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Title: 1-The Intro

Me likey......Very interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read it.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/10 03:38 am
Title: 1-The Intro

Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope that you enjoy the next chapter.

 Reviewer: Fanny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/02/10 03:38 am
Title: 1-The Intro

I like the start of your story. I can't wait to see what had them heading towards a possible divorce.

Author's Response: Thanks!1 I am working on the updates and I hope to post them soon.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/10 02:45 am
Title: 1-The Intro

Hey Kelly this was a great start and I am looking forward to see how this advance.  Please update soon.  The flow of the story is very good and I am very interested in Zhay and Dax story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am working to bring you more of their story.

 Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/10 01:39 am
Title: 1-The Intro

I'm a sucker for good premises...and yours hooked me right off the bat...can't wait to find out why they separated...what was this tragedy that tore them apart...did they lose a child...are they unable to conceive...and I can't wait until Dax wakes up and the romance begins again...great start...please continue...

Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked it! I am working on the next few chapters. so I hope to post really soon.

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/10 12:33 am
Title: 1-The Intro

First story? Well that was a great start and I will be checking for the next update. 

Author's Response: Yes ,first story ;-). It has been dancing around in my head for a few months now, so I decided to tell the tale. I hope to update soon. Thank you for reading.

 Reviewer: Penny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/02/10 11:17 pm
Title: 1-The Intro

Interesting.... I love it already. Great way to lure us readers in. I cannot wait for what will happen next.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am working to bring you more.

 Reviewer: Ladeesse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/02/10 10:19 pm
Title: 1-The Intro

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Working on it right now :-).

 Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/02/10 09:05 pm
Title: 1-The Intro

I love this story!!! Who cheated on who?  Did Dax cheat on her or did she cheat on him?  Did she lose baby and it pulled them apart?  i can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! So many questions already :-) you'll just have to keep on reading.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/02/10 07:13 pm
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