented and I look forward to seeing more stories from you!

Reviewer: SweetTahira Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 08:17 pm

Title: Who they are

Thank you for sharing this story. It was a wonderful read, a well-researched, unflinching look at Sunny and Nikolai's reality.

My only wish for the ending is that the weight of Sunshine's life choice for herself and her brother had not been removed by the virtually effortless way Nikolai is able to leave the ife.  Enemies don't forget grudges and authorities don't just wipe the slate clean.  For a criminal as powerful and self-admittedly bloody as Nikolai was, the simple desire to leave the life does not translate to an equal reality.

Reviewer: jrsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 02:51 pm

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Thank you for a brilliant story.  It was a very emotional ride with all the twists and turns. 

I look forward to your other stories don't worry about timelines as I will always check for new stories.

Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 02:27 pm

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Oh this story was wonderful! Just wonderful!

Goodness gracious that love scene had my toes curling over here

Nikki don't play he wants to leave his mark deep inside as well as outside.

Thank you for a great story.  I can't wait to see what  you have coming up after this.

WONDERFUL!!!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 07:23 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

I thoroughly enjoyed  this story. You are an excellent storyteller. The characters were vibrant and had their own personalitlies, each one distinctive from the other. I look forward to your new storie. It's so funny, because I was thinking that Anatoly should have his own story. lol, I really liked that character, even it's a short one. I think he deserves to have his story told. And Sergie, yes he most definately needs to have his own story. One where he truly learns what love is. I hope that he finishes school and find the life he want.

Did I not do it the right way? Should I have asked Mr. Stanislavsky for your hand?" LMAO I LOVED this part. It was so cute, you did a great job on that proposal. It seemed to fitting that she was the one who asked him.

Thank you for sharing your work, and I look forward to riding in the car again with you soon.

Cholyn

PS, Bring on the baby fic that should be hilarious. lol

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 06:58 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Thanks for this wonderful story.  Glad this is a story you were able to finish.  It was awesome.  I am a fan and when I see a new story about Sunshine and Nikolai or any others I will probably jump for joy and click as fast as I can to begin reading.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 06:10 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

I loved this story, I loved your characters, I loved the ending and I absolutely love that you decided to write again after 10 years. Well worth the wait and if you ever publish I can say I saw her writing when she posted just for us girls to read and leave feedback. Lovely, just lovely.

Reviewer: monique32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 06:06 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

My God! 10 years away...unbelievable! I'm so glad you decided to come back and with this story. Thanks for including us in the ride. It was worth every minute I spent reading. This one will definately be in my read til the wheels fall off of books I love. I'm looking forward to the updates on Sunny & Nikki (wondering how the pregnancy will go for Nikki). Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! Please don't stay away for too long.

Reviewer: kimloanies Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 05:53 am

Title: I've Made Up My Mind... to Let My Life Shine

I figured that Stanivlasky was moving some of Nikolia's responsibilities around. It's a good thing that he's the bosses son. People will not be so quick to worry about them.

I'm happy with the ending. I'm very happy that Sunny and Nikki will be together. I loved his reaction, when she said she loved him. It was as if he didn't believe that anyone could love him that he wasn't worth love. But then again, I guess with everything he'd been through, why should he believe it.

Sunny trusted her heart, sometimes we can't always have what we want, and other times we can.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 05:39 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

wow thank you for writting such a great story. I love reading stories from different authors you guys make your charcters come alive and fun to read. i enjoy this story so much so sad to see it end but know one day we will see something else from you and it going to be good. lol sunshine ask him for his hand in marriage too cute. i'm glad they doing ok and that he finaly knows that his sunshine love him. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 05:23 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Onimosity, you did the damn thing with this epilogue.  It was more than worth the wait.  I wanted to cry at how you portrayed Sunny's and Nikki's love for each other. I'm not one for smaltz and schmoop, but this was absolutely beautiful. You more than fulfilled my wishes on the sex part though :). This epilogue was exactly how I hoped (this installment of) Beast end.

I was so hooked on this story from the beginning and at no time did you disappoint. All your characters, whether I liked them or not, felt real to me. The twist and turns this story took had me feeling joy one minute and anguish the next, but I couldn't stop reading. 

I look forward to more of Sunny and Nikki, especially their wedding and baby, and will be so sad when their story ends.  I'll be waiting patiently for whatever you give us on any one of your Beast characters.

Wishing you and your muse much rest and relaxation.

Reviewer: sherprin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 05:11 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

I loved it!  the Epilogue was perfect!  I loved the role reversal.  Nikolai was so possesive of Sunny when the story first started, but at the end she was possessive of him!  And I LOVE that she proposed to him!  That was adorable!  And the fact she wanted to ask Mr. S for his hand in marriage had me laughing at my computer!

