This was very good...I'm intrigued...what a strange world you've crafted...Roxannne...brutally attacked...why do vampires and demon want to possess virgins...the last part of the chapter threw me off a bit...but I'm sure you'll explain later what that was about...also...
I can't to wait to see what happens next...great start...I'm in...
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope I don't disappoint you. Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/01/10 04:52 am
Me likey but who or what attacked her when she entered the house??? Was it Leonardo??? Who is this demon that is dreaming about the woman??? Is it about Roxanne??? Yep, I know so many questions but you've got me hooked.
Author's Response: Stay tuned! All will be answered in time...
[Report This]Date: 18/01/10 04:41 am
This is an interesting start. Brutally attacked? By what? By Leonardo? I'm intrigued.
Author's Response: Then tune in for the next chapter!
Date: 18/01/10 04:38 am
Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I will.
[Report This]Date: 18/01/10 04:07 am
Interesting start. I am anxious to know what happened to Roxanne.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope I don't disappoint.
Date: 18/01/10 03:41 am
ooo me likie!! its seems very interesting! keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! Please keep reading.
Date: 18/01/10 03:38 am