You are the best storyteller ever!!! I am addicted to this story. I actually care for the people in this story.
I'm soooo happy Sunny showed that she is just as possessive of Nikki as he is of her. The limo sex was HOT!!! (kid on the way?) hint hint ;-)
I love Sunny and Nikki together and I want them to have a happy ending, they both deserve it.
What the heck is wrong with Sergei? I kknow he doesn't think he's gonna walk in Nikki's house and kill. The funny thing is, Nikki didn't seem too worried about Sergei. Nikki knows everything that goes on with Sunny because he has his men watching her. Therefore, I think Nikki knows about Sergei going to Sunny's house that night and upsetting her. I'm sure he was expecting Sergei to show up at some point. Or maybe Nikki isn't concerned because Sergei has the safety lock on the gun or something. lol.
I just want Sunny and Nikki to have a happy ending. I'm said this story is coming to an end but I've enjoyed reading every chapter in this story.
Reviewer: jules Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/03/10 08:39 pm
Now Onimosity that cliffhanger yet again shows your creativity as a writer. Hats off to you. I will be sitting on a bed of nails waiting for my next fix... Clever, very clever...
The range of emotions this update inspired! It's no wonder that I had to read it again. From feeling despair and anguish for our golden couple as Sunny oscillated on her decision to amazement and amusement at her interaction with Grace, and then utter shock at Sergei's insanity.
I never expected to read about a gun in Sergei's hands and it pointed at Nikolai. But I must admit I had my ah ha moment when my continued suspicion of young Bazykin character was confirmed. And to think I actually empathised with the fool in the last chapter. I can't wait to read the chain of events his foolish act initiates. My bet is on Nikki handling the situation well or at least coming out alive. But then again the smirk on his face, hmmm. In a way this is a test of his change. I am tempted to want him to go hardcore on his arse for pulling that gun. But there is Sunny's and Anatoly's reaction to consider. He is softening, and I think his second thoughts about having Peanuts killed gives hint to that fact. The old Nikki would surely kill Sergei or have him killed in a heartbeat and without remorse. This new Nikki I dont know what he will do. But he is still a force to be reckoned with.
Mr. Stanislavsky told his story well and with great impact. I must admit for me he showed his true love for Nikolai in that single act. Once again we were able to get a serious glimpse of the young and vulnerable Nikki and his transformation in order to survive his prison experience (which is yet another thing Nikki's blood father has to answer for). I suspect because Stanislavsky witnessed Nikki's 22 hour ordeal while he waited for word of Sunny's safety he came to realise that his son can no longer effectively function in this world of theirs, where one must be on guard and have their wits about them at all times if one is to survive and stay at the top of their game. Being in love with Sunny has made him soft again and that fear is back. My curiousity is peaked Onimosity; is that fear the blackness he tries to keep at bay? What is significant I think is Nikki could get himself killed because he has gone soft, which comes back to his present predicament with that young fool. Or has he? I think he is still a very dangerous character. I cant wait to see the full extent of Stanislavsky's decision to change Nikolai status in their organisation.
OMG who would have thought Sunny goes a little crazy when she is jealous. That scene with Grace, Sunny and Nikki was a classic... and the loving she put Nikki Wow... I am still mopping my brow... lolol. And I note with glee that Nikki was loving every minute of it, bite to the jaw and all. Now ask me a big question - doesnt this couple deserve a happy ending: YES THEY DO... Onimosity the ball is in your court lololol...
Reviewer: Introspection Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 04:27 pm
BRILLIANT!! I am at a lost for words. Please continue.
Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 01:58 pm
OMG, How can you you do this to me; just when I think they will be a happy couple you do this to me. THIS IS A GREAT STORY. Can't wait until the next chapter.
Reviewer: Tracy Reynolds Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 01:51 pm
OMG!!!! Sergei has lost his damn mind...that was not what I intended to talk about first but it was the last thing that came up and it shocked me.
Girl you keep me shocked, guessing, intrigued @ every turn as it should be from a great write which you are definitely put in that category.
I thought so sure that Sunni was going to become like her cat and claw Gloria's eyes out for even attempting to flirt, speak or paw her man. Yes, indeed Gloria is definitely lucky that Sunni is a lady....LOL! I loved that part when she put that heifer in check in a nice lady like manner with a hit of claws and fangs :D.
I loved that she marked her man so everyone would know that she had been there. Loved it!
I wonder what otets had commanded of the other concerning his son. hmmmm I wonder if he is going to allow him out of the business or not that active in the business or what.
Kostya love himself some Sunni don't he...like otets said all the men of his family seen to be enamoured with her I wonder that that inclue him well he did say that he wish she would call him otets one day.
Now back to Sergei he must have lost his mind. He does know that if he does not kill Nikolai that is only going to bring the blackness forward even more then it is already up front with him pointing that gun @ him. Does he think that this would ever make Sunni want him if he kills the love of her life? Really dude? Where is your head @ apparently it far far up his behind.
Loved the update I so hope that you update again soon with where you left me hanging @ chica.
