Totally fun story. This brought back memories from my nursing class days.
Reviewer: Kea Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/06/11 06:30 am
That was awesome, Julie doesn't take a hint well does she. I can't to read more about this couple. I love Keegan and that is a cool name.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/11 06:25 pm
Sequel? GREAT story!
Reviewer: Logan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/02/11 01:41 pm
I loved this! I'm a pre-med student and I loved the inuendo combined with the medical terminology.
Reviewer: Aimee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/07/10 05:51 am
I'm actually glad I got to read this as a completed fic because I might have pulled my hair out waiting for updates. I loved this story so much. I was creative and sexy as hell, framing it around a medical exam was genius. The contact felt authentic and intimate and every real.
And I loved the playfulness of the story too, especially from Keegan's point of view. I really liked that guy. He was a nice blend of cocky without being an arrogant jackass, which isn't easy to pull off. And Harmony was adorable and Dana was a perfect choice for her (I love her face. :D )
Anyway, this was a amazing and I'm glad you redisovered your love for writing. I hope to see more stories from you on the site. Thanks so much for posting!
Author's Response: Apologies for taking so long to respond to this review, especially since it was so complimentary! I've always admired your writing since I began reading the fiction on this site so I am extremely flattered that you enjoyed my humble little diversion. Thanks again for the fantastic banner and thanks for reading! Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/02/10 06:47 pm
Now this was a very good story. Original and witty as hell. Thank you!
Author's Response:
"Witty" wow, to me that is high praise.
Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 04:13 pm
Great story . . . I just hope the chase isn't over yet . . .
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
The chase...well, H&K have come to something of an understanding but the chase is by no means over. I plan to give them a more thorough treatment in a future story (when I get a little more time to devote to a multi-part piece). I hope you'll check it out when it's posted.
Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]Date: 08/02/10 05:01 pm
I love this story so much and can't wait to read more about this couple.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! This story was really more of an introduction to H&K (and Julie, who is the subject of the thing I'm working on for the challenge) and I hope to explore their relationship a bit more deeply when I next get some free time. I'm glad you enjoyed this little tale.
[Report This]Date: 05/02/10 05:17 am
Love this story.Oh, how I love Keegan , that damn Julie . But anyway, I can't wait to read more about Keegan and Harmony.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Keegan was loosely based on this instructor we had during my 5th semester of med school: smart, sexy and kinda sarcastic. That is pretty much my kryptonite :p
I hope to pen something that explores the relationship between H&K a bit more at some point but I've actually been scribbling something starring Julie for this month's challenge. I hope I get the time to finish it by the end of the month...
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/02/10 08:52 pm
Great story, I enjoyed reading it and am looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story! I hope to explore H&K's relationship in a longer, maybe less fluffy story in the future, but we'll see how that goes. I hope you'll check that one out when it's posted.
[Report This]Date: 04/02/10 05:06 pm
this was an amazing story i enjoyed it so much and i am happy to hear that it is not the end of harmony and keegan.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I hope to explore what's budding between H&K more in a future story. We'll see if real life will spare me some time to write. Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/10 05:00 am
Awesome and I absolutely loved it!!!!! Look forward to reading more of your stories.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 04/02/10 04:54 am
LOVED THIS!!!!!!! so HOT and cute
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 04/02/10 03:45 am
Cant wait to see what Keegan and Harmony do on the last exam. It seems like they both want to switch roles and steam up that exam room even more that it is already. This is a great story and I am sorry to see it end.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! While this particular exam is going to end, I don't think it's the end for Harmony and Keegan. I'm already outlining the next part of their story, so I hope you'll check it out if/when I post it. Thanks for your review.
Date: 27/01/10 04:55 pm
Loving this story.
It seems that Keegan has bitten off more than he could chew, by being Harmony's test dummy.
But he's no fool though. He's right were he wants to be.
At the mercy of Harmony.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Keegan's pretty clever, setting himself up to get the girl he wants, or so he thinks. We'll see if he's really the one running the show in the final chapter.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/10 01:30 pm
I lloved this before. Love it now. I'm glad that you came back to finish it.
Sooo... she isn't checking the genitals? And he's young, so no prostate. Aaren't men checked manually since they too can develop lumps and cysts?
Damn! I guess they'd both lose it then, huh?
Mental status... Now that's another interesting one!!
Thanks for re-posting and continuing!!!
Author's Response:
Ha, the exam of the genitals - in actuality, it's not really all that sexy (then again, the general physical isn't usually so sensual either) but I'm sure Harmony and Keegan could spice it up. Perhaps we'll see that exam in the sequel...
Thanks so much for coming back to this story and reviewing. I hope you enjoy the finale.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/10 11:55 am
This is so refreshingly sweet! I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Reviewer: Proudly African Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/01/10 08:34 am
I'm definitely, definitely into this story! The chemistry between Harmony and Keegan is off the charts. I can feel the air sizzling around them. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing this chapter! I was hoping to convey the sort of chemistry that was nearly combustible between H & K so I'm glad it came across. Thanks for reading! Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/01/10 04:29 am
Oh I'm excited to see where this goes. Great start!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I really appreciate your review.
[Report This]Date: 27/01/10 03:17 am
I love this story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 27/01/10 02:29 am
Only one chapter left, what do you mean? Surely, you must mean only one chapter of the physical exam, seems to me there's just gotta be more chapters for Keegan and Harmony. This is only a thought but how about an exam of the genitalia does take place in a cold, sterile exam room. Just a suggestion.
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Author's Response:
Well, there is just one more section of the general physical left but I don't think it's the end of things for Harmony and Keegan. As for an examination of the genitalia...Harmony did get pretty close. Maybe next time, she won't hestitate to do a more thorough inspection...
I really appreciate your suggestion. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/10 02:10 am
Me likey!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: 27/01/10 01:59 am
I love this story. I cant wait. Love the tension and her trying to be professional with all that fineness laying in front of her. Keep it coming. Great job. Sorry I havent commented sooner.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you've been enjoying the story and I hope you'll like the final chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27/01/10 01:48 am
“Are you going to finish this examination? Or do you want me you to show you how it’s done?”
Ok seriously I really hope you update soon with leaving us with a clifhanger like this
Author's Response: Oh, that was mean of me but I couldn't resist the cliffhanger. I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Hopefully, real life will relent so I can finish up the final chapter soon. Thanks for your review! Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/01/10 12:29 am
I knew I had started to read this story before and had been loving it. Glad to see it back again.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for checking back to read it! I hope you've been enjoying the story and that you'll stick around for the climax!
[Report This]Date: 27/01/10 12:00 am