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[Reviews - 31]
Summary: John and Evangeline find themselves far from home, not together, but maybe not apart. Can they resolve their differences? (This story takes place starting on May 20, 2007: Evangeline never went to Cristian's studio and is not in a coma. Also, John's not involved with Marty. Other than that, it's canon.)

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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 16641
Read Count: 3411
Published: 28/06/08
Updated: 12/07/08


Title: Chapter 3: Bed

This is getting very interesting. I'm glad they are talking.. Can't wait for the next update

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Date: 03/07/08

Title: Chapter 5: Bubbles

Don't you just love the way this couple talks... great update!

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Date: 09/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 145]
Summary:

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The Young and the Restless Fic: Drucilla Winters has always put her family first, striving to be a faithful wife to her husband Neil and an attentive mother to her daughter Lily.  

But while her charmed life is the envy of many in Genoa City, Dru is haunted by the devastating loss of her first love, ruthless coporate raider Jack Abbott. Though desperate to save her strained marriage, she finds herself increasingly unable to stay away from the man that continues to haunt her dreams and whose heart she destroyed so completely.  

With one reckless choice, another web of secrets will be born and Drucilla will be forced to face the truth about her marriage, the real story of her past, and how she never truly recovered from the pain of losing Jack. 

The Sequel to Loving Dru.



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Categories: Daytime Television, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Drucilla Winters, Lily "Little Dru" Winters, Olivia Barber
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Drucilla/Neil (The Young and the Restless)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: The Love Stories
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33168
Read Count: 9795
Published: 01/07/08
Updated: 24/09/08


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved Dru getting into Ashley's face about Victor.. as if..

I want to believe Jack is sincere.. I so want to.. coming to look for her.. wanting to be there for her..

but there is something to be said for a woman scorned and payback being a Bitch.. I just have to wait and see.. But I am loving the story.. Great Update.. Keep them coming



Author's Response: Ha, ha, I couldnt' resist that Ashely moment.  She's such a hypocrite.  Jack, sincere? Eh--in his own Jack way.  He does want what's best for her, but he's a little manipulative in how he goes about it.  Thanks for the review and the stars~

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29/07/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Jack wants to make things right... hummm be careful with your heart Dru..

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Date: 19/07/08

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

so Jack went to get Dru...  Well Damn

Nice update.. can't wait until the next update!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the stars!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/07/08

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ok I am finally getting an opportunty to catch up with this story. Great Update.. Best part of this chapter -

 "You give him a plane-a fucking airplane. Do you know how pathetic that is?"

Tell lthe truth and shame the devil Kudos Chica

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Date: 24/09/08

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OK First Off - Jerome! you are wrong for that! LOL

Damn did thoes two ever meet a closet they didn't like. LOL

You have the ability to write line that stick with your reader that make your story - unforgetable -

He mumbled against her skin, the words unintelligible until he turned his head to rest his cheek against her back.  "Mine," he whispered.  "You're mine."

Great Update!

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Date: 24/09/08

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ashley is such a bitch. I have a feeling that she was afraid that Dru would find out that she was fucking Jerome!

The Newmans are a tripp..
I guess Oliva forgot to read the sister/sista hanbook.. damn chica!

Hell yea .. you better call Michael Baldwin - Great Update

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Date: 24/09/08

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

ok I had to go and get a smiley for this one - <lmao  "I couldn't understand why he'd go after you like this---did you kick Geppetto or something---"<lmao  that damn Michael.

That said it all. Great Update!

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Date: 24/09/08

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh damn Poor Sharon .. and Jack.. Whoa dude... You not playing.. You don't give a good god damn who knows how you feel about Dru! 

Great user of History - Great Update!

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Date: 24/09/08

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Once a dumb-ass always a dumb ass.. Brad.. anywho enough on him

Loving the flashbacks.. Convo w/Dru and Neil gives us readers some insight on how Neil feelings play an important role in this story and how he got caught up in this whole thing. Even Dru said she was wrong for fooling herself all these years about her feelings. Nice update 

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Date: 24/09/08

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Nice flashback of her years as a dancer.. I say it again, great use of history to bring a real element to your stories. You have a keen awareness of the characters you write.