I can't wait to read any other stories you have about these characters!  

 

 

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 05:09 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Awesome story and I absolutely loved it!!! Sad to see it come to an end. Glad they had a happy ending though. Can't wait for the sequels. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 05:06 am

Title: ...And Make My Life Shine

Well, I am happy that Sunny didn't get shot. I feel bad for Nikki. I really do. I feel bad for Sunny, because even with everything she'd been through. She was still a bit naive.

I really like Prisilla and Stanislavsky, they were to excellent additions to this story.

Anatoly, I still like him, and sadly I hate that he's in this position. 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 04:41 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Thank you for an excellent story!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 04:38 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Loved it, and look forward to reading what's next for them. I would love to read a story about Anatoly and Sergei. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 04:31 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

OH MY GOD ONIMOSITY!!!! i cant believe its over at least for now!!!!!! that was truly one of the BEST stories i have EVER read in ANY category!!!!! thank you thank you thank you for sharing Sunshine and Nikolai with us!!! i like to think of them as real people. i cant wait to read about their wedding and first pregnancy. i hope theres lots and lots of belly rubbin and gushiness!!!!!! WELL DONE!!!!!!! ima print this out so i can put it in a binder and read it old school style!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 04:26 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

BRAVO, BRAVO!   

You need an agent.  Get one, a GOOD one... FAST!

Reviewer: ivy11 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 03:54 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Bravo Bravo Bravo!!

I am so happy she asked him to marry her and that they ended on a wonderful last note!!

I am also happy there will be more stories about these two and some of the people in their lives!!!Married and pregnant Sunny makes me smile so much...long as it is drama free I am happy..I can see Nikki as an expectant Dad now too funny!!

I loved this story so much..so glad the drought is over and hope it never comes back yours is a talent that needs to be shared!!Bravo!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 03:46 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Onimosity, dear, the three Ss = Sex, Schmaltz, and Schmoop were supremely superior. 

Ah, what a trip!! What an adventure! What a high! Damn, even the lows were exhilarating.

You came along and presented this sad, retched tale of weakness, addiction, and desperation, tangled it with optimism, hope, and honest bravery; dared us to defy our natual instinct to do the obvious... draw a line in the sand and chose good over evil. But it quickly became evident that it would not be that easy, that clear cut, that simple.

Jeeze, I was emotional reading this. Like Sunny, I believe I can tell where I  began to soften to Nicholai... first, recognizing that he had been a good boy forced to harden to survive, abolish love and sentiment out of betrayal and rejection just to chose to rediscover it in order to be remotely worthy of a woman he worshipped.

You presented so many contrasts in some wonderful characters. Mr. S as a ruthless mobster but a kind loving father to a lost boy; faithful mentor and parent to a man he'd grown to cherish as his own. Sergei. Poor misguided Sergei. Anatoly, the loyal Lt and best friend and maybe mama's boy. LOL Goodness, Jacob totally frustrated me. I just couldn't get past the fact that he allowed his young daughter to be served up as collateral, no matter the ultimate outcome. Ben. Ben without Sunny.

I admired Sunny from the start but found myself frustrated with her torturing Nikki by not telling him that she loved him. It seemed so obvious that she showed it, but he had to hear it, as foreign as it was to him; but she just wouldn't say it. Meanwhile Sergei... 

I could go on and on...

I cannot remember the last time I wished so long, hard, and desperately for a happy ending between two people who were so unlikely to make it, who appeared to be so incompatible on the surface.

Hmm... I'm feeling a bit like an addict about to enter rehab. No more stalking. No more regular fixes. Only a promise of an occasional taste. Withdrawal will be tough, but that last hit was sublime.

Whatever motivated you to write again after ten long years; I am eternally grateful. Kudos and a bottle from my secret stash for the next round of pina coladas. You and your muse earned it.

Until the wedding!!!!!!!! Or whatever gem you post next. 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 03:41 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Thanks again for sharing this lovely story.  Yes thanks to you because you made the characters come to life with your skillfull writing.  Can't wait for the next in the series.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 03:21 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

A beautiful epilogue to a wonderful story. Thanks for creating such rich characters and such an engrossing tale. Brava!

Reviewer: EvilAngelfish Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 03:00 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

What a great ending to a wonderful story. There banter towards the end was so sweet. Loved that Sunny asked Nikki to marry her that was great. Look forward to these characters in the future. I hope When Serg gets his story he will have redeemed himself and will find someone who will love him as deeply as he seems to be able to love. Thank your an interesting ride.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 02:55 am

Title: Shine - Epilogue

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing them with us. Look forward to future stories from your wonderful, fertile and devious mind.

Reviewer: Shea Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/03/10 02:52 am

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