Oooh, this is getting good. I didn't catch on to the Jason aspect of the story about the iced cream until AJ said his name. I loved how you added that bit about Jason getting there first. And the story of accident comes out. I'm not sure Julianna will understand this one.
Author's Response:
Hi, again! :-) Thanks for the review and the stars! I had to bring Jason into it. LOL! You're right about Julianna. She wants to understand some of her father's point of view, but she doesn't really. She just feels like her mother got cheated, so it's hard for her to rationalize anything right now where AJ is concerned. LOL!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/08/08 04:26 am
Loved the talk with AJ and Keesha. Even though AJ feels guilty, Keesha has gotten past it and I completely understand why she would. It would seem petty at this point I think. I noticed Skye's last name is Chandler-Cudahy. I know I should recognize it but I'm at a loss right now. I'm guessing she's married?
Author's Response: Thanks! :-) I enjoyed writing their talks throughout the story. I kept Skye as a Chandler from her "All My Children" days, and I had her married to Tom Cudahy from AMC. I always liked them together, so I decided to go that way in this story. :-) I wanted Skye to be there because I enjoyed her relationship with AJ on GH. Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/08/08 04:22 am
I really liked this chapter. Julianna is very conflicted as well she should be. It's good she has Michael there to help her. And goodness, hasn't his life been one big mess? LOL.
Author's Response:
Hi, BlackMamba! Thank you for the review and the stars!! :-) Yes, Julianna will go back and forth for a while and some things will start to surface for Michael, too, as the story progresses, but for now, they're happy to have each other. :-)
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/08/08 04:18 am
I can't be a reporter is about to out AJ as being in rehab.
Keesha's getting a liver!!!!! I'm so happy.
Author's Response:
Hi, Sweet Pea! :-) Thanks for your review and the stars!! Yes, the next phase of the story has begun, with something positive and something negative, well, sort of! *grin* Hope you will continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/08/08 05:26 am
Awww, they reconnected, I'm so glad. And now I'm wondering why she never told him about his child, that's a pretty big secret to keep for all those years.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :-) Yes, it's a very big secret, and Keesha struggled with it. :-( I hope I can explain it well enough throughout the story that her reasoning somewhat makes sense. :-)
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/08/08 03:03 am
Wow, Sonny and Carly blown to pieces? And Michael's not his son, that's a neat little twist. Glad Jase and Courtney are history, never had much use for them.
Also glad Keesha's catching on to her daughter's actions, I can't wait until she sees A.J. again.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for the review and the stars!! :-) I needed S&C to be gone in this story. LOL! And for Michael not to be A.J.'s son. Now, Jason and Courtney being history...well, something may happen later in the story...
Keesha knows her daughter. LOL!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/08/08 03:00 am
I like that he's so determined to find out the truth, which he should. And Julianna seems a bit headstrong, just like her father I imagine.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks again!! :-) Yes, in response to both of your comments! LOL!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/08/08 02:56 am
Excellent first chapter. I always loved the character of A.J. and so thought he got the shaft in favor of Jason. Nice to see him in this fic, alive and well, I might add. :)
Author's Response:
Hi, TBG! :-) Thanks for your review and stars!! :-) I'm glad you're enjoying the story. ITA about A.J. vs. Jason. When I was writing this story, A.J. ended up leaving the show but not getting killed off. I was so surprised when I read they killed him off a couple of years later. Why I was surprised, I don't know, but I was. :-( Hope you will continue to enjoy! :-)
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/08/08 02:53 am
Okay, I'm so sorry for not reviewing this story sooner. I don't know why I didn't bbut I'm now. Ho how I love this story!! I loving how you are writing Keesha, AJ, and thier daughter Julianna. GAWD, this is how I remember GH all those years ago. I also love how you taken characters that were runied on the show and making them so real and likeable for the most part. I can name many characters you are writing about are either drop off the face of the earth on GH or dead. Isn't that sad or what. I love seein AJ shine in this story, because I hated how he and serveral others characters were treated in order to pimp the likes of Sonny, Jason, and Carly. Julianna is a wonderful new character and I can actually see her being the daughter of AJ and Keesha. Keesha and AJ falling back in love with each other after all these years is so wondeful to see. I love it. Julianna and Michael is sweet too. Actually I love Michael in this story. Can't stand hs butt on the show and I'm glad his in the coma or whatever he is at now on the show. Sighs. I can't wait to read the rest this story. Great writing all around.
Author's Response:
Hi, Megumi! Thanks for your review!! :-) I'm glad you're enjoying the story and are enjoying reading about characters who were basically ruined on the show (ITA with you!!) or who are no longer even on the show. LOL about Michael. I think he's a viable character, but it probably is better that he's not on the show right now. Not that I'm watching, but...*grin* Hope you will continue to enjoy the story! :-)
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/08 08:53 pm
I don't know why but I cut my eyes when Alan touched AJ's shoulder.
Author's Response:
That was a somewhat strange scene for me to write. :-)
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 04:35 am
Alan is such a JERK! Yes, praise the son that deals in illegal crap all the time, and treat the son that trys to make a difference like shit on the bottom of your shoe. And as far as I'm concerned, Monica didn't try hard enough to keep AJ in her life. Ok, that's my rant for now. LOL!
Author's Response:
LOL! Yeah, there are definitely some issues to be resolved. LOL!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 04:19 am
The little kiddies had their first kiss. I thought it was so cute!
I like that Justus is concerned for Jules and Keesha, but I hope he really respects their decisions in regard to AJ.
Oh Lawd, the Q-clan. Now this is gonna be interesting.