I heart this - the bluff---their bluff! Nice touch of making something special between them, about them. It made them reconnect!

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Date: 24/09/08

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Damn Mamie won't cut Dru a break at all .. geez

Okay - Hot ass love scene ma'am.. Love the thought of Jack reflecting back to wanting kids with Dru - 

I hope "little dru" is okay - don't play

Love how Jack is taking charge this time -

"Neil will be there Jack," Dru said, slipping into her jacket with trembling hands. Jack reached out and covered them with his own. She looked up in surprise, her eyes filled with terrified tears. Jack kissed her forehead quickly, speaking low against her skin.

"And so will I."

Damn this will be Good! Can't wait - bring it on!

 

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Date: 24/09/08

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

What an awesome story we rock I just want to say Amen for Neil -

"You didn't give a damn about her," Neil yelled. "She did everything for you man-everything and you threw her out like fucking garbage. I was the one that picked her up off that street. I was the one that took care of her when she could barely get out of the fucking bed because of you - about damn time

I am such a sucker - "Let's go help our daughter Dru."  :wise:I'm glad little Dru has the love of her two fathers ..YAY! <yehWhat a happy ending -

thanx  for this awesome story!  notworthyallhail


Author's Response: Hey zeta! Thanks for the review.  And yes, Neil spoke a very big truth there.  I really wish you'd see more of that with him on the show.  Thanks for reading and reiviwing this one.  Much appreciated.

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Date: 24/09/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 142]
Summary:

A Doctor Who/Supernatural Crossover: When Dr. Martha Jones hits a rough patch in her life (her fiancée's been stepping out on her and her confidence in her job performance is waning) she calls on her best friend, The Doctor, to sprint her away, losing herself in promises of far off galaxies and fantastic new worlds. It’s a trip she’s taken before. Only this time, she’s suddenly ripped away from the TARDIS and tossed into a strange car with an even stranger (though admittedly very attractive) man at the wheel, ranting about his missing brother and evil demons. Which was all very ridiculous, because everyone knew that demons weren’t real.

Were they?

Dean Winchester was having a pretty good night for once. He and his brother Sam had killed a nasty demon in record time, and he’d been settling in for an evening of cold beer and hot women. So when his brother disappeared inside some kind of bright light, to say he was irritated would definitely an understatement. He had no idea where Sam was, or how to find him. And now he had some crazy (though very hot) British chick yaking about aliens and time machines, like that stuff was real.

It’s not, is it?



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Horror, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66449
Read Count: 76938
Published: 01/07/08
Updated: 06/11/08


Title: Chapter 1: Character Summaries

Thanks for the bio of the characters.. Off to read!

Author's Response:

Yay! Zeta looked at my story! *Token does a little dance*

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/07/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 58]
Summary:

jason keesha 

General Hospital: Jason/Keesha

Someone is framing Sonny and Jason for the murder of Manny Ruiz. Jason turns to Keesha for help in clearing his name. Will she find the real murderer in time or will she have to arrest the man she Adores?

:) 



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Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Keesha Ward
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jason/ Keesha (General Hospital)
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 7643
Read Count: 19829
Published: 04/07/08
Updated: 13/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: Body Language

What a nice start to your story..You really have a good understanding of the Keesha character... and what's up W/Sonny.. Can't wait until the next update.. Thanks for sharing



Author's Response: Thank  for the review!!! Yeah what is up with Sonny...Lol. I'll try to update soon:)

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Date: 08/07/08

Title: Chapter 2: Mutual Understandings

I see Scotty is still being an A-Hole.. Nice Update..Can't wait to read more..

Author's Response: I love big bad Scotty!!!LOL Thank you so much for reviewing!!!!  I will definitely try to update soon:)

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Date: 08/07/08

Title: Chapter 6: Mexico.

<yeh  Its back.. so glad to see that you updated this story,,, Wow Deacon is the killer,, so didn't see that coming.. Thanks for the update..!

