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Title: Chapter 19

btw. pls come back.

Reviewer: monsgors Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/06/14 03:05 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I'm in love with this story! There is a certain mystery surrounding everything that places me in the book. Because all the details aren't there, I think about how I would survive being in the situation. Makes me wonder about the politics of this new world.

As much as I would say I would be independent if I was Rox, I would probably handle the environment no better than her. I love her wit, b/c that's how I deal with danger. Speaking of danger, how did she get in that situation to begin with?

I've kinda been waiting for her to meltdown, cause she has been way to accepting. But then again, does she have a choice? 

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/06/14 03:03 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Very good

Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/14 01:11 am

Title: Chapter 1

reeeally missing this story - i'm on knees and begging, pleeeease come back! :D

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/05/13 05:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1



Reviewer: LaserLight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/12 02:45 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I really like this story! I hope you update it! I love all of the characters (Though i found Roxie a tad annoying in the beginning lol). Though i'm a littl confused as how they are going to have kids if mod is sterile? bt iguess you'll explain that later. Either love the story!

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/05/12 02:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

Please update with sugar on top

Reviewer: Alexx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/12 05:48 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Love love love this story! Please update soon:) I bet Mod's gonna tell her he's been stalking her and/or can read her mind. Or what if he talked to Peter or was Peter!! Lol okay ima stop guessing now but I will say I miss Leo a tad. I know he's there buy I miss Rox interacting with him(a lil) but yeah again great add, please add more #TeamMod/TeamPeter lol jk

Reviewer: Modanne lover:) Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/10/11 10:10 am

Title: Chapter 19

TeamMod TeamMod!!!!! I wish you had a cast list to go with it!!! I'm ensnared!!!

Reviewer: BurntSienna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/08/11 05:18 pm

Title: Chapter 19

i've notice a pattern with myself - i always seem three updates behind, lol! not that it matters to me, that only means more reading and boy, did i enjoy it! i wont lie i missed Leo but in the same time it's nice to see Mod and Roxi together, she has started to relax around him and really likes the idea of having babies with him lol! i have a questions for you - how many chapters do you think DP will have?

other than thanks for the update!!!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 01:26 pm

Title: Chapter 19

If she can touch him without getting hurt why can't she tie him up and have her way with him?

Author's Response:

That thought has crossed my mind but then I came up with two reasons why it wouldn't work:

(1) Roxi is too innocent to come up with something like that on her own. That actually made me want to write a story with a less naive female protagonist. *wink wink*

(2) Have you seen Hancock? 'Mountain top!'-sex is not conducive to baby-making. 

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 10/07/11 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I love that Rox has natural hair. I am glad Mod appreciates it as well.

Author's Response:

I love natural hair! I just hope it doesn't become controversial since I hardly describe Roxi at all. I know some women can get very sensitive about hair.

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/07/11 05:21 am

Title: Chapter 1

what took you so long, grrrr....

Loved it! It was a very sweet chapter and good to see mod and roxie interacting in a non-intense way. wish the chapter was longer. hopefully we won't have to wait too long for the other chapters x

Author's Response:

*cowers* I'm sorry it took so long!

I'm glad you liked the update. I genuinely thought the chapter was longer than it actually was. Le sigh...

And fyi, I'm already working on the next update.

Reviewer: mims Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/07/11 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 19

another lovely charming update. i love rox and mod together. love how she is as she says slowly warming to him, rather the idea of being a family, haveing, creating a family or semblance of. i think its getting to mod too. im loving the happy! and anticipating whats to come. a+! thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm very glad that you like this update. I actually didn't intend for this to be a completely Moxi update, but I decided I had to post something soon. I'm trying not to make their relationship look too rushed. I hope it's working. 

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 06:53 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response:

Sorry for responding so late. I'm glad you liked it! 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/06/11 02:30 pm

Title: Chapter 18

nice update thank you

Author's Response:

Sorry for responding so late. I'm glad you liked the update!

Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 10:29 pm

Title: Chapter 1

So glad to have you bak.


I love all the cahracters I literally fell in love with all of them(well atleast the main ones) lol. I can't decide who I want her to ended up with but I think Mod, althrough Leo is a sweetheart. idk I want a happy ending for all  lol. um and wats up with peter ?

Author's Response:

Sorry to respond to your review so late! I'm very flattered that you like the characters so much. I definitely have my favorites, but that's neither here nor there.

I'm glad someone asked about Peter! Find out in the 20th chapter! Suspense!


Reviewer: omgsums Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/11 08:19 am

Title: Chapter 18

i just read all of this in one sitting; girlie, this is good! i'll write a more detailed review later, but for now, i am absolutely torn! i heart Mod, but Leo is so sweet and kind and smart-assed that i totally heart him too! one question (which will not skew my view on this at all, but): is Roxanne mixed?

can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

I'm flattered that you took the time to read it all in one go!

Leo and Mod are pretty cool, huh? I'm glad they don't seem too angsty. Well, Leo doesn't considering the circumstances.

I haven't written much about Roxi's pre-story life. I know I need to do that some time soon. I never imagined her as mixed, though. I'll be writing more about that in the future, though.

Thank you very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 01:48 am

Title: Chapter 4


Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter 3

great story

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 10:35 pm

Title: Chapter 2

great story

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 10:29 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 10:24 pm

Title: Chapter 18

*applause* I soooo love this story! Great update. I enjoyed it. :)


"How did you get Leo to let you leave the house with this imbecile?"

"I, and people like myself, prefer the term ‘lovable idiot'."


LOL! This was funny. Alex and Sam, ahhhh love. Giving these spellbooks to Roxie behind Leo's back is very tricky. I hate to see Leo mad. I mean I would love to see him mad. I'm sure he's even more sexy! I like Roxie's observations on Leo, feeling guilty (or appearing so) after he kissed her. That makes two dudes who have feelings for her in spite of decorum (in spite of this need to choose and mate).


Thanks for the update. Take your time. Post when you feel like it.

Author's Response:

Yay! I'm funny again! :-)

I'm glad you like Alex and Sam. I've decided that I need a relatively less angsty couple.

Leo is my favorite character but he still ended up being my cosmic plaything. I know I should write backstories for him and Mod, but I feel like it would still suck to be him somehow...

In any case, I'm glad you liked this update. Thank you very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 08:10 pm

Title: Chapter 18

I really wanted Roxie and Leo together.  If she and MOd are suppose to be togeher, why did he attack her?    Great update by the way!!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for reviewing!

Leo just can't catch a break, right? Not that it matters, but he is my favorite character...

I know that I wrote in the first chapter that Mod "attacked" Roxi. That was just supposed to be her perception of the event (as the majorly injured party). In later chapters, I tried to emphasize that his real intent was just to hug her; that's partly why everyone is so sympathetic to him. I'm sorry for the confusion. I'll keep this in mind. I might change the wording in the first chapter.


Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 07:58 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Hi how are you doing? So the pen is a little dry, try reading what you have written so far. Think why each main character need each other. Why can he not touch her without pain? Is it because he has not opened his heart to his mate? Or maybe she needs to see him as a man not a creature or see him as both? Does your main female lead need to over come some inner demons of her own to help him? or Does he need to accept him self and his passion for his chocolate drop to remove the curse. or Is he cursing himself by focusing on that and not life?????? please respond, relax and update soon. thank you ....

Author's Response:

Hey there! Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm doing well; I hope you are too. I have solved the mystery of the curse! I hope to bring it to you in a few chapters. I can't give anything away now, but it's a real doozy! I try to bring things full circle. I think you'll like it, but I sincerely hope I don't disappoint.

Reviewer: brownie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/11 11:06 pm

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