Aww...I like Ernesto!! I can't wait to find out exactly what's going to be going on in his house. Great update!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 23/01/10 08:39 am
i would like longer chapters! i'm liking this!
Author's Response: I'll try! thanks for reading!
Date: 22/01/10 11:28 pm
I'm totally in love with Vico. I wish this story was a movie. I would watch it over and over again. I can actually feel the HEAT when Mary and Vico are together. Love the new update. I can't wait for more !!!
Author's Response: awwh thank you! this was so sweet! Thank you for reading!
Date: 22/01/10 08:54 pm
Ok...since you said secrets will be revealed, I wont hound you. But HURRY!! I'm dying here!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/10 06:23 pm
I like the way the story is moving...good update!
Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/01/10 04:32 pm
Bring on the steam and the secrets!!
Author's Response: hahah thank you for reading!
Date: 22/01/10 02:34 pm
Mary and the Mob.
I have a feeling that tonight's party is more of a sexual nature than a business nature (just guessing).
Mary has too many stars in her eyes. I think she needs to find out about the nature of the man she has a crush on and his business's.
I hope that Vico is not the cold hearted bastard he appears to be.
Great story.
Author's Response: hhahah! thank you for reading. Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/01/10 11:49 am
SSSSoooooooo Vico is the mob or something.
Author's Response:
my lips are sealed! you'll see soon enuff!
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/10 08:14 am
Loved the update. Glad to see Ernesto looking out for her.
Author's Response: THank you!
Date: 22/01/10 07:54 am
wow dam i thougth that vico was about to have himself some choclate and not talking about the dessert lol. these two are filling each other big time and can't wait to see more about this couple thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: hahahah! yep its gonna get hotter. thank you for reading!
Date: 22/01/10 07:54 am
What is going at Vico house? I am loving the chemistry, they both have the hots for each other. I wonder how long it will take them to act on their feelings for each other? This is story telling at it's finest. Don't wait too long before you update again.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Date: 22/01/10 07:30 am
great update!
Reviewer: brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/01/10 09:55 pm
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Reviewer: Chamber _Administrators Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 08:58 pm
Just started reading this but I like so far.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 07:18 am
Loved the update. What's the deal with Danielle that she can talk to the boss like that??? Hope Mary doesn't get caught up in any drama.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 05:42 am
wow i like mary she can handle her business but that gril blind as a bet not to notice how sexy V is looking at her and wanted to get know mary wink wink lol. why does that other girl don't like her? thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 03:26 am
Ok..what was that with Danielle about? Better questiuon..what was that with Vico about?
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 03:06 am
I am liking this story more and more, every time I read another Update. Mary is just what Vico needs in his life.
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Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 02:31 am
Great update, do it again soon
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 01:28 am
Sukie, sukie, now!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 01:09 am
PLEASE PUT ME OUTTA MY MISERY! Update soon! I am loving this story a lot!
Reviewer: Rapture Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 12:19 am
Nice update! Who is Tara to Vico? Danielle seems like she is jealous, so Mary had better be careful!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 12:18 am
I love this story so much , the loving way Vico was holding Mary's hand . I just love him . Please keep the story going.Love It .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/01/10 11:22 pm
I wanna know the story with Tara!!
also how old are Vico and Mary again? sorry if you've already said I forgot :(
Reviewer: Neko Signed [Report This]Date: 09/01/10 10:31 pm
You are a (damn) tease! Feeding us little by little - more, please! Lol! Simply, loving this story for real XD
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 09/01/10 09:58 pm