Author's Response:

Hey Zeta Thanks for reviewing!!! I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.

Deacon hates Jason enough to frame him for murder...what Jason hater doesn't? LOL

I'll try not to wait so long for the next update! 

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Date: 14/10/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary: CSI: Miami fic. Alexx learns that sometimes you get a second chance.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 924
Read Count: 2388
Published: 06/07/08
Updated: 06/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh.. that was so cute.. I really loved that story.. You have a good understanding of Alex.. Loving these story... Please continue to write them.. You have a new fan!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/08

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

CSI: Miami fic. Alexx knows this scenario well, but it's never been quite like this . . .

 (Spoilers up thru the earlier episodes of season 6.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 720
Read Count: 2425
Published: 06/07/08
Updated: 06/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

iheartng... Excellent Story.... Great Twist.. You enhanced a side of Alex and gave us some insight.. I can't wait to read more of your stories

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Date: 06/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 119]
Summary:

Todd Manning returns from a dangerous, yet unsuccessful mission to find his son only to discover that his BFF and attorney, Evangeline Williamson, has been cruelly attacked and then snatched away into seclusion by her protective family.  Go on a journey with him as he endeavors to track down the love of his life and faces head on LOVE, OBSESSION, LIES, BETRAYAL, DECEPTION, RACISM, REJECTION, HEARTBREAK, HEINOUS ACTS OF VIOLENCE AND YES, EVEN MURDER.  How can happily ever after be born from this?  Come see for yourself.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Layla Williamson, Other
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 44
Completed:No
Word count: 79449
Read Count: 14468
Published: 06/07/08
Updated: 02/05/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 pt. 1

aww.. I get to enjoy this story from the beging.. great start..



Author's Response: Hey baby!  Thanks for the review!  I REALLY appreciate it.  :)

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 pt. 2

Don't answer it Todd.. Look away from the phone.. look away...

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
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This is my response to TBG's author's challenge.  I've had positve feedback about Yul from Before Nightrise so I decided to give him his own one shot story.  It's basically about a one night vampire stand and the song I picked was "I need you tonight" by INXS.



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Categories: Music, Original Fiction, One Life to Live
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Song Fic Challenge
Series: When Night is Falling
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2968
Read Count: 1212
Published: 06/07/08
Updated: 06/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok that was hot and cute all rolled into one.. nNice job of stepping up to the challenge..  Oh and this line.. "“How very Sarah McLachlan of you"  - Priceless!



Author's Response: Thank you for reading, glad you like the Sarah M. line, she's one of my favorite music artists!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

 

Days of Our Lives: When her marriage falls apart yet again, Lexie Carver decides she’s had enough. Tired of trying to live down the DiMera family name, and the sordid history that comes along with it, she decides to live her life the way she wants, on her terms. And when a very sexy and very young Philip Kiriakis confesses a long held crush, Lexie makes the impulsive decision to throw caution to the wind. And after all, it’s just one night.

 

No one has to know.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, Days of Our Lives
Characters: Lexie Carver
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Lexie/Abe (Days of Our Lives)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 22408
Read Count: 9315
Published: 07/07/08
Updated: 25/09/08


Title: Chapter 2: One

Wow.. what a nice treat.. I would have never thought of these two.. but now I can see his attraction.. and really... no one has to know.. LOL... Nice start.. Can't wait to read more..

Author's Response: Yep, I was going for the unexpected. Plus, if Lexie had to get hot and heavy with someone in Salem, it was gonna be Phillip. I honestly couldn't think of anyone else. Thanks for reading and the review!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/08

Title: Chapter 1: Character Pics

Nice update..Phillip really stepped up...I'm thinking you dont care much for BO?  Can't wait to see where this story is headed. Nice build up

Author's Response:

Hey zeta!

Ummm..no, I'm not a Bo fan. Especially considering how he treats Phillip, that always bugged me. Glad you like the story so far, I think you'll find what's to come interesting. I hope you do anyway. :)

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/07/08