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Title: Chapter 1 : Drama King

Nice opening, different spin on the whole popular and friend theme. interested in learning more, and eager to find out why jesse acts the way he does, and why carmen puts up with it

 Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 07:42 am
Title: Chapter 1 : Drama King

Interesting start, will be looking forward to more

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/01/10 06:35 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I am loving this story!!!  Please update soon.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/01/10 05:37 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Great update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/01/10 02:12 am
Title: Chapter 2

This is a cute story!  I like the fact that they have been friends since childhood!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  :)

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/01/10 11:36 pm
Title: Chapter 1 : Drama King

Interesting story so far. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/12/09 01:49 am
Title: Chapter 1 : Drama King

I like your story line and the relationship between Carmen and Jesse seems really sweet.  I am interested in seeing how th story plays out.   This is a good chapter.  My only request is that  you separarte you paragraphs in the future to make it easier to read.

 Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 09:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1 : Drama King

I like the characters Carmen and Jesse.  Can you please space the paragraph it would make it a little better to read. 

Can't wait for the next update.

 Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 03:27 pm
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