Me likey. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/10 04:51 am
Nice start, please continue
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/10 03:25 am
this one was really hard to read, i already feel for her. great start, i hope you continue.
Reviewer: allnblack Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/03/10 01:00 am
This plot has great potential...the z88 and short paragraphs are a bit hard on the eyes, and interupt the flow of the story, atleast that my opinion. But Im really excited to read more....great start...Goodluck =)
p.s. please update soon *wink* *wink*
Author's Response: YOU'RE RIGHT. I fixed it. thanks. Reviewer: ToriLu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/10 06:04 pm
Excellent start - I'm interested in seeing where this story goes.
Reviewer: katie mae Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 12:42 pm
Interesting start...
Reviewer: Introspection Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 11:59 am
This is a good start. I can't wait to see where you take this story next. Update soon.
Reviewer: Lena Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 11:39 am
You have peep my interest. Continue with this story. Its a shame. I hope she get someone that will good care of her. I never wish harm to anyone but her mom needs her beat.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 08:34 am