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Title: Downfall

Me likey. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 04:51 am

Title: Downfall

Nice start, please continue

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 03:25 am

Title: Downfall

this one was really hard to read, i already feel for her.  great start, i hope you continue.

Reviewer: allnblack Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 01:00 am

Title: Downfall

This plot has great potential...the z88 and short paragraphs are a bit hard on the eyes, and interupt the flow of the story, atleast that my opinion. But Im really excited to read more....great start...Goodluck =)

 p.s. please update soon *wink* *wink*



Author's Response: YOU'RE RIGHT. I fixed it. thanks.

Reviewer: ToriLu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/10 06:04 pm

Title: Downfall

Excellent start - I'm interested in seeing where this story goes.

Reviewer: katie mae Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/10 12:42 pm

Title: Downfall

Interesting start...

Reviewer: Introspection Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/10 11:59 am

Title: Downfall

This is a good start. I can't wait to see where you take this story next. Update soon.

Reviewer: Lena Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/10 11:39 am

Title: Downfall

You have peep my interest. Continue with this story. Its a shame. I hope she get someone that will good care of her.  I never wish harm to anyone but her mom needs her beat.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/10 08:34 am

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