Wow. I am not writing two long reviews in one day. I think I said it all in my last review. Just two things though.

I love that it is Sunny who popped the big question. I wasnt looking out for that, but then again that is why you are such a gifted writer.

And secondly, Ominosity it is all you! Because without you there would not have been a Sunny or a Nikki or the countless moments where we laughed or cried at their special monents; or got annoyed with Darla or Sergei; or frustrated with Jacob and his addictions. You were the force behind the pen and because of you what a powerful pen it is. Thanks much for sharing your talent with us. It has been a pleasure...

I really, truly have enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Can't wait to read more!

Ah finally, I can write the looonnngggg review I wanted to for this very heartwarming chapter. The end of this story brought with it a number of 'finallies' (if ever there was such a word).

Finally, Sunny said those magical words and there was no greater joy, it would seem. The long wait for them was like a relief not only to Nikolai, but also to us the fans of this well-written and well-thought out story. And it came with such a powerful scene - him in despair not knowing what decision she would make about their future; and her, for the first time, putting aside the painful lessons of her childhood, taking a chance on love, and recognising and embracing the possibility that Nikolai is not her father, but more like Royce Ukombozi, the man turned himself around to save himself and his family. That she was able to convince Nikolai that he did not need to hide anymore, that she loved all of him, the good and the bad, was a powerful contribute to Nikolai’s character. Basically I was in tears the whole damn time. I applauded the fact that she also expressed her love of self as she stood her ground and voiced what she needed from Nikolai - that is, him out of the life. Hats off to Sunny! A powerful lesson to us all!

Finally, Stanislavsky prove himself to be Nikolai's father. In anticipating that his son would need to get out of the 'business' and embrace a healthier and safer lifestyle, he proved beyond the shadow of a doubt that he is a good and deserving man, worthy of Nikolai calling him father. At last he can receive redemption, and rest easy that he took care of his children and honoured the memory of Victor, the son who only knew as a Cobbler. He is the best fairy godfather this story could have had because only he could untangle the mess that is Nikolai's life.

Finallly, Sergei got the message and learnt a powerful lesson in the process. I guess with Nikolai trying to choke the life out of him, his good sense came back. Now his brother would be forced to decide his fate. Well done, well done. He can only hope that Anatoly Bazykin considers the pain his death would cause their mother or else he may need some concrete shoes. Sunny's character remained untarnished as she magnanimously forgave him and took some of the blame. But she got my seal of approval when she told Sergei, she was not his to save and that people cannot always chose who they love. Something he could relate to, because Sunny does not love him and she made the choice to stay with Nikolai despite his maneuverings. 

And finally, we see the full extent of the changes in Nikolai as they bear fruit. Do not get me wrong, I loved Sunny from the start, came to love Stanislavsky in the end and could even tolerate and empathise with Sergei after his beating, but it was Nikolai who captured my attention and held it from the beginning. It was a pleasure to see the unfolding and development of his character. And this I believe attest to the brilliance and skills of the writer. As a character he gave hope to us all that people can indeed change, but with some vital ingredients included - having a strong character, a willingness to change, and the propensity to give and receive love - all of which Nikolai showed. But more than anything, he being a man of his word, was the clincher for me. In a world where people say one thing and do another, it was refreshing to read of a character who meant what he said and the outcomes as he took the 'high road.'

So I thank you Onimosity for creating a story that captured my imagination, put a smile on my face many, many times over the months, had me cheering for a seemingly impossible love, and taught me some powerful lessons along the way. And I say take a bow even before the final curtain closes on this inspiring tale. You have made a loyal fan out of me...

wow! what an awesome journey. i have loved every chapter of this story. you are a gifted author and i hope there is more to come from you.  thanks!!!

Interesting. It seems to me that Nikki loves Sunshine..will she love him too? do they have a fute together..can he change for her? I hope so..

No..thank you O! Thank you!

Wonderful read!  Must repeat reading several more times!  Hope to read another story from you soon!

Absolutely love this wonderful story.  So glad Sunny and Nikki will get their happily ever after!

I so have enjoyed and loved this story for beginning to end.

You are a very talent imaginative author.  I would definitely like to see what else you have in that imaginative brain of your story wise.  If it is anything like this dark/delightful story then I know it will be very entertaining.

Stanislavsky is a very wise ole man but I guess he would have not gotten as far as he has in life without being that way.  I am glad that it was easy for Nikolai to transition so well over to the legit side of the business but he father had already groomed him for that side as well.

So glad very very glad that Sunni finally admitted her love for Nikki it was well over due but necessary as well for herself and Nikki.

I can't wait to see what you have for us in the ending chapter.

Thank you!  Thank you! Thank you!

That was outstanding! Can't wait for the epi... <3

ur amazing i cant believe u kept me entertained for 42 whole chapters I usually get bored or think the story begins to drage by 2o but u r an amazing writer. this is a great story. 

“But this isn't a fairy tale, and I'm not a princess to be rescued. That is something I always had to do for myself. And I did."

This on so many levels. Wonderful story you have weaved here Onimosity !!! Thank you for the journey and sharing.

I am going to be so sad to see this end...Unless you write a story for Sergei. LOL

This has been a wonderful and emotional ride; thanks for sharing your talent with us!