Thanks for a great update. It seems that they all are attracted to the owner. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 01:16 pm
Great start to the story. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 01:14 pm
Hi,
Thought I was seeing things, but, no, it was a second chapter. Thank you.
This is a nice start, good pace.
Mary has spunk, is a smart, friendly, hard-worker.
Everyone has been friendly enough. I even liked Ernesto until that "nero" crack between him and Vespucci. So, they hired Nehemiah and Mary. Is he on some kind of qouta or something for black hires? Is the restaurant a legit business?
There is much more story to tell.
Keep the updates coming.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 10:18 am
I am enjoying this story. Thanks for spoiling us with 2 chaps. 2nite.
I don't have anything to comment on yet. these first few chaps seems like getting to know the charaters.
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 06:38 am
Umm..ok...what was the black crack between Ernesto and Vespucci about? I dont want to start thinking the worst right off here.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 06:38 am
I like Mary.
Good so far keep ot coming.
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 04:57 am
Loving this story.
can't wait to see if mary's love interest is going to be Vico.
Love the way that Mary got back at her professor by calling him Mister, instead of Professor.
Can't wait for more.
this seems like it is going to be a hot story.
Reviewer: Janetbd Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 04:34 am
Love your story so far! Cant wait for more!
Reviewer: Fanny Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 04:24 am
im really liking this....good job!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 03:54 am
Ok, Danielle is...ah...well..yeah.
I liked the pace of the chapter and Eric and Ernie. Is Mary a cook because she impressed with that sauce.
The good stuff begins now.
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 03:52 am
Please hurry and update
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 03:39 am
I am loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Raven Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 03:29 am
Time to meet the owner. Gerat update!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/10 03:06 am
Loved the beginning. Is this where she will meet her mister right?
Author's Response: Yep! It will all unfold soon enough!
Date: 04/01/10 02:59 am
Great start. Looks really interesting :)
Reviewer: Valhalla Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/01/10 05:04 pm
nice start keep it coming
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/01/10 11:03 pm
This looks like it is going to be a good story. I like Mary and they way she called her professor MR. was subtle, but very nicely done. Also, any story that has Viggo Mortensen playing one the characters is good from the start. I'm looking forward to reading future chapters.
Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]Date: 02/01/10 06:18 pm
Just from the pics alone of the heroine and hero, I will be giving this a read. Here's to slim, dark skinned women alllll over and Viggo Mortensen who's a GOD in my acting eyes!
Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/01/10 12:23 pm
So is Antonio going to be love ? I am liking how this story is starting. I most definitely want to read more.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/01/10 06:19 am
Me likey. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 02/01/10 05:56 am
I like it. Good start.
I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 02/01/10 05:47 am
Love the casts pics.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 02/01/10 05:44 am
It is a good beginning. You got me interested. Mary seems like she will persevere, which is good to see. Who will be her love interest? Can't wait for the next Update and I am glad it is going to be a LONG story. LOL.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 02/01/10 05:40 am