Love this story, Love this chapter; Love your writing
Thank You Chica!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 08:53 am
OOO, that was good.
It was nice while it lasted. :( lol
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 07:03 am
whoa thar Sergei .
Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 06:51 am
Sergei...Sergei....Sergei. What in the world are you doing??? Have you lost your mind?
Please, please do NOT let Sergei kill Nikolai...Sunny and Nikolai are meant to be together.
But also please please do NOT let Nikolai kill Sergei. Actually, I suspect that Anatoly is nearby. As Nikolai's lieutenant, Anatoly should always be aware and around, sensing danger before it appears. If that is correct, Anatoly will soon be in the room with Sergei and Nikolai.
Sunshine MUST act...enough of thinking...she KNOWS what she has to do about Sergei. And her delay has allowed Sergei to now risk his life.
And Stanislavsky....he is the MAN! He is going to take care of his son...and Kostya is such a charmer. LOL.
Looking forward (VERY MUCH) to the next Update. The story isn't even over and I am ALREADY missing it. Are you sure you cannot do a BEAST 2, with Nikolai and Sunshine married and with maybe a baby or two????????? I WOULD LOVE TO SEE THAT...with an update on Ben.....
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 06:15 am
oh dear, sergei has lost his damn mind. And he was so likable in the beginning too. smh all this over a woman who don't want you.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 05:41 am
Is Sergei so stupid he thinks Sunshine will love him if he kills Nikki. He definitely needs to go and good riddance. Sunshine will never love him even if she breaks up with Nikki. Nikki is going to fuck him up for real.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 05:35 am
Looks like Sergei is about to write a check his ass can't cash...what in the world is he thinking...one...he has the nerve to step to Nikolai...the boss with a gun pointed and ready to use it...two...does he care nothing about his own brother, Anatoly...who is not only Nikolai's top lieutenant...but his close friend too...and three...so this is how he decides to 'save' Sunny...his supposed 'friend'....by killing the man that she loves in cold blood...and now Nikolai can no longer ignore him as he had done so many years out of respect for both Anatoly and Sunny...no matter what the outcome...it cannot and will not end well...I knew that fool was just biding his time...and this 'solution' of his has started a chain of events that can not be halted...and he has effectively signed his own death warrant...I'm speechless at this turn of events...
So the reason for Stanislavsky's visit to America has been effectively answered...I love the story he told to Sunny of Nikolai's prison experience...and how and why the 'softness' in him was extinguished...she had to know that we are the sum total of our experiences...he was not making excuses for what Nikolai had to become/is...but perhaps gaining understanding and clarity for the need to adapt to your environment...she needed to hear that...he gave her much to ponder, I think...
And Gloria making a pass at Nikolai certainly brought out Sunny's possessive side, didn't it...in her mind and heart...Nikolai will always be 'hers'...warts and all...I like that she doesn't want to be shut out of any part of his life...though he might feel embarrassment and shame for the things that he does and has done...he needs to be honest with her always...that is 'them'...and Sunny has to be strong enough to hear them but still be able to love him in spite of it if she wants him in her life...
Now the meeting between Stanislavsky and the other bosses is very intriguing...wonder what his proposal was for Nikolai's new role in the organization...I'm hoping that he will allow him to be free of it...but I don't want to get too hopeful...but we'll see...
As always...you keep this reader on her feet with all the twists and turns in this story...and I can never get enough of it...can't wait to see what happens next...thanks so much for the wonderful update...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 04:56 am
Make her pregnant lol thats all
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 04:05 am
sonuvab*tch. I hope Nikki kills that little ass wipe. I was reading along with some trepidation but with the make up scenes, I had started to breathe a sigh of relief. And then bam! an elbow to the throat! :0
Omni, Omni, Omni, you...are...trying...to...kill...me LOL
I can truthfully say that I didn't expect that ending. good job.
So, Stanis might be trying to set Nikki free? He really does love him. I was stunned but quite happy about that.
It was cute how Sunny staked her claim. Sistagirl has some claws. I really loved that part.
And Kostya was, as usual, so cute. He loves him some Sunny.
Please don't let Nikki die *said in a very small shaky voice*
Another 5 star chapter for me.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 03:42 am
Oh Noooooo!!!! what the hell???!!! Sergei has lost his everloving mind!!!! He has gone to the point of no return!!! I hope they don't kill each other. I can't believe he's trying to do this!!!!! No good can come of this, no good...... Please update soon.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 03:21 am
poor sergei, he is getting ready to die slow lol. that's his own fault, he's been warned.
i still love this story, looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: allnblack Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 02:44 am
lord. Sergei needs to go sit himself down somewhere and let this obsession he has go. You would think that by now he'd have listened to his brother and Sunshine when they told him that she was Nikolai's.
Reviewer: Taccora Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 02:38 am
wow this chapter was an emotional rollercoaster.
First thoughts..is Sunny gonna walk away from Nikki..I think he was thinking the same thing and she was seriously contempleting it!!
I am sad that she still cannot say I love you to Nikki...loving him does not mean that she cannot walk away if she has too..come on Sunny you love him!!
