Really good story!
Author's Response: thanks! Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/08/10 12:46 am
Please update
Author's Response: This was one-shot. Thanks for the feedback. I haven't made any real intention on growing this one. But if I do, I'll be sure to let you know!
Date: 06/05/10 04:26 am
That kiss was fiah! I wasn't feeling Jean-Paul up until that point. Aaliyah could for sure have done better than a married man with a son. But any man who can make a girl feel like she's just had a Sunday soul food dinner because of a kiss, is alright with me! Maybe I'm a stickler for couples who fight and then end up against a wall still telling each other how much they loathe one another...what? Oh, sorry. I drifted off for a second, haha! I love this though SPAC. Nice job!
Author's Response: LMAO. Renee you're so funny girl. Jean-Paul is an ass. And Aaliyah cared enough to set his ass free. Here he comes reminding her of how he makes her feel. They could kill each other, literally with all of that accelerant. Thanks for reading. And yes, I know I'm slacking on the updates. Distance makes the heart grow. I'm falling back in love with my stories. Updates are working out. Feedback is appreciated. :-)
[Report This]Date: 11/02/10 07:04 pm
Thanks for a great read.
Author's Response: Your welcome D'red. Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 03/02/10 01:47 am
I love Jon B..
Interesting read.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading Renee. Glad you enjoyed it. Jon B. is foine! Reviewer: Renee Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/02/10 04:04 am
It’s always that one guy, that one asshole that’ll make you lose your damn mind and act a fool!!!! Jean-Paul, you fine and all but hell nah, she ain’t down no more…jerk!
Be like Forrest Gump gurl….run Aaliyah, run!!! LOLAuthor's Response: LMAO. so right! thanks for reading! Reviewer: JV4ME Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/02/10 03:46 am
Ok, I admit I didn't like Jean Paul, the jerk and thought Aaliyah could do better. Tough topic but you did your thing. I agree with the banner being the bomb and Jon B is definitely uber sexy. Yeah!! Thanks for the response.
Author's Response: lol...sometimes you have to shut your mind and feel the passion
[Report This]Date: 02/02/10 02:46 am
What an ahole!!! She is stupid, there is no way I would have let that rat bastard in my house. I can't wait to see where this goes. That poor baby doesn't stand a chance with Jean-Paul and Natalie as parents.
Author's Response: LOL. ROTLMAO! Girl you funny! It's just a one shot...it's just...a...one...shot! LMAO. What an effing jerk! I'm telling you. Thanks for reading and for keeping me laughing. Geez, I choked on Twizzler juice.
Date: 02/02/10 02:36 am
Dayum SPAC, the banner is fierce! I love me some Jon B…and that pic of him looks delicious.
Can't read the chapter right now but i will. *smile*
Author's Response: AWE...thanks! Jon B. made it so easy. Doesn't he look absolutely fuckable there. GAWD! My sister called me an hour ago and asked me what was I doing because I wasn't paying attention to her. Said I was staring at Jon B. Oh...he's such an inspiration. And that video! Thanks for visiting and hope you get to peek in on the story. Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/10 01:44 am
Interesting story. Hmmm, I don't know but I got the feeling that he was looking for somethingelse that maybe he couldn't or didn't want from her. He seem to place Aaliyah as second best only checking with her whenever the mood hit him. I don't know if he really felt love for Aaliyah as he stayed married to Natalie and even had a child. Now he's sniffing around her again.
She needs to let him go and move on with her life. He only seems to be pain and heartache to her. I'm sorry but she may still have love for him but is she really still in love or just holding onto the past???? His actions speak louder than words and it doesn't spell love to me, its more like USER.
Author's Response: thanks baha_malo for reading and reviewing. Ha! Interesting huh? This story was inspired by a poster on another board who was struggling with a return of her former lover. I love the song and had been scribing a note or two sense I saw the post. Plus I think Jon B. is uber-sexy. Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/02/10 12:52 am