Please finish the story.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/04/11 07:17 am
This is brutally real and shocking. I realize this is a story of fiction yet human trafficking does happen and now I can see how it can operate,
However, in Seven's case she is not on drugs, its her mother who sold her who is enslaved to drugs. So I would presume at her first opportunity Seven can run away, especially since she hates the mother who sold her she would not stay merely as some kind of debt penance for her.
Author's Response: I haven't worked on this story in a while, but wow.. I seen a documentary that was about human trafficking, and a lot of the things I wrote were accurate, which is terrible. It inspired me to write this story, and try my best to be the voice for the women enslaved in human trafficking. It's terrible, knowing that in 2011 people are still slaved and women are misused. Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/02/11 09:32 am
I JUST FOUND THIS STORY TODAY!! CAN YOU UPDATE I AM DYING FOR THE NEXT PORTION!
Reviewer: KeliBoo190 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/07/10 02:29 am
I like this already but its sad will you please update soon!
Reviewer: Cassie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/06/10 06:14 pm
I hope Seven is able to get away. As for her mother, she should have been the one they sold into slavery.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: 18/06/10 04:17 pm
LOVE IT!! KEEP EM COMIN
Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/06/10 09:47 pm
Wow! That was intense story -I liked very much! Hope there's going to be more chapters!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/03/10 12:06 am
Great start, Hmmm I want to know in further detail what its like for this young woman, her surroundings, her enviroment,investigate teh feelings further evoked by her horrific circumstances.
I can not wait to see where you take this. I see great potential for a wonderful story to unfold.
I can not wait for your update.
Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/03/10 07:16 pm
Please let the person who eventually owns her be nice good looking man . . .
Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/10 08:43 am
Wow! I know this story is going to be hard core. I can't wait for the next chapter. Your characters just jump off the page. Thanks for sharing yoru story!
Reviewer: shereads48 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/10 05:24 am
Me likey. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/10 04:51 am
Nice start, please continue
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/10 03:25 am
this one was really hard to read, i already feel for her. great start, i hope you continue.
Reviewer: allnblack Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/03/10 01:00 am
This plot has great potential...the z88 and short paragraphs are a bit hard on the eyes, and interupt the flow of the story, atleast that my opinion. But Im really excited to read more....great start...Goodluck =)
p.s. please update soon *wink* *wink*
Author's Response: YOU'RE RIGHT. I fixed it. thanks. Reviewer: ToriLu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/10 06:04 pm
Excellent start - I'm interested in seeing where this story goes.
Reviewer: katie mae Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 12:42 pm
Interesting start...
Reviewer: Introspection Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 11:59 am
This is a good start. I can't wait to see where you take this story next. Update soon.
Reviewer: Lena Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 11:39 am
You have peep my interest. Continue with this story. Its a shame. I hope she get someone that will good care of her. I never wish harm to anyone but her mom needs her beat.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 08:34 am