Totally brings back memories! My first stories were about N*SYNC, though you can't find them on the internet (thank God). You have great ideas, the only thing I'd say is watch your tenses. There was a point in the first chapter where you were past tense and then there was a sentence in present tense. That's all. Nice job.
N*SYNC forever! :)
Author's Response: Hahhaha lol stick with me kid. Theres still a lot nsync boards around, though many of them just focus on Justin & JC. Thanx 4 reading and your feedback! I really appreciate it! Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/10 11:38 pm
I love any story with Just TImberlake in it. When is he going to find out what Paris does for a living? It will be after they have hot , butt, naked sex right? I love this story!!
Author's Response:
Cant give too much away, you'll have to keep reading!
I have a weakness for JT stories too! Thanks for loving it!
Date: 06/04/10 01:23 am