Glad you're back!!
This story was just getting interesting... and hot.
Vico and Mary, his Maria. Their attraction is so strong, I believe people are going to start noticing, especially with Vico's staring and subtle displays of possessiveness. I'm enjoying reading about these two and their little dance of seduction.
Hope that you will continue to update.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/06/10 10:42 am
Why did Mary leave like that! She assumed the absolute worst for no reason. And I dont like the way Donatello was eyeing Mary for some reason. Matter of fact, I dont like the way he was eyeing Vico either. What was that about. He gonna use that somehow.
Nice.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 24/06/10 06:28 am
I like it. And I didn't realize that you were back. I really missed this story because I like the match up of Vico and Mary. I hope you continue the story. But I do have one question...they made love without protection,...does this mean that we should expect a "small bundle" in a few months? LOL. If that occurred, Mary can forget about getting away because Vico would never let her and his bambino get away from him. And I suspect that Donnatello will be a pain in the a@*. What is Vico willing to do to protect his Maria?
Please Update soon. This is a very good story...don't let it die.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 24/06/10 06:26 am
I'm glad to see an update. Mary has no idea what she ia about to step into with this relationship with Vico.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 24/06/10 05:46 am
I really like this story. I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: Mountaingal Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/06/10 11:42 pm
Really wishing for an update. Love this story.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 14/05/10 01:14 pm
Yummy Viggo Mortensen! Great story - can't wait for the update!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/03/10 02:10 am
I love this story . I even think about it hours later . Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/03/10 05:42 pm
Dang.
These two have been sizzling around each other like errant electrical currents.
Some people do not react to fear or shock as we expect. I hope there was nothing calculated or manipulative in Vico's seduction. Mary/Maria is smart. The morning after in this situation should be more interesting than your typical "oh, shit, I slept with him/my boss/a MOB boss/killer moment.
I think Viggo is an underrated cool, quiet, sexy being. Thanks for making him the male lead.
Keep those updates coming. I'm hooked.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 16/03/10 02:01 am
THAT CHAPTER WAS HAWT.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 06:16 pm
Now that I'm no longer speechless, I just wanted to say that I can see the direction that this story is going in...well I'm going to keep reading to see if I'm right. If executed quite well, this could be a REALLY GOOD story. Last night was my first time ever reading this story and I'm definitely interested in it thus far. About the sex...it was a good scene...I had a feeling it would go there much sooner than later...and to be honest how else where they going to sort of clear the air of all the tension? Sexual tension and well the other stuff. Will there be any regrets? The fact is she didn't scream or cry but was more disappointed in Vico than anything else...like you wrote...she really seem pissed that he ruined her night. She's not as innocent to certain things and really she knew what he was about when the guys started coming to dinner. The fact that she was still very much attracted to him shows...that well...I'm just going to sit back and keep reading because like I said I think that is going to get really good. I'm wondering will she quit her job though...but if she's goes back...well...everything is going to be different.
Reviewer: R. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 03:04 pm
Well, welcome back! And with a WONDERFUL Update!!!!
I don't think I read that he used a condom...are we talking future pregnancy here, hmmmm? Now that it is clear that they are very sexually attracted to each other, they still have this murder standing between them. She is a witness to that. In Vico's world, don't they kill witnesses? I don't think Vico wants to kill Mary, now that he finally has her where he wants her...I think this is a quandry. Sex...and afterwards, guilt.
I would like to see them stay together. Vico will be a possessive lover and he won't want to pretend that they are not lovers, while I suspect that Maria will want to keep it between them.
I am REALLY looking forward to seeing the next Updates. Will they be happening SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON?????
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 06:52 am
Wow, that was an interesting update. The sex scene was great but was it a distraction to what was really going on???? Is he gonna form a relationship with her to keep her quiet??? Could she really live with what he did??? How will she allow her conscience to justify what she saw now that she had sex with Vico??? Hmmm, can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 06:44 am
Wow...literally speechless. BUT....I was wondering what is their age difference...how old is Vico?
Reviewer: R. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 05:59 am
wow i guess nothing says take me big daddy like seeing a guy get killed lol but all jokes aside. i'm mean she handle that well me proably been screaming my head off and begging god that they dont' kill me lol but she had it was good strives and with some hot sex he knows how to handle his business. love this story and hope to see another updated soon thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 05:49 am
And Mary still slept with him, ain't no man that fine!!! Great update!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 05:22 am
Wow, I wondered how you would work that with her witnessing a murder. I guess they couldn't fight the attraction any longer. I like the story and was excited to see you had update. I will definitely keep reading.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 05:07 am
Oh my goodness, I'm totally speechless. What in the world happens now. She just burnt up the sheets with a man she just saw kill someone. I'll try again to give constructive criticism as the best way to improve your story, UPDATE MORE FREAKIN FREQUENTLY.
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Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 04:31 am
omgee!! Mary slept with Vico and after he shot someone some please call the big guys in the white uniforms! lol but I loved this chapter I guess Vico is so hot she said to he** with it mmhmmm GO VICO!!!
Reviewer: Norma Bu. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 02:41 am
I have been missing this story, great update. Do it again soon
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 02:10 am
I just read the other chapters, I LOVE THIS STORY, can't wait until the next chapter hope its soon.
Reviewer: Tracy Reynolds Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 01:58 am
I don't think that she should have slept with him.
She's clearly not thinking.
What will happen now that she has slept with him.
She also knows that he's a killer.
Please update soon
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 01:33 am