Your work is pure excellence. I love this story. I love your storytelling. I'm sorry you had a rough semester but I hope you have a stress-free summer. And thank you SO MUCh for returning to this wonderful, wonderful, story. Great dialogue in this update. Great pace. Great characters, setting, everything. Still in love with this work. Take your time on updates. Don't rush it. We'll be here ready and waiting :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I am extremely flattered that you like this story. I'm still keeping my fingers crossed that I don't disappoint.
Reviewer: madame z Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/05/11 06:48 pm
So happy to see this story has been updated. It is one of my favorites. There are so many unanswered questions. I can't wait to read about where things go. I did like the twist of Leo having Sam test Roxie. I was wondering how she was going to choose between 3 guys but I see that isn't the case. I'm really liking the development with Roxanne/Mod.
Author's Response:
I'm very flattered that you consider this one of your favorite stories. I thought I was having some trouble working the pairings before but I think I have everything under control now.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lostalongtheway Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/11 07:57 pm
Dude! Where the heck have you been?!
Seriously though,I'm glad you updated. Awesome chapter. :)
Author's Response:
I feel like I've been to Bitchistan and back but I survived, right? Thank you very much for reviewing. I'm glad you liked this update. I hope I can keep your attention 'til the end. I'll try to be more regular with my updates.
Reviewer: Ioneha Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/05/11 03:45 am
Thanks for the update. I am glad that Roxanne is thwing towards Mod.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reviewing. I'm glad you like where the story is going. Please stay tuned and I'll try not to keep you waiting long!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 20/05/11 02:30 am
I have missed this. Thank you for updating. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for reviewing! I'm sorry to keep you waiting. I hope you enjoyed this update.
Reviewer: c. o. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/05/11 12:35 am
Most excellent and you added a character, I don't remember a Sam!!! Lovely, please don't make us wake too long for another chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I hope you like Sam. I'm trying to differentiate him from Mod and Leo; I think I'm doing it, but only time will tell. I'll try not to keep you waiting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 11:30 pm
oh wow. i've read this before. doing it now to refresh my memory! =)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reviewing. I'm flattered that you're taking the time to refresh your memory. I'll assume this means that you liked it last year. I hope you enjoy this year's updates just as well.
Reviewer: Inthenykoftime Signed [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 10:54 pm
Hi, Nice to have you back updating this story! Good job on the grades, its hard to keep a level head when under stress. Keep the pen in hand and the ink in your heart.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I'm trying to keep my priorities straight. Hopefully I'll have the story finished by the end of the summer. *fingers crossed*
Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 09:57 pm
Please start updating again I love this story.
Reviewer: Priscilla Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/04/11 02:55 am
Any pics to add? Helps the stories out!
Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/03/11 12:46 pm
Hi, just wondering if you are going to continue with this story. I'm clinging to the fact that you commented about not abandoning any stories:) I do understand however if you have a block with the story or other things in your life are taking precedence over this. Look forward to any possible updates:))
Reviewer: DizzyLeigh Signed [Report This]Date: 08/02/11 01:52 pm
I'm really missing this story; I hope you update soon
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/10 11:56 pm
I like Leo and Roxann together. Why put Mod together with her?
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/10 04:00 am
I love this story *_*
Your LL Cool J reference had me cracking right up, my aunt told me to shut up, because I couldn't stop laughing. XD
Sonnet 145 is actually one of my favorite sonnets, it was great to see it...and I love how perfectly it represented Roxi and Mod's interaction with one another.
Reviewer: copper oxidase Signed [Report This]Date: 10/09/10 08:31 pm
I thought it was nice really. It was a good update. I liked it. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/10 08:21 am
I thought it was nice really. It was a good update. I liked it. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/10 08:21 am
Hum it was a little weird that she was suddenly so into mod. Her emotions seem to shift with every chapter. It is a bit hard to grasp her character.
Reviewer: Fatal Mars Signed [Report This]Date: 26/08/10 07:49 am
This chapter was my favorite. I really enjoyed the detail and the dialog. The main character Roxanne does seem a bit conflicting as far as her personality goes. At first she seemed smartly obedient, but weary and now she goes back and forth between rebellious and submissiveness. Also maybe its just me, but the vamp is not likable. Are they sharing her? Its weird and their seems to be many loose ends that have me wondering.
Reviewer: Fatal Mars Signed [Report This]Date: 26/08/10 07:31 am
I don't like her master. I hope she goes with Mod or I might be sad. I usually don't read story's that include forms of abuse or domination,because it bothers me, but I will continue to give this one a shot.
Reviewer: Fatal Mars Signed [Report This]Date: 26/08/10 06:51 am
I am a fan. There isn't too much I can say about the story as of right now, because my curious mind is working double-time trying to piece it all together. Where is she? Who is Leonardo, what does he want? Good or bad guy? The demon, the two children and, what seemed to be, a third on the way, who are they? Is the woman Roxanne or someone else. I'm just SO curious. So, I shall be reading more.
Ta.
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 26/08/10 02:35 am
Loved it!! Hmmm, wonder if Mod would ever be able to touch Roxi??!! It looks like things are beginning to get interesting. Can't wait until the next update.
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm glad you liked this update!
It does look futile, huh? But cheer up because things are going to get much more interesting...if you think dark is interesting.
Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 23/08/10 03:03 am
great need more mod ....how does rox look is she choc or carmel...can mod get a kiss and why can he not touch rox but others ok
Author's Response:
I agree! More Mod! I'm totally setting the stage for more Moxie action. I promise!
I try to leave character descriptions kind of open-ended on purpose. Roxie can be chocolate, caramel, whichever you like more. It's all about you as the reader.
I guess Roxie could kiss Mod... I get more into why he can't touch her later on. I promise!
Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! Really good questions! I love it!
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/08/10 12:36 am
I really like mod and i am very suspicious of Sam. It is appaent Leo's friends ae as nice as him and seem quite deadly. yes roxie you are in over your head so stay away from sam. I want her and mos to workout but she has to give him a chance!!
Great updt sweetie...moe more more!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked this update.
With Roxie growing more comfortable with Mod, there will be more Moxie interaction. But she is going to have other things to think about and work through.
Sam is an interesting character. It's actually his character that's held me up a lot in terms of writer's block and such. I think this chapter does him justice, though. We'll be seeing more of him.
Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 07:48 pm
I thought that this was a great update. I like Sam he was funny. I feel bad for Mod because he really seems to care for Roxy but not being able to touch her must be hard for him. I was shocked that she did the experiment with him. I think that she is coming around to liking him especially since she was jealous of him having the other woman sitting on his lap. As for Leonardo, what is his deal? What type of business is he in with that racist blob? Thanks
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm glad you liked this update and Sam!
Mod seriously can't seem to catch a break. I wish I had somebody to blame for that...
Roxie is really becoming more comfortable with Mod. I think of it as her having really thought about things and realizing that he's not exactly 'to blame' for anything that's happened. I don't know if that was explicit enough though.
Leo and the blob have issues and you'll be seeing more of that in future updates.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 05:27 pm
Awwww I loved it, hope mod will be able to touch her and soon awww!!
Author's Response:
I'm on it!
I'm glad you liked this update! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cassie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 03:02 pm