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Title: Desolate

Great start. I love your work it is so original. I love Kiss From an Angel as well. It was my first Michael J fic and I loved every chaper. Keep up the great work

 Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/09/11 04:18 am
Title: Downfall

Please finish the story.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/04/11 07:17 am
Title: Desolate

please finish this is a good story

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/04/11 09:54 am
Title: Desolate

I'm certainly greatly interested to discover:  What country is Seven in, was she transported out of America as she herself wonders?  And how can she be continually held in bondage?  I understand one can fear where to run but, just being free of being sold/owned by another, a stranger and a man; is motivation enough to run and presume whatever way you find for shelter and food will be better than being owned at the desires and whims of your owner.  Seven and the other females are held in captivity like stray dogs in the worst of conditions; however, perhaps these inhuman conditions, malnutrition and some beatings or fear of beatings help to temporarily break their will.  Nevertheless, once a woman is sold and her captivity not so confining how can she be kept a prisoner unless chained.  

I hope you continue installments of this story.  It seems not to lapse into the usual cliche that is becoming boring of "girl remaining captive because she falls for a captor who is charming, handsome and generous".  So far these captors are brutal and inhuman like the slave owners during United States colonial period. And Seven although a virgin, is not innocent about the world, she knows it is full of horrible ugly cruelty, including her own drug addict mother who has sold her for drugs.

So it could be interesting to see how this bondage story will evolve. 



Author's Response: Like I said before, I didn't work on this story for a while.. but recently I was inspired to finish it. :) So there will be more, and I hope to answer all your questions soon. Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 10:35 am
Title: Downfall

This is brutally real and shocking.  I realize this is a story of fiction yet human trafficking does happen and now I can see how it can operate,

However, in Seven's case she is not on drugs, its her mother who sold her who is enslaved to drugs.  So I would presume at her first opportunity Seven can run away, especially since she hates the mother who sold her she would not stay merely as some kind of debt penance for her. 



Author's Response: I haven't worked on this story in a while, but wow.. I seen a documentary that was about human trafficking, and a lot of the things I wrote were accurate, which is terrible. It inspired me to write this story, and try my best to be the voice for the women enslaved in human trafficking. It's terrible, knowing that in 2011 people are still slaved and women are misused.

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 09:32 am
Title: Desolate

Insteresting, finish the story.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/01/11 05:06 am
Title: Desolate

I must admit that this is one of the few stories I have read that actual seems original. I am interested in seeing what you have in store for the next chapter. I do have one request. I am not a fan of the banners with celes that everyone here seem to be so found of, but I do appreciate character descriptions. If you can add one that would be great so I can use my own imagination!

Author's Response: you're right... i should get to working on that! thanks.

 Reviewer: Fatal Mars Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 06:23 am
Title: Downfall

I JUST FOUND THIS STORY TODAY!! CAN YOU UPDATE I AM DYING FOR THE NEXT PORTION!

 Reviewer: KeliBoo190 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/07/10 02:29 am
Title: Downfall

I like this already but its sad will you please update soon!

 Reviewer: Cassie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/06/10 06:14 pm
Title: Desolate

Please update. This story is an orginal.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/06/10 04:25 pm
Title: Downfall

I hope Seven is able to get away. As for her mother, she should have been the one they sold into slavery.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/06/10 04:17 pm
Title: Desolate

very good

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/06/10 09:53 am
Title: Downfall

Interesting...

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/06/10 05:26 am
Title: Desolate

This story is so sad so far. Is there any hope for her???

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/06/10 12:53 am
Title: Desolate

Such a bleak and sad beginning to this story.  I hope that Lia's mother died of drug overdose the weak heifer!!!  Looking forward to the update.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/06/10 12:16 am
Title: Desolate

This is going to be a tough one I think.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/06/10 12:04 am
Title: Desolate

very interresting ! update soon

 Reviewer: melanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/06/10 11:19 pm
Title: Downfall

LOVE IT!! KEEP EM COMIN

 Reviewer: Drea Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/06/10 09:47 pm
Title: Desolate

LOOK FORWAD TO THE REST :) PLEASE UPDATE SOON

 Reviewer: omgsums Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/06/10 07:13 pm
Title: Desolate

This is a seriously dark subject. So far you are telling it with compassion and staying away from the obvious salacious details.

There are simply no words for Lia's so-called "mother," the womb. The deprevity of the people involved in human trafficking defies reason or even insanity.

There have been a few similar stories in the news recently that rather disgusted me. The grandmother who traded her granddaughter for drugs and the "mother" who gave her 6 yo to pay off a drug debt.

I'm intrigued what fate awaits Lia and the other women.

I hope that you continue to write and share. Please try to post as often as real life allows. 



Author's Response:

Well... What kinds of obvious details you think I'm staying away from? Some of this story... I planned on like... being memories, things she thinks of. Things she tries to forget. So there's still things that happened to her that the readers will find out.

 

I'm a 15 y.o writer, so any tips you have... Would be helpful. Besides puncuation and grammer. I know I'm terrible with that... lol. And I'll be writing!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/06/10 05:38 pm
Title: Downfall

Continue!!!

 Reviewer: Bella Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 12:29 am
Title: Downfall

Wow! That was intense story -I liked very much! Hope there's going to be more chapters!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 12:06 am
Title: Downfall

Great start, Hmmm I want to know in further detail what its like for this young woman, her surroundings, her enviroment,investigate teh feelings further evoked by her horrific circumstances.

I can not wait to see where you take this. I see great potential for a wonderful story to unfold.

I can not wait for your update.

Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 07:16 pm
Title: Downfall

Please let the person who eventually owns her be nice good looking man . . .

 Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 08:43 am
Title: Downfall

Wow! I know this story is going to be hard core.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Your characters just jump off the page. Thanks for sharing yoru story!

 Reviewer: shereads48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 05:24 am
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