I'm so happy right now! It's seems I've missed your previous updates so I had the pleasure of reading three chapters! I'm glad Roxanne finally(!) understood she doesn't have to carry all of Mod's babies, lol! And with that "out" of the way maybe they can finally(!) build some kind of relationship - BUT Leo is still my favourite character, lol! =P and thanks for introducing Sam. Will be interesting to see what he want when they meet later on...

Thanks for the update(s)!

This is the only story so far that i look forward to. i really kind of feel sorry for mod.

Author's Response:

I'm very flattered to hear that! Mod just can't seem to catch a break.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

I'm so happy that you updated. This was a nice quick chapter. It seems as thought a lot of time as passed since the last one. I want to know what's going on with Roxie, and her new feelings for Mod.

Roxie has every right to feel the way that she feels. The man almost killed her. 

Thanks for updating. 

This wasn't that short to me. It seemed like a really good update. I liked it. It was interesting. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: That's good. I didn't want it to seem too short or disconnected. The rest of it seems like a whopper to me. After I went over it again, it was about as long as it was when I cut it the first time. Hope you like the next update just as much. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

Nice chapter! I am anxious for Mod and Roxanne to get more acquainted. I love her unexplainable feelings that she keeps getting, it makes me smile. :D

Please update soon!!!!! 

I still have no idea where this story is going.  I also think its unfair that everyone is pressuring her into liking mod, honestly i don't think she is being unreasonable in her hesitation.

I definitely think you should answer some questions before you add any more twists and turns, because you don't want the story to end on a bad note with too many revelations, that will just make the story seem ridiculous.

But so far good job, it does keep you intrigued 

Aww don't feel that way. The chapter wasn't boring. You provided the reader with a clearer view, of where Leo and Roxie stand. I just don't know how interesting it will be if at some point Leo doesn't start to have real feeling for her.

It sounds like you have an outline, but I find that sometime, trying to stick to it, can cause more harm than good. Try listening to some music, and let your muse take you, where she will. 

Do you know how many chapters you want to write? If not, you need to figure that before you do anything else. As far as the order, don't try to control the story to much, let the characters be free, and see where they take you. : D  Sometimes things come out a bit differently than you though.

If you don't have a beta/editor get one. It's good to have a second opion, so that you don't write something into the ground, lol.

I really like this story, and you're doing a good job writing. My ultimate advise to you, is to just "breathe".

I think Roxi is coming off very confused and somewhat hard to like.

I think her tantrum with Mod was bad behavior and her dislike of him for simply saying he wants to hve kids with him is silly.

I also think her relationship with Leonardo is becoming quite complex....she seems to be wanting to use him to get back at Mod but what did Mod do but be ubber sweet to her and spend a boat load of money on her to make her happy.

Any..Roxie is not  nice person on my opinion right now and I am having a hard time liking her.

I think this chapter was not boring but probably should be part of a larger chapter. The story is getting more complex when it probably should start answering a few more questions...if you ask.

I am all for a long good story but we need a little more action or romance or understanding..I think.

I truley love this story I really do but we just need something more to make us rot for Mod and Roxie ..or Roxie and whomever...ok!

You are an exceptional story teller with a great imagination...I cannot wait for more....so don't keep us waiting too long for that action!!

I think this is a very good update. I didn't find it boring.

So far, everything seems okay. I think you are going at a good pace.

All the chracters seems pretty good. I'm not really picking up on any perfection. They have their flaws seemingly. I can't name them all right now most likely. :D

I don't see Roxanne as a Mary-Sue, but that's just me. She seemed timind toward everyone at first, and it seems mostly against Mod. She has her flaws. She won't just automatically understand a character, for example, Mod or Leonardo. Right? I'm just guessing. This POV is fine for me.

I can understand what you are saying about the story line.  Where is the story headed?  There are a lot of characters in the story.  Right now my least favorite are Mod and Leonardo.  I don't feel that they are really being truthful with Roxanne.  Also the games that Roxanne is playing with Leonardo isn't fair.  I think that she is more attracted to Mod than she wants to be but is using Leonardo as a distraction.

I also don't understand why Roxi has to sleep in Leonardo's room and call him master.  I thought from the beginning that she was purchased for Mod.  But it seems that Mod and Leonardo both are attracted to her.

The people that I want to read more about is Melissa and her mate and their children.

Thanks for a great read.

Glad to see an update. Loving the characters and story so far. Wow, Mod's character seems complex as well as his relationship with Leonard. What exactly is the relationship bwtween the two?? Wonder what Mod will do next??? What's up with Peter???? Why doesn't he want Leonard to know of his presence??? Look forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like what I'm doing so far.

Mod is an interesting character to play with. He's just full of surprises. Right now Mod is plotting and...stuff. I think you'll like it when I get to it. I can't give spoilers! As for his relationship with Leonardo, I think I can make a short story about that.

Peter is full of surprises too! We'll get to that later.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll see what I can do about better explaining the dynamics of Leo and Mod's relationship.

I love the update I've been waiting for an update on this story and you did not disappoint because I didn't find it boring at all. As for who I want to see more of is Melissa, I think Roxi needs a female friend to talk to and help her out with this situation with Mod, and just to have some girl time with. I loved the playful interaction with Leo and Roxi, wonder why Leo was so mad about Roxi being in that room and why Peter is hiding from Leo. Well once again Love the update Oh and I need Mod to stop running from the situatuion and just face it and show Roxi why their meant to be  because every miinute he is gone she leaning more towards Leo and I  know soon Leo's probably not gonna be able to fight those feelings for her, even if Mod is his friend because Leo is very touchy feely.

Please update!

Author's Response: I'm sorry! Lots of things came up. I'll explain when I update this weekend. I already have the chapter done; I'm editing now.