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Member Since: 29/01/11

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The Road to the Altar by Bryleigh Lisette
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 37]
Summary:

This is the third story of the series: Royally Yours. If you haven't read the first two, I highly suggest you do. Certain things won't make sense if you don't..

Harry and Tina are now engaged, just announced it to the whole world. That's the first fire they walk through, how many more can they walk through before they reach the Altar. That's if they even make it there.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Royally Yours
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12831
Read Count: 12743
Published: 03/07/11
Updated: 04/07/11

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- The Black Sheep is Gone

I think that Harry and Tina are rushing in to the wedding. In this chap it was obvious to me that they don't really know each other a lot. Harry has a temper and Tina is very bitchy. They both have some things to work on. I was laughing at the part where Harry punched Marco. The real Harry wouldn't even waist his time on Marco. He would have let the people who works for him solve this problem.

Sometimes I think that Tina is using Harry as a rebound. When he was in the army she kind of cheated on him, she give in to Marco very easily. If it wasn't because Marco was pressuring her in to having sex, she wouldn't have give Harry a chance. I do understand that she is still a kid. But she could have at least told Harry that she was seeing someone. She wasn't honest with him. Harry must really love her, because any other guy would have never took her back or trust her 100% again.

 Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: 04/07/11
Line of Succession by Bryleigh Lisette
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

The fourth and FINAL installment of Royally Yours.

Harry and Tina are now the Duke and Duchess of York after the Queen's decision. William will give two shocking news to the rest of the world causing Harry and Tina to rise up the Royal ranks. How will the Queen react with the future of the Monarchy through Harry and Tina...



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Royally Yours
Chapters: 21
Completed:Yes
Word count: 24920
Read Count: 29362
Published: 05/07/11
Updated: 13/08/11

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Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- The Christening

Love it. I'm sad already for the next story. Just watch out with what ever you have in mind. Since William and Kate can't have any children, Harry and Tina's children are the feature of the monarchy. But that doesn't mean that Harry has to be king too. Charles is first in line and William second with kids or not. I know you want Harry to be crown as king, but truth is he is third in line. British monarchy and rules are very strict.

Just don't make it too unrealistic killing Prince Charles and William just so Harry and Tina can be king and queen. It will make the story a little not believable and it will also take the essence of the story away. There are so much more important things than being a king. Without being crowned Harry is already doing a lots of great things.

This is such a beautiful story just the way it is now. And honestly I like Harry being just a prince. It makes Harry, Harry. LOL.

Its your story tho and its fiction. But I just wanted to point those things out.

 Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: 24/07/11
Stereotypically Yours by Brenda1257
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 398]
Summary:

 

Stereotypically Yours

Matheson felt that VaLysia was just another angry black female when she brought her grandmother to dinner at his mother's request. VaLysia thought Matheson was just another uppity white prick. Neither of them expected the sparks to fly!

 

Stereotypically Yours is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2010 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 45
Completed:Yes
Word count: 171682
Read Count: 299601
Published: 05/08/11
Updated: 26/09/11

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Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Confronting the Past

Okay I'm a little confused. Why is Langston is referring to Emily as Mavis' mother??? Emily introduced Mavis to him as her mother. Not the other way around. He said : "I think you know what. Your mother told me that we have the same father". I think he meant your DAUGHTER told me that we have the same father? Or am I wrong??? Its a little confusing with him referring Emily as Mavis mother.



Author's Response:

This is a clear case of the mind and the fingers not cooperating!  (LOL)  Thanks for catching my error.  I've corrected it.  HOpefully I didn't confuse you too much....

Thanks again!

 Reviewer: Msroos Signed
Date: 09/08/11