Loved the Update. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Raven Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/03/10 12:49 am
Thanks for the update. I have to say I was a little surprised she let him make love to her after witnessing him having someone murdered. Where can she go from here, will she now be apart of what he is involved in. It will be interesting to found out.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 12:32 am
I missed this story. Thanks for the update. Not sure how thing will go after they had sex and her knowing that he murdered a man in cold blood, but can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/10 12:10 am
A cliffhanger!! Please update soon so I can be put out of my misery.
Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/02/10 07:24 pm
oh crap yeah if any thing was going to happen btween them her seeing a man get shot it deftinly turn off lol. glad she made a new friend. thanks for the updated. love the story
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/02/10 08:23 pm
wow! what happens next?!
Reviewer: brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 08:00 pm
Oh no...this is not good. Not good at all. What will happen to Mary now?!! Please update soon XD
Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/02/10 02:58 pm
Mama Mia!!
What the hell has she gotten herself into.
Vico better save her, before she ends up like Altenburg. Dead.
He's the one that wanted her at his party.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 01:08 pm
Yeah, another update!!
Luved it!! Soooo, Vico is digging on Mary, Mary is digging on Vico. She connects the dots, has her ah-hah moment where attraction clashes with her moral fiber. The snub wasn't going to be ignored the next day at work anyway, but damn!!!
This is a HUGE "Oh, suga" moment. It's about to really get interesting now.
Great update. Screamed and shook my fist at the cliffy, but it was perfect. Please, please don't keep us in suspense too long.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/02/10 12:11 pm
Oh crap, what's a girl to do??? Run like hell!!! But its too late, Mary was spotted. Wonder what's gonna happen from here???? Great update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 08:11 am
omgee... When she realized she had left her bag, I was screaming, DON'T GO BACK!!! Well, this is a fine pickle. It'll be kind of hard for Vico to woo Mary with this little matter of murder between them.
I can't imagine where this will lead; but I'm damn sure gonna stick around to see what happens. Way to grab my attention. good job, chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 06:56 am
Well this doesnt help Vico's case any.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 06:50 am
Oh my. That was some update. I knew they were the Mafia, but I didn't think Mary would get that caugt up with the bad guys. Hope for more soon.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 06:24 am
Wow, that is all I can say
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 05:20 am
ohhh shit, this is going to be bad. poor Mary! please update soon.
Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 04:53 am
Cue, scary orchestra music. Oh the anticipation! I can't wait to see what Vico says to Mary or what he tries to do to convince her not to tell. Update ASAP! Great story.
Reviewer: Lena Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 04:42 am
I knew Mary was going to see something she wasn't suppose to. Well I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 04:42 am
I am now totally hooked on this story....Please update soon.
And this is just a suggestion, to make your story better of course. UPDATE MORE FREQUENTLY.
A
Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 04:30 am
Oh, snap!!! What is he going to do to Mary now? How could you stop right there? Don't you know that cliff hangers are evil and are of the devil?
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 04:26 am
do i sense a lil marriage, cause spouses can't testify against each other, how close am I?
Reviewer: monique32 Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 04:24 am
Ohhhh....don't leave us on a cliff hanger!! I am beginning to get into this story. Please don't take too long to give us another Update.
I have to say I love the relationship developing between Vico and Mary. But after he ordered the death of a man that occurred right in front of her...how can they grow closer??
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 04:05 am
Great update. Please hurry and update soon. I love this story.
Reviewer: Raven Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 03:54 am
She witnessed him having someone killed, what will she do now or what will he do to her now! Nice update!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 03:54 am
Oh Snap! I hope Mary isn't the next to get iced. This story is very intriguing keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 03:41 am
I love your writing technique. Mary and Vico doing a slow burn. Please update soon.
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Author's Response: I'm getting started on the next chapter right away. thank you! Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/01/10 01:11 pm