I think Ben is way smarter than Sunny thinks but way more realistic in expectatiosn of people...Sunny puts the people she cares about on pedestals..Ben appears to keep thm grounded more so in realism of who they are not the fantasy of who you want them to be...pragmatist and Sunny the hopeful dreamer!!
I love little Kostyva..he is adoable and so in love with him some Sunny..I think it is so sweet!
OK can I say how much I love Stan..I knew he loved his son too much to allow him to suffer..I think he is going to help Nikki go legit...I least I pary he will...but teh story he tokd Sunny spoke volumns to teh man Nikki has become because of her.
OK jealous Sunny..I LOVE IT...at least Nikki gets to see how much she loves him wether she says it or not!! Gloria was about to catch the anger of Sunny..lol!!
There love making in the car was so strong and powerful...whe Nikki told her don't push them apart because it hurt to much...I felt it! I am not sure either could survive w/o the other..I know Nikki would surely waste away or allow something to happen to himself...but I am not sure Sunny would make it out ok either...they have become such a vital part of each other lives...neither be able to survive w/o the other!!
Ok Sergei..is a fool. Funny thing is Nikki does not seem very worried. I don't think he knows what a big fool Sergei has become or he knows he would never be able to ge off a shot before his men or him would not be all over Sergei. The problem is if anything happens to Sergei even though he caused himself...Sunny would blame Nikki and they would not be able to come back from it and hsi friend ship with Anatoly would end ...Anatoly would probably out to destroy Nikki too..so he cannot kill Sergei but he could shoot Nikki ,,kill or permanently injure him....this would destroy Sunny but also sign Sergei's death sentence..because even if Nikki's men did not kill him..Stanis would not tolerate losing another son and all hell would break loose..
I normally hate cliffies but anything to make this wonderful story last a little longer is alright with me!!
I just love these two so much..I love every relationship... even as complicated as Nikki and Sunshine's ''to as simplistic as Kostyva and Sunshine....each relationship has it's individual complexity that enriches this story even more!!
I love how this story has devrloped to Sunny having no control to Sunny having all the control..and it was so smoothly done it seems very natural and right!!
This is a masterpiece ...a lesson it writing at it;s best!! Bravo sweetie,,now don't make me cry and go into depression with the next updt...lol!!
BTW way what Stanis telling Sunny he hopes one day she will call him..OTETS??
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 02:27 am
wth, is sergie crazy. i know he loves sunshine and everything, but if sunshine isn't complaining about nikolai, he shouldn't be either. dumb move. i'm sure this will be the death of him, ugh. please don't let him kill nikolai off though. i read something like this in a book once and it was so saaaaad. update soon.
Reviewer: rissaspieces Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 02:10 am
Great update..
Sunny- I think she has a little incite from Stan about Nikki and even though Sergei try to tear them apart I think he made them stronger in a sense. Sunny is very jealous of her Nikki the girl almost bite the heck out of the man jaw lol...
Nikki-He loves Sunny so much.. I don't think that he knows what Stan is willing to do for him and Sunny. It seems Stan wants to get him out of the business.
Sergei better hope that he live to tell a tale not.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 01:55 am
Oh no you didn't!!! Another chapter that caused me to have roller coaster of emotions.
I dreaded clicking on this latest chapter because of how the last went. The beginning was sad, then Ben and Sunny together cheered me up. Stanislavsky's visit was like BAMN! I loved it though. I wondered if he would talk to Sunny and free Nikolai from the dark dealings. You didn't disappoint.
Oh and the dinner and ride home with Sunny and Nikki had me drooling. I now know that those two won't ever leave each other alone.
Now the ending. I'm dead now. Please don't let Sergei kill Nikki! I can't believe you're leaving us hanging like this. Ugh!
Fantastic update Onimosity!
Reviewer: sherprin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/03/10 01:04 am
Awesome update. They get better and better. I know this story is coming to an end. I want to know the finish, but want it to continue as well. I love the take charge, aggressive Sunny. Sergei coming for Nicolai with a gun? What a cliff hanger.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/03/10 11:17 pm
WHAT?!!?! Oh my gosh! I was not expecting that!
Reviewer: Little Tree Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/03/10 10:44 pm
Wonderful update. The layers of both Sunny and Nikki are great. Nikki is truly a man of depth and what he feel for Sunny comes through every time they are together. And Sunny is realizing love is so many shades of gray. Simply awesome update. Thanks to you and the muse!!!
Reviewer: VetRog Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/03/10 10:25 pm
!!!!!
(Not a very coherent review, but that's what popped into my mind at the end of the chapter.)
Reviewer: EvilAngelfish Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/03/10 09:57 pm
OMG!!!!!! that was sooooo freakin awesome!! this story is totally like crack to me lol!! i know sunshine is really young but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let her be pregnant from their time in the car!!!!! i want them to have a happily ever after picket fence type ending and nikolai as an expectant father?!?!!? SWOONWORTHY!!!!!!!! FLOVED IT!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!! u should get this published. this is better than over half the ebooks i bought last year no joke!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: 05/03/10 09:04 pm