LOL. Nice beginning.
I like Audre. Girl is not shy about expressing her inner meow. I liked her reflection on first meeting "the other woman." I love Henry's fine self, but I'm sure I won't love Greg. Men! What can I say? Gotta love em. Gotta hold back from strangling their asses!!
On to the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/05/09 07:26 pm
Loved the flashback sequence, espeically that last line. That's gotta sting, just a bit.
So glad you posted, I'm already loving this story.
Author's Response: Thank you TBG! This story was kind of sitting on my chest so I decided to get it off hahaha. Audre is definitely reeling just a bit. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/07/08 04:49 pm
Loved this chapter. Great start. LMAO about that lazy eye bit and you ended with a great line. I'm guessing Audre is gonna get her groove back as her revenge. The best kind. Great job as always.
Author's Response: Audre will most def be getting her groove back. The lazy eyed thing. . .well let's just say writing is a wonderful way to get stuff off your mind, no further comment hahaha.
[Report This]Date: 23/07/08 04:18 pm