Author's Response:
Hi again! Your last line in this review made me LOL! *grin* Yeah, they wanted to kiss, so I let them. *grin* Justus is going to be okay, I think. :-)
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 04:03 am
Girl, you have definitely made me a part of the "Poor AJ" fan club. It just makes me want to straight kick Alan's ass!
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for your review and stars!! :-) Some of your reviews really make me LOL, and this is one of them. Alan was not going to give in, at least not right away. *grin*
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 03:54 am
Oh so there is hope for Keesha? That's so good to hear. It's sad how she got sick. I'm glad that Jules overhead that but wow, she'd a bit nosey huh?
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for all your reviews and stars! I appreciate them very much!! Yes, there is hope for Keesha. :-) Julianna wanted to keep a close eye on her father! LOL!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 03:39 am
Oh, this chapter got me choked up. That description of Keesha and AJ seeing her for the first time was just so sad. Nice to see AJ doing good things with his life.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :-) Yeah, that was a hard chapter for me to write. I still wanted the *idea* of AJ and Keesha to be there, but I also knew I had to try to portray Keesha realistically for the story to make sense. LOL! Luckily for me, the characters cooperated with what I wanted to do. LOL!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 03:33 am
Oh nice. So Julianna's friends with Michael but doesn't know their shared history. How cool. I like your Michael so much better than the one on the show. He was a little ass (excuse my french).
Author's Response:
Yeah! Their history/circumstances worked for what I wanted to do with this story. :-) LOL about Michael. I know what you mean. I felt I needed to make him a lot different than how he's portrayed on the show, especially since he's older in my story and there were certain things I wanted to have happen. :-)
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 03:29 am
Noooooooo!!! This is so sad. Keesha had to trick her little girl to get her out of the house. I wonder why she kept the secret all this time.
Author's Response:
Hi! Yeah, my poor Keesha. :-( But she'll keep on fighting!! :-) Hopefully, the details will make sense to you as you read the chapters about what happened between AJ and Keesha, or should I say what didn't happen. LOL!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 03:26 am
Oh, you killed Sonny. Brava! I do like Carly, but she can annoying so it's all good she was in the limo. Jason and Courtney are under a rock I hope. So AJ just didn't call Keesh? Heh? Kinda cold. I can see why Julianna isn't to keen on meeting him.
Author's Response:
Hi! For the purposes of this story, Sonny and Carly needed to be gone. LOL! Now, Jason and Courtney are another matter. LOL! Yeah, more will be explained about what happened with AJ, but that's what Julianna knows. Her father didn't care about her mother, so, too bad for him. *grin*
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 03:23 am
Oooh, so he knows that she could be his daughter. Julianna's kinda rowdy. Liking her a lot.
Author's Response:
Thanks again! I'm glad you like Julianna. :-) She was fun to write for, even with the rollercoaster ride she took me on. LOL!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 03:18 am
Ha! I love that reaction. I'm guessing that's Julianna who slammed the door in AJ's face. Sorry it took me so long to get to this one. However, I always though AJ got a raw deal on the show so I'm happy you're giving him the story he deserves.
Author's Response:
Hi, BlackMamba! :-) Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars! :-) Yep, it was Julianna. LOL! I wanted to write a story for AJ and Keesha, especially because of the way Keesha/Senait was treated on the show. :-( I wanted to try to keep her going through fan fic. :-)
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 03:16 am
*bawls like a baby* Julianna has more sense at 15 than Alan does at however old he is. I'm so happy she finally accepted her Daddy's love.
I would love to see Julianna have a relationship with her grandparents too though, as long as Alan hasn't become Edward Jr (which it seems like he has because he's doing the very same thing to AJ that Edward did to him all his life).
Brava pinkrose! I love this story so much and I can't wait to see where you take us from here.
Author's Response:
Hi, BelovedTangeline! :-) Thank you very much for your review and the stars!! :-) I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Some things will happen that will change a few dynamics before this one is over. *grin* Hope you will continue to enjoy!!
Reviewer: BelovedTangeline Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/08/08 07:50 am
What a jerk Alan is! I wish Monica hadn't been so weak to allow him to cut her son out of their life and not even have a picture of him in their houe but I'm glad it gave Julianna a little perspective and understanding of AJ. I am really into this story I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you!! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :-) Yeah, Alan just couldn't let it go...yet. *grin* But it made Julianna realize a few things, so hopefully, it'll all be good. :-)
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/08/08 05:04 am
Awww that was a sweet family dinner, the twin babies are so adorable and I don't even know what they look like hahaha. I'm glad Julianna is allowing her mom a little bit of happiness for now though I can't help but feel if she finds out something negative about AJ she's going to try to break them up.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks again!! :-) Oops, sorry about the description (or lack thereof) of the kids. :-( I wrote a little bit about them looking like their parents in one of the previous chapters, but I realize I should have expanded on what they look like. Thanks for pointing that out!
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/08/08 04:44 am
Yes thank you this is what I've been waiting for. I love how sweet and sensual that was all at the same time. I love my AJ and my Keesha together though I can't help but wonder how hurricane Julianna is going to respond hahaha.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for your review and the stars!! :-) I'm glad you enjoyed their kiss. I love my AJ and my Keesha together, too! :-) LOL at Hurricane Julianna. *grin* I think she's gonna be okay with this.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/08 04:28 am
AJ and Keesha Kissed!!!!! It's about time. I'm also happy that Jules is gonna have a chance to meet Em. She doesn't need to meet the entire Q-clan in one setting. I wouldn't wish that on anyone.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks again!! :-) Yes, they did. Finally! LOL! LOL about meeting the Q-clan, too. *grin*
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/08/08 01